Hi person reading this! It's me! Well I want this chapter to be better B-A-C-O-N Spells LOVE because I noticed at around 9:45 p.m. that my story had major problems. DO NOT THROW THE TOMATOES! It was for a good cause! I will tell you this. I needed that alert on my phone saying the review that it showed me. So I made changes! Even if it was at 10:00 p.m. at night!

Fang: Can you shut it already!

Me: NO! TO YOUR CORNER OF DOOM!

Fang: But it is too far!

Me: Then I suggest you get flying. NOW! Or I will get Dylan.

Fang: *Flies to corner of doom.*

Me: So yeah, I don't own Maximum Ride Wakfu resemblance (Yugo. He even wears his hat!) Or Marvel. Only the freaky "Mary Sue" Melody (It was slightly hurtful B-A-C-O-N Spells LOVE.) Aleta, Star, Jade, Flame, and sadly lovesick Crimson are mine. Oh and I am sorry about bugging you on the truth or dares. I'm just going to make them up as I go.

Melody's p.o.v

Oh god, I bet he is doing a dare.

"Dare!" He replied. We are in big trouble.

"I dare you to…Drop all your bombs from the deck!" Nudge screamed. Gazzy started collecting his massive collection of bombs.

"1…2…3 BOMBS AWAY!" Everyone started to run up to the deck. We all saw a big splash of the bombs landing in the pool, and then a big explosion after. It was like the Forth of July! Except it was October.

"That was AWSOME!" Gazzy exclaimed

"Gazzy your turn!" Angel said. I looked around to see no Fang and no Max. I wonder where they went.

I started listening to their conversation.

Max's p.o.v

"Max, why are we behind the hotel?" Fang asked

"Because I need to talk to you." I replied.

"About what?" Fang said.

"Melody, she's like, a freak!"

"So?" Fang asked dumbly.

"What if she is working for someone else? I don't trust her at all. What if she turns on us? What if she tries to kill us Fang! What if she-." Fang grabs my hands.

"I would not let that happen, ok." Fang whispered.

"But, I'm scared." I whispered. I know, fearless Maximum Ride is scared of a freaking 12 year old. And you know what he did! He started closing the gap between us. He wrapped his arms around my waist to get me closer. Oh god, was he going to kiss me? I started panicking. He didn't notice it at all; he finally closed the gap between us. (Nudge: HA IGGY! IN YOUR FACE! YOU HAVE TO PAY ME 5 BUCKS! Iggy: Not if I run! Nudge: GET BACK HERE IGGY! Iggy: NEVER! Dylan: NO! She was made for me! Me: ANGEL! I NEED THE DUCT TAPE, CHAINSAW, AND THE AK47 NOW! Angel: Here you go! Dylan: AHHH! Me: *turns on chainsaw* Angel: *loads up AK47*. Me and Angel: GO TEAM FAX! Fang and Max: YEAH!) My world froze for one minute. I notice we haven't kiss in forever. I was, relaxed for once. I slowly wrapped my arm around his neck to deepen the kiss. It was just me and Fang, until I heard a familiar voice.

"Love birds, stop making out already and play truth or dare with us! Yep, Iggy.

"We better go back in the room." I said.

"Fine." Fang growled.

"Whose turn is it?" I asked.

No one talked. Oh god no. I think Melody caught my expression of confusion, but she looks, sad? She looks at me and walked into her room.

"What's wrong with her?" I asked

"Oh like you don't know Max." Iggy snarled.

"Why Max, Why?" Nudge begs.

"Seriously, what's going on?" I cautiously ask. Crimson starts running at me.

"ARE YOU ACTING THAT STUPID MAX? YOU CALLED HER A FREAK! WE COULD HERE YOU ALL THE WAY UP HERE SAY IT! AND YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY IT HURTS HER SO MUCH!" Crimson barked.

"Crimson I'm so-."

