ok luckily for you guys im getting bored of burned so instead of you guys getting bored imma write ya another one or two chapters but there is a twist, my generosity comes at a price I want the minim of 5 review cuz I think i need to be reminded why Im still writing this book, I think I just might end it so at least 5 Reviews please. =)

Zoey POV

I was absolute on bored with this whole immortal thing, I had recently acknowledged I had a serious condition of CSTOB syndrome (cant stick to one boy). I felt as if I could trust this one angel protector of Nyx . "Zoey, Zoey are you hurt answer me please" Draco said now on his feet and grasped me and caressed my cheeks.

"I-Im fine just a little jazzed about, becoming immortal that's all " adding a really cheesy grin

Youre such a moron jazzed seriously zoey modenize your self a bit. "im a idiot" he cocked his head to the side like a confused puppy

"stupidity is not your signature now we must leave my brother is close by do not sift your gaze from me". he graped my hand and in a flash I was on his back, his feathers tickling my bare feet, He turned his head to looked down at the beautiful pool below us.

"what are you thinking"

I knew exactly what he was thinking before he could even leave any hints, but what surprised me next had almost scared the poopie out of me.

"he needs to keep his distance from you, I will not stand for him to claim you, How long do you hold your breath for zoey" he barked the words harshly at me but I didn't take this personally, he sounded cold and protective, but his chocolate voice was still there, and that made me melt inside.

"i dont know"I said honestly.

"it does not matter I swim fast"he said in one big rush.

then the Angel bent down his hands touching the ground, he dug his fingers in to the earth. I heard a growl rip through his chest the sound was the only warning before the Angel erupted into a giant dragon!!!! his wings must have stretch to about a meter bigger than before,and they had muled into demon shaped silver wings. I looked down to see that his claws must be the same size as my index finger and little finger put together he was huge. his scales a beautiful icy silver that seemed to glow a moonlight color. His neck was covered in soft looking scales as well as deadly spikes about two inches big.

He maybe just over a meter taller than a race horse. Then the beast shifted around in a speed I had only witnessed whilst running be sides A-ya, to face the forest he made the loudest roar I have ever heard in my whole intier life, at the dark shadows watching us. This dragon must have been strong I could feel his muscles underneath me. He arched his neck and stood on his strong hinged legs like what horses do, he blew out a cold deadly blue flames from his muzzle , I gasped his scales suddenly at that instant adorned with a unnatural coldness it acutely hurt to touch him. The huge creature whipped his wings creating mini tornado's at the forest,the imact it made on the made one of them fall. Then with a mighty strength the dragon lunched into the twilight sky.

It happen so fast i didn't have the time to scream. I hung on to my life I griped my nails into his neck, the part that wasn't covered in spikes praying to the goddess for saftey. The fierce wind was whipping at my face. Then the scene feel into slow motion as he turned his giant body towards the ground the time sped up again and I got the same feeling when you go on a rollercoster when it suddenly drops down leaving your stomach feeling like its going to drop out your butt. The creature dived bomb towards the magnificent pool.

"no way can we fit, its to small" my mind screamed .

The whole event took place in half a minute, and before I knew it we had plunged in to the cool little pool swimming down and down into darkness deeper into the ground. My mind was so jumbled up It had me reminiscing on what had just happened just to make sure I was witnessing something true. The dragon beneath me was completely engulfed by the dark under water tunnel, it was like sitting on nothing but being pulled downwards I wasn't in control the current was , I was saved from the panic I felt because I could feel him beneath me. I could feel the cold current his wings caused on my face. I could feel his warm Immortal blood flowing along his back.

I closed my eyes to relax. A wave of warmth hit me, then I heard and felt his wings flapping, I felt him fold his wings against his large back. I heard him grunt as if to say we are here. Slowly I opened my eyes, his muzzle inches from my face, he was absolutely amazing the wetness of his scale seemed to make them glow even more, his eyes were the same golden color as his angel form but they had a hint of caring in this mythical creatures eyes.

The creature let out a soft little whine, I slid carful of his back and stood back he stood on his hind legs again.

"dont leave me here" I cried out to him.

he cocked his head to the side unfolded his wings. he hissed at my words and continued what ever it was he was doing. the Dragon blew outta soft harmful flame while flapping his wings towards me, how considerate he is drying me off . Once he had finished He blew more dangerous looking flames out towards a big bolder and it bursted in to tiny pieces. I gawked at the entrance of the cave. I had my back to him then. He nudged me to go forward with his huge head then he steped back and cocked his head again and studied me intently. I looked back into the cave and then to Draco again.