"SAVE IT! SHE LOOKED UP TO YOU MAX! AND YOU TREAT HER LIKE A PIECE OF SHI- TRASH!" Crimson yelled in my face. "I'll go calm Melody down." Crimson muttered.

Crimson's p.o.v

God, why does Max have to be so stupid at times?

"Melody?" I whispered. "Melody? Melody?" Every time I would say her name I would say it louder. "MELODY!" I screamed. Oh god no.

Dear person who is reading this,

I couldn't deal with it all, I am a freak. I wasn't made to live. I had made my mind, I will finish what I was made to do, and then I will end it just as fast. I can't take it anymore! All people see is a freak on the outside, but not one person had the guts to see the bird kid that own the wings. All I get is negativity. No one knows my real background. If you want to know what I'm planning to do, or why I'm not were you are.

Revenge…

She's going to New York, with reinforcements.

Now we travel to the mind of Nudge's p.o.v. Fun!

I decided to see were Crimson was because I wanted to see Melody really bad cause Max was out of line really bad and I kind of had to give back her brush.

"Crimson, where is Melody? Cause everybody is looking for her and then you said that you would talk to her and I don't see her at all so I that is why I'm asking you where Melody is. " I asked.

"Flying to Puerto Rico, and I'm going to get her back." He said popping out his ruby red wings.

"Then I'm going with you." I said showing off my wings.

"So are we, Crimson." Everyone else said with wings open.

"So am I!" Dylan tried to look heroic. He failed, miserably.

"NO ONE LIKES YOU!" Everybody said.

"Well, I'm still going, for Max." Dylan murmured.

"Well let's get packed for the trip." Max commanded. We're coming for you, Melody.

Melody's p.o.v

11:00 p.m.

I start walking to the warehouse. I open it to see everyone just sitting around. I see Star; with her straight bleach blond hair touching her shoulders and her fair skinned body. She is the only non Spanish person here. Next I see Jade, with her black straight hair touching her elbow and her jade eyes, lost in space. After that I see Flame, fiery hair and red eyes made him get his name. I don't see anyone else; I bet they are hiding some where. I guess I'll get them over here.

"Roll call! Girls: Star?"

"Here!"

"Jade?"

"What? Oh, here!"

"Aleta?"

"Over here Melody!"

"Roll call! Boys: Flame?"

"Here!"

"Yugo?"

"Behind you!" He tries to punch me in the face, but I duck and I give him a hard kick on the leg.

"Welcome back, Melody." Yugo said getting up.

"Umm…I forgot, but what are we doing here, Melody?" Jade said. Sometimes, she's clueless, accident from the school.

"We're getting revenge, Jade." Flame said.

"Oh, ok Melody!" God, I don't know how in the world Flame and Yugo survived without me.

"Exactly Melody, where are we going?" Star and Aleta said together.

"New York and yes we are flying there."

"Aww man!" Flame said.

"Oh stop acting like you're 5 and act like your 12 year old self like everyone else." Yugo said.

"Anyway, we should get packing if not already. I have to find resting spots." I said getting my Marvel designed backpack and taking out my map.

"Need some help Melody?" Yugo asked me.

"Sure Yugo, can you find some points to rest while I get some pins?"

"Sure Melody."

I start to search around in my backpack to find something unusual in it. I find a picture of me and Crimson at Puerto Rico when we were 9 years old. I couldn't stand to look at him. I don't know why I did this, but I threw the picture out the window next to me. I was fuelled with this anger for no reason. I could feel Yugo's warm hand touch my shoulder.

"It's ok Melody, don't have to get angry." Yugo whispered. Every time that I would get angry, he was the only one that could calm me down.

"Yeah, you're right Yugo. Let's find some resting points."

Max's p.o.v

Next Day

1:00a.m.

No sign of target…

"Where could she freaking be!" Crimson yelled.

"Like I would know!" Nudge said.

"This is all you're fault, Max! I you didn't freaking say that stupid word, NONE OF THIS WOULD HAVE HAPPENED!" Crimson screamed spitting on me. God, anger issues much?

"Get away from her, Crimson." Fang said protecting me.

"In your dreams, fangels!" Oh no, he cross the line.

"What did you call me?"

"Fangels, F-A-N-G-E-L-S. Happy?"

"You son of a-."

"DON'T SAY IT FANG! MY EARS!" Angel said with Gazzy covering her ears.

"If you say it, you're one too." Crimson said.

"This is not what we are supposed to be doing! So please, EVERYBODY JUST SHUT UP! FOR THE LOVE OF MY EARRINGS!" Nudge yelled, petting her earrings.

"Nudge is right, partially. We didn't come to Puerto Rico for nothing! We came to get back one of us, a 98% Human 2% Avian because of me! So I say we do just that! So let's get searching!"

After my wonderful speech we started looking all over till nightfall, without finding her. It was hopeless.

"Max, can we start making camp, I'm tired." Angel pleaded. I couldn't say no, I was getting sleepy.

"Everyone start making camp. Crimson, can I talk to you?"

"Yeah, what do you want?"

"Well, I was reading Melody's note, um… she said she was going to get revenge. Is that on us?"

"No, it's for… her rapists."

"WHAT? HER RAPIST?"

"Rapists. She was raped by all the men in a gang. I think they were called Demonic Assassins. (I don't know if this is a gang. I just made it up.) They lived in Puerto Rico, and then they moved to New York for new territory to conquer."

"Well we have to help her, right?"

"Yeah, but we should rest. If we fly now, we would be falling out of the sky."

"All right, night."

Melody's p.o.v

7:00 a.m.

Brookhaven, New York

"Are we ready to fly again Melody?" Star asked.

"Yeah we are. Let's go."

As we flew off we all got in our positions. It was me in front with my black and gold wings, Yugo 2nd with mainly sky blue wings and a hint of black on the tips, Flame 3rd with obviously fire red wings, Star 4th with bleach blonde wings matching her hair, Aleta 5th with cocoa wings matching her eyes, and Jade 6th with dark green wings.

A few minutes past by and I see Flame fly towards Yugo and Star to me. What are they doing know.

"Umm…Melody?"

"Yes Star, what is it?"

"Well…umm…it's about Yugo."

"What about Yugo?" She cups one of her hands to my ear.

"He likes you, a lot." Hold it right there! WHAT IN THE WORLD? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?

"He has for a long time, Melody. How can you be so clueless like Jade? Crimson liked you too, which you probably already knew, but it wasn't met to be! Now you and Yugo, its perfect Harmony! (Ha! Perfect pun there!) Think of it!"

"Oh I don't know, Star."

"PLEASE MELODY!"

"FINE! Just once, O.K.?"

"YAY!"

Soon after I found out this was all Flame's and Star's plan. I told them that if they try that again without my permission, they're dead meat. They flew together, holding hands. I'll talk about that to them later.

Bridgehampton, New York

8:35 a.m.

"Hey guys! We're here!" I said pointing out to the huge house. (Link to house: . /15452-the-white-knight#)

"How did you get this house?" Flame asked.

"I have my ways." I responded

"You did not Melody!" Yugo asked.

"Oh yes I did!"

"Hey! I want to know!" Jade asked.

"She turned into a famous person and bought the house!" Yugo replied.

"Cool!" Aleta said.

"We're making this our safe house. So let's move in!" I said.

When we got in, we were in awe. The house was amazing, but knowing this bunch of friends, we have to have rules.

"Everybody listen, we need to put down some rules. Each of us needs to have a buddy so get your partner!"

As soon as I said that Star and Flame grouped, Jade and Aleta paired up, this left me with Yugo. I bet Star and Flame planned this. I give them a death glare and Star mouthed you know you like it. I was about to give her the bird, then Yugo took my hand and bided them together. I still want to kill them, but I calmed down and kept talking.

"Any ideas?"

"Well I guess, stay up until 9:00 p.m.?" Jade said.