"a cave I get you dont like the earth so your going to leave me here and wait for me outside". I was extremely scared at the thought of being left in a cave by myself. I turned my back on him and let a huge tear flow down my face.

I felt him at my side again the from his body heat brush my arm causing my hairs to stand up.

"you are weeping?" I did'nt look at him, he whipped away my fearful tears.

"I am not my brother though I have to admitted to being repealed by the Earth, but that will not stop my task I will stand by you Zoey even if we are to go further into this earth" he said sounding truly like a worrier, He made me feel so safe.

The creature of pure goodness steped in front of me and guided me down a dark blue hallway it was glowing with crystals. He glance back over his shoulders he must have noticed me gawking at the moonlight stones.

"A gift from Selene to Nyx". he said with a hit of humor in his sexy voice.

"there beautiful" they really were.

"they are here to give light to the darkest tunnels, I was the reason for this gift now Zoey we must continue" he had a slight hint of irritation in his voice. But I loved the way he said my name.

we continued down the path in silence, till we stop at ancient arched doorway. Covered in ancient writing

"we are here behind this door lies your power, I will open it for you step back Zoey"

he turned to face me his voice filled with joy he winked and added a sexy smile, I think I just died and was resurrected, it ani't impossible I did it before. I couldn't help but smile back at him. Draco turn from me and recited the ancient writing around the doorway.

" Es bailes nav ļauno,Es dzīvoju tikai ņemot vērā Es lūdzu gaisma, kas aizpilda mani iekšā, labi, ka plūsmu caur manu viens, es esmu savu aizbildni gaismas

Tā ir mana tiesības caur manu nemirstīgs asinis, lai izsauktu šo varu attiecībā uz pašu patēriņam, iedodiet man acess šo kameru, es aicinu šo tikai kā labu"

The giant door opened he beckoned me to go to him.

"what did you say that language has a wonderful way of words or is that just your voice" I said trying to sound flirty with him.

he chuckled " I had just said;I will fear no evil,I live only in light,I ask the light that fills me inside, the good that flows through my own veins, I am my own guardian of is my right through my immortal blood to call this power for my own use, give me access to this chamber, I ask this only as a favour "

we enter the chamber together he took my hand in his there was a huge hole with fire flaming out of, he stopped short he must of felt me get tense.

"protection from evil , the gods casted this pit in this room, the flames led straight to the lare of the Gods Hephaestus and Hades. for If evil is to touch this room they will parish in the underworld."

He took me into his arms and lift us over the fire and onto the small ledge there was nothing but dirt I tried hard not to look down. Draco looked so preocupied I let him work without saying a word he had bent down to uncover dirt on the floor, he spread his white wings making them beat against the hot air.

" nosaukumu, kas šo seno telpas ko Gods radītāji šo kameru un manas tiesības kā Nxy Worrior iedodiet man acess, lai dāvanu varas nosaukumu autori" he ened the comadedment with the voice of ancient god, the walls echoed the power in his voice.

"come forward Zoey Redbird" He had stood up.

Without a word I approached the immortal , he had some kind of blue spirit thing glowing in his hands,it radiated its own light the color of the sea. I diverted my attention back to Draco The immortals winging were radiating its own light, he truly looked like a God handsome and powerful.

His eyes were glowing with golden lust. His smile was beyond sexy.

"and you shall be my own goddess" his voices raspy and seductive.

I could'nt help blushing at his statement.

"you and I will become the same we shall live forever, in the other realm and in this realm, do you still want the same title as I have claimed Zoey Redbird?" he was still speaking as a would have god.

"yes" my voice more than a little shaky of knowlage of the coming events

"the power I hold will grant only a mortal immortality that I am sure of, but I do not know of what else the series of power will give to you"

he was gazing into my eyes borrowing into them.

"so I will get a whole bunch of powers I have to discover on my own" Ohmygoddess was all I could think of. he nodded but still held his gaze.