"I say 10:30 without anyone around, if more than 3 are around, 11:30 p.m." Flame objected. Then Yugo jumped up.

"Ok we'll have a vote! First one: Jade's." Only Jade and Aleta raised her hand, because Jade was still holding on to Aleta's hand.

"Now we have Flame's." Everyone else raised their hand.

"I see that one was easy!" Flame said.

"Well I guess that's it so-."

"FREE FOR ALL FOR THE BEDROOMS!" Everyone yelled. Because I saw the house first, I knew the best bedroom. There was a perfect master bedroom that seems like a suite.

"Hey Melody, where is the best bedroom?" Yugo whispered.

"Make a right, down the hall, on the left."

"We could just go through my portals?" Oh yeah I forgot, the school made him create portals. (I know, it sounds like his Wakfu character so much. JUST DEAL WITH IT!) They were thinking that he could become a spy. It just went against them.

"Here we go!" He was making portals faster than I can eat bacon! We went by Flame and Star, and then we landed right on the bed with a plop.

"Sorry, it's taken!" Yugo teased. We started laughing hysterically to an angry Flame and a smirking Star.

"God Flame, do we have to get the fire extinguisher again!" I said laughing right after.

"Come on, let's go." Flame growled. As they left we slowly stopped laughing.

Que awkward pause.

"Umm…I'll get unpacking." I said getting my Marvel backpack. Yugo followed and got his stuff. I hear a knocking from the door. Then came in a barging Aleta and Jade.

"Hey guys! We're all going to the pool so come with!" Oh yeah, I forgot I got a freaking house with a pool. Fudge you awesome house. I start looking for a bathing suit. Of course, it's not there. I bet Star has it.

"STAR GET YOUR BUTT OVER HERE NOW!" I screamed.

"NEVER! AHHHHHHHHH!" I bet Star read my mind, not literally. I start chasing her all through the house. Up three stairs, down them all, through the kitchen, in their oh-so-pink-room-that-makes-me-wanna-die room.

"Hand it over Star."

"Nope!"

"We have other plans for you, sit in the chair!" Jade added.

"NO!" My nightmare was going to come to life.

Yugo's p.o.v Oh god…

So as I was going to the pool, I here a loud scream. It must be Melody's nightmare coming to life. I rush down the hall through my portals, luckily the room Melody and I have doesn't have any stairs, so it's quicker to make portals. I find Flame and Aleta tied in a chair outside Jade's and Aleta's room. I quickly untie them and get the socks out of their mouths.

"Melody's in her living hell. And yes, they lock the door." Flame tells me.

"All we can do is wait." Aleta said. As we wait I hear screaming, ripping, kicking, and other wonderful stuff. As 15 minutes past by, we hear dead silence. They must be done.

"And now presenting, our masterpiece, THE NEW AND IMPROVED MELODY!" Star yells through the door. (Outfit on Polyvore.)

Melody's p.o.v

Oh god, what did she do to me? She opens the door slowly. As soon as the door was wide open, the boys' jaws dropped, to the floor. I had to slap them to make them come back to reality.

"Uhh…it's…umm…so…uhh…wow." Yugo stammered.

"Is it that bad?" I asked.

"Here, look at yourself now." Star said with Jade leading me to a body mirror. I could tell the bathing suit fits me, but it's 2 sizes small, so it looks like a push up bikini on the top.

"Well I'm ready to swim, so let's go!" I yelled running toward the pool. I had an idea to try out. I flew up in the sky just millimetres from touching a cloud. Then I flew straight down in the direction of the huge pool. When I was halfway, I folded my wings in. I just curled up and free felled all the way. Splash! I fell right in the pool, making a wet Jade in a pink tankini and a laughing Aleta in a dry green bikini. If Yugo was counting, that's 15 points, 20 Jade, but missed a person -5.

"15 points Melody!" Yugo said just in time.

"Come on Yugo! Jump in already!" I yelled signalling him over.

"Alright alright, I'm coming!" Yugo said before going through his portals. I don't see him after he goes through a few portals.

"Boo!" Yugo shook behind me. We splashed each other for awhile. After the splash war Yugo and Aleta played Marco Polo, and Flame and Star were whispering something.

Star's p.o.v don't worry it's short.

"What day is it?" Flame whispered.

"October 19, why?" I asked.

"Tomorrow is Melody's birthday."

"So?"

"We should do something for her!"

"But tomorrow is Revenge Day!"

"That will be her present! Revenge!"

"If you say so."

"I know so! Now let's go in, it's getting dark." He was right, time flies almost as fast as Aleta. I check the time, 6:35 p.m. I guess we can eat. As soon as we walk in, we here stomachs growling.

"I guess we can eat?" Melody said.

"Let's order some pizza!" Jade screamed running to the phone.

"I guess so." Yugo added.

"Hey Melody, famous person time!" Flame said behind me.

Melody's p.o.v

God who now. I could be…nah already did it. I could try acting famous? Let me try that. As soon as I said hello, there were screaming.

"OMG ARE YOU FAMOUS!" Too many Nudges in the world

"Yes I am. I would like to have 6 XL meat lovers.

"Ok, anything else?"

"Umm 3 orders of breadsticks."

"Anything else?"

"That's it."

"It's on the house, I'll be there soon."

"Thank you!" I hung up and took a sigh of relieve. Now we wait.

Max's p.o.v

Bridgehampton, New York

"Crimson are you positive they are around here?" I asked

"Yep, if she brought who I think, they would live somewhere big."

"Like there Crimson?" Angel asked pointing at a huge white estate.

"Perfect Angel." He responded

"Everyone, to the estate on left!" I commanded.

"Umm Max, do we go through the door?" Nudge stupidly asked.

"No! We go through the door. Of course we sneak in!" I said oozing with sarcasm.

"Oh, Ok Max!" After face palming myself over Nudge, we finally made it to the house. They had a freaking huge house with a freaking huge pool.

"They sure know how to pick a house." Gazzy said starring at the pool.

"OMG MAX THIS PLACE IS AMAZING! GOD I HAVE BEEN TRYING TO BE SILENT BUT THAT IS WAY TO HARD TO EVEN TRY FOR ME! OH AND MAX HAVE YOU SEEN THE POOL IT'S ALMOST AS PRETTY AS MY EARINGS! I LOVE-."

"Nudge! Who wants a pair of shiny gold dangly earrings!" Angel taunted.

"ME ME ME!"

"Fetch Nudge, Fetch!"

"MINE! My precious!"

"I think we should start sneaking in now." Fang whispered going through the window. After we went through the window, we sent Fang to snoop around invisible to see if anyone was around. Once the area was cleared we tip toed to the living room. Big mistake.

Me: *sniff sniff*

Max: CUT IT OUT ALREADY!

Me:*cries even harder*

Gazzy: What is it now! We are trying to do something here!

Iggy: *points to explosive items*

Me and Angel: * cries really loud and harder*

Fang: WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON HERE! I'M TRYING TO GET SOME REST IN MY DARK CORNER!

Nudge: It was the last day of school today, dummy. *flicks Fang*

Fang: Oww…

Me: *sniff sniff* that's why this is so late. I'm sorry… I know it's unforgivable but please forgive me! I also started summer projects, eww, getting the sniffles out, *sniff sniff* , the school musical, and-.

Gazzy: Whoa. Hold on, you sing?

Angel: Yeah she does, and she is amazing!

Me: Really?

Angel: Yea! And if you guys give her at least 40 reviews, she'll even let you judge her on Youtube!

Me: WAIT! HOLD ON A SECOND! JUDGE ME? ON YOUTUBE?

Angel: Yeppers! But it's in the hand of the readers. If we get more yes's than no's on the poll, its happening!

Me: Fine, but I pick the song, it's only a cut of the song, and I don't show myself.

Angel: Fine. So yeah VOTE NOW!