"I choose to live a life of immortality Draco please give it to me". I stared back at him his eyes were now practically glowing a beautiful gold I had ever seen, they sparkled with protectiveness, with want. he glided closer to me,with a cold seductive burn radiating from his skin. I moaned on in the plesure i felt from his skin

"open your mouth let this power flow to your heart"

I did as I was told and he poured the blue powerful ball in to my mouth, then sealed my mouth with a soft kiss crap!! the one time he kisses me and I cant even feel it,there was no taste It just left my throat a dry and really pain full pathway to my heart. All I could remember before my lights went out was the thought of what my new magical life would give me.

I woke up in right next the small pool Draco was beside me I could senes him. My Vamp eye sight had improved to an extreme I could see the detail of the trees leaves yards away from where my body lay.

My hearing had improved I could hear Draco's heart beating behind me, then his touch confirmed me that it was him.

"You have awaken Zoey, you have a lot to discover of your new immortal appearance" he whispered into my ears.

I moaned "Draco how long have I been asleep" He gasped at the sound of my voice I did too " half a day my Zoey, now take a look at you" I had not risked the look at him, so I literally crawl to the pool to stare at my air quote 'new me' surely I hadn't changed that mu-

"ohmygoddess I-I'm so different" my voice consumed by shocked

"not different beautiful" he was behind my but not that close so I could see his reflection.

My face had completely changed first of all I had the same sun kissed skin as any of the Immortals I had laid eyes on, it was a beautiful bronze color, I knew that all the white girls would envy me now that made me laugh, the sound was sweet high but sounded like a birds song as well.

I could not describe my new features, but when they mixed together to form my face it was a work of art brought to life, an angel in my own way, my eyebrows weren't the same shape as well every thing about me had changed, I had completely transformed. I know longer had my mortal green brown eyes, instead what had replaced them was a soft liquid gold, that you couldn't not notice.

Tears spilled out of my, the beautiful stranger in my reflection coped my inabitiy to control my emotions.

He kissed the back of my neck all the time telling me how divine I was. I sat up on m butt to face him. He stared into my eyes.

"I had not had a chance to view your eyes till now you are remarkable Zoey".

He sat up next to me this time it was my turn to kiss him, my CSTOB kick in as so as my lips met his. The kiss was soft but I wanted more I needed more, he granted my wishes and depend the kiss, it was nothing I had even felt before sure Heath, Erik and Stark were good at kisses but this was more.

He gentaly grazed his hand down my back and under my shirt, I felt him moan as I rubed his stong muscular chest. I pushed he down onto the soft grass beneath us.

"You dare lay your hands upond my love!!" his words snapped through my heart no this cant be why, why was he hear. Draco jumped at the Sonorous sound and before I knew it I was up on my feet and running with my new found speed towards the safety of the trees.

"you have no business here brother away with you" Draco said calmly to the fallen angel.

"she is my business never call me brother!!! he spat the words at Draco.

Draco stared up to me I could not read his expression damn I had to get good at that "make no sound Zoey"I can read minds!.but that though was disported when Kalona stalked towards Draco and stop two feet away from him. They were the same height.

"You would fight me over a mere girl Brother, is that what darkness has corrupted you to think , to fight a brother over a child?" Draco stood tall and raised his chin and met Kalona's eyes.

"Not a child but a simply teenager, never call me brother!" he hissed at Draco

Kalona transformed into a dark dragon pure black, darkness pulsing in the air around him leaving a dark trace from the movement he made, the beast called into the sky "The raven is only one form I have allowed mortals to witness your grandmother was correct about that my love but it is not the only form I can shape into My love" His voice was twisted with pure hatred but I could hear him try to make it sound more welcoming.

remember do not make your self seen by his eyes

Draco let out a high deafening screech and sifted into the silver dragon with the moonlight scales. The two dragons circled each other "you really wish to challenge me Draco you do not know of my strength" his voice mocking and cold.

I tried hard not to make my crying sonorous enough for Kalona to hear, the dark dragon whipped his tall into the sliver ones eyes, then swiftly bit into his neck, making Draco scream out in a horrendous terror from the pain, I had to gasp my hand over my mouth from screaming.

His blood spilled out of neck onto the grass, creating a pool of dark red blood, but he continued to fight he bit down hard into the dark dragons leg. Kalona hissed at him and blew out red flames at Draco then he launched into the sky. Draco glanced at me cocked his head to the side I really loved that then folowed Kalona .The two of them were like lighting they flew back and forth hitting each other with there flames.

Finally my hero fell to the ground and crumpled there shaking. I couldnt help it

"Draco !!" I screamed he found me instantly and let out a whine I of fear,

Kalona landed gracefully to the ground bared his sharp long teeth at Draco, then lifted his huge paw and crashed it down on to Draco's head, the dragon cried out in agony and slashed his long razor sharp tale on Kalona's hind leg. The dark dragon stumbled back at the blow give the silver dragon enough time to get to his feet.

The both of them stood there breathing hard and fast, they synconized there roar's and ran straight at each other, there heads slammed into each other causing a loud sound of a broken neck. But still they didn't stop. Draco in one fluent move bent under Kalona and head butted his chin causing the dark dragon to be throne of balance, but the dragon did remain that way for long in seconds, kalona recovered from the blow twisted round way to fast and bit down hard in to Draco's right wing and snapped it, The dragon screamed in the pain, then I saw a tear role down his cheek.

You dont have to watch this, you have the power to stop this so do it.

I tried my hardest to sound strong and I was sucsessful

"enough" my new voice boomed out my mouth.

do not let him see you Draco's voice warned me.

I lifted my hands out in front of me spreading my fingers, thinking only on ways to stop Kalona from hurting Draco any more.

Then it happend I consentrated on protecting the wounded worrier when my hand began to glow a purple, and mist was dripping out of them, no I cant be evil.

The mist floated in to the air in a split second and froze the time it consumed trapping the sliver dragon and dark in a frozen picture.

"Draco my worrier" Nyx was running towards the frozen picture,she stoped when she saw her fallen worriers monstrous form.

Zoey come to me my immortal child.

with my new found speed I ran to the goddess, she hugged me tight against her then let me go.

"you have done well daughter, but what you just called to you was the basics of your powers, you have much to discover" her exprestion went cold,

"Kalona my fallen worrier you have disobeyed me" I heared him say

you bitch nyx I hate you, as for you my A-ya I will have you. she flick her fingers towards the dark dragon and he disappeared.

"is he" my voice weak I remember that Draco was still frozen and I put my hands up again, and the mist extracted back into my hands, the dragon laid weak on the ground panting in short breaths. Nyx ran to him and her touch seem to make him better.

"I banished him again he has no way of entering this world again". She was weeping but she whipped her eyes dry.

"I am not weeping for Kalona I am weeping for what I now have to do" her eyes met mine she was truly sad for what ever she was going to do. I took a step towards her to comfort her, but she raised her hand to stop me. The goddess whisper to her worriers ear.

" I watched you Draco, from the centuries ago that you have sworn yourself to me, waiting for a sign for you to show me that you needed freedom"she paused.

"you do not want m-me as your worrier Goddess" Draco said in short breaths again but it wasn't the physical pain that made him like this it was the fact that he fought Nyx was rejecting him.

"I so dearly want you to stay with me but let me finish, you are bound to live forever, you would spend an eternity protecting me, you may have said yes before today but, I know now you would ponder on that statement". she took a deep breath. and he waited for her to finish.

"you are in love with my newly immortal daughter are you not Draco" she didnt frase it like a question but he noded, she looked up at me and smiled,

"zoey you can now be truly loved by someone who will not parish, and the same for you Draco" a tear dripped from the goddess face.

we just met I thought.

"And I know that I give my worriers free will, and that means the will to love" her voice was emotionless

"I am allowing you the chance to have the love that me and my consort feel"

Draco transformed back into the immortal angel,his eyes searching mine but he spoke to nyx.

"you are allowing me to love her even though I am protecting you" she caressed his cheek drawing his attention to hers

"no my worrier if that were to happen you would not truly be happy, then you will find your self being distracted and I would be in trouble, I can not allow that to happen. I am your goddess your lady to whom you have sworn to protect me but, i will now release you from ower bond and let you be free, Draco my worrier" she bent towards him and kissed his heart.

his eyes widend with shock I saw relife in his eyes before she lifted her head from his chest.

"you are free now Draco live your life" he smiled at her and a tear dripped out of his eye.

he turned to me and I took his hand in mine. Nyx smiled a wided joyful smile. she was all I saw before mist began to cloud my vision and then I was lying in a small hospital like room. Listening to the sound of my friends soft snores.

Ok yes I know this chapter was a bit sucky and I could of describe it a bit better but it will get better I promise any ways like I said before y'all better write at Least 5 reviews, gotta say this was the longest chapter I had ever writen