Me: O.k. first off I will say this…Thank you to the reviewers who were able to clear up the whole Hachibi thing. I was unaware of the identity of the Hachibi so thank you for those who told me. Also just a quick heads up. Now I watch Naruto when I get the chance, and I will read a little of the manga, but that does not mean I know how everything happens, the hachibi for example.
Naruto: This is another reminder that the Snagiyo in this story is the author's alter ego not the author himself.
Snagiyo: That's right I'm my own kickass self, so screw you ya damn critics.
Me: Snagiyo please refrain from offending the readers.
Snagiyo: Ha, like there is anything you can do about my offensiveness. I am apart of you so if you try anything on me you will only hurt yourself.
Me: Is that so (draws a sword out of nowhere)
Snagiyo: Oh, so that's how you want it eh? (Draws his own sword) All right then, shall we dance (bows in formal fashion)
(Battle in the background)
Naruto: Uhhh… well while there of being idiots I guess I'll take over. Snagiyo Sumara, the author not the character, does not own me or anything else of the Naruto enterprise.
Me: AAAHHHHHHH THAT WAS MY FAVORITE COAT, YOU SON OF A BITCH, DDDIIIIIIEEEEEEEE.
Snagiyo: HA HA HA, AAAHHHHHHHH WHAT THE HELL, MY SHADES! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THOSE COST; YOU ARE SO PAYING FOR THOSE.
Legend
"Speech"
"Thought"
"Mindscape"
"Jutsus"
"Demon/Summons"
Somewhere outside Konoha's walls
A man was looking over Konoha from top of a tall tree outside the gates. His appearance was simple. He had black hair that also seemed to be tinted with midnight blue, he had black colored eyes that were as dark as night. The rest of his appearance hidden from view by the black hooded cloak that he wore, which had the hood down now "Hmmm, so this is Konoha. Funny I was expecting something a little bit more interesting, instead it's rather dull" Said the man from his branch on the tree. "Oh well, It's better than nothing I suppose. I've been getting bored anyway." the man said "I wonder where those siblings of mine are?" "Well" said a new feminine voice. "I was out scouting the village and nii-san, the last I saw, was in the woods trying to entertain himself" the man sighed hearing this
"I swear I should have never taught him the art of our kekkei genkai. (No idea if I spelled that right) He treats it as if it were a mere toy." The man said as the girl stepped into the light next to him. She had dark blue hair, her eyes were black like the man's, she also wore a cloak, except hers was grey "Actually Onii-san, wasn't it the elders who made you teach him the art." "Yes, that another reason I feel that we made the right choice to leave the clan when we did" "The councilmen were fools to think they could control you Onii-san, besides they only saw our art as a weapon, they fail to see how much it can actually help us and others."
The girls Onii-san smiled at his sibling she was like him, trying to find a way out of a situation with as least violence as possible. "You know Sumiko, I am very proud at how you've turned out" the girl looked at her brother with a look surprise and confusion. "throughout our entire ordeal, through the ways of our clan to when we went to a life as nuke-nins you have never let that falter your out look on life nor your innocence, and I will do everything in my power to protect you, and see that your dream is achieved."
The now identified Sumiko look at her brother in surprise.
"Onii-san" Sumiko said to herself. "Ahhh how touching, I think I'm going to be sick." "Hey shut up" Sumiko shouted "and where have you been Kaosu?" Asked the man he turned to glare at the person. Said person walked into the light.
He had deep blood red hair, his eyes were an equal red, although thee were a few veins showing in his eyes. His outfit was visible unlike the others. He wore a dark red vest with a hood, under that he wore a fish net mesh shirt that covered his torso and went to the middle of his forearms. Where his forearms would have been exposed he wore some type of gauntlet that had an engraved image of the shinigami with a person being skewered in front of him by a blade, it also had what looked like human souls surrounded him. In the center of the gauntlet was a link that connected five different chains that went to his hands. On his left hand, three of the chains were connected to three rings, with jagged spikes sprouting out of them, on the thumb, third (ring finger), and pinky, while the two other chains connected to two steel claws on the index and middle finger. The gauntlet on his right hand was the same, except the two claws were on the middle, and ring fingers, and what seemed like some kind of cloth wrapping on the palm. He wore black ANBU pants with a chain belt that also wrapped down his thighs. He had a kunai holster on his right and left thigh, and black combat boots with a red trim. He also had fresh bloodstains on him.
"So Kaosu, I see you've been hunting again." "He he, what can I say, you two should know that I can't help but enjoy a good hunt. Not that these vermin can really put on much of a hunt." Kaosu replied.
Sumiko shook her head and stared angrily at her younger brother. She just hated how he completely abused their bloodline. The man just stared at his brother in pure disappointment, he let himself be completely become took over by his bloodline to the point that he was just a bloodthirsty maniac.
"So when do we get to wreck some havoc?" Kaosu asked.
"We're not here to cause destruction. We're here to simply gather some info from an informant that I have stationed here. That is all." The man said
"Tch, you've gone soft Zane. You're just as worthless as Sumiko." Kaosu scoffed as he started to walk away. "Well, now I'm bored I think I'll go for another hunt, before we-" he was cut off as he was forced to a knee. "Kaosu" Zane said as he turned to face his youngest sibling. "I think you forgot the one who taught you to use that power of yours, or have you forgotten the difference of our power?" Zane questioned. Kaosu tried to move his body, but he couldn't, he was lucky enough to twitch his eye let alone move an arm. Then all of a sudden, his body jerked itself to a standing position and turned around to face his two older siblings. When he was fully turned, he gazed into his brother's eyes and saw that they had changed. Instead of their night black color, the entire white of the eye was blood red, the iris became very thin, and the pupil was dilated and turned a deep purple. "T-t-the Chishiogan" Kaosu stuttered.
"Kaosu, now I've been letting that attitude of yours slide for a while now, but my patience is wearing very thin." Zane said. Once he said this Kaosu started having a hard time breathing, it felt like someone was trying to crush his windpipe. "And you would do well to remember your place, and also that I can still kill you no matter how much you've advanced in our art" To emphasis his point he made Kaosu slam himself face first into the tree in which he stood. "Also it would be wise not to insult me or your sister. Understood"
"………..Y-yes, Onii-san." Kaosu answered from the ground. "Good, Now I'm going to go scout around the gates. Sumiko You try and get into the town and do some snooping around, Kaosu your coming with me, Understood." Both siblings confirmed his order. Sumiko went to the village to do as she was told, while Zane and Kaosu went to scout around the gates.
Back in Konoha in the warehouse.
It took about thirty minutes for the shinobi to regain consciousness. Once hey woke up they found themselves at the same warehouse just a lot father into the building. There were crates everywhere you looked and there were others in the room with them, but it was too dark to see who they were.
"Ah good your finally awake. Man it took ya long enough, oh a by the way ya got a little bit a drool goin on there." said a voice. They looked to see who it was to see Duko sitting lotus style on one of the crates "ummm, where are we exactly" "your in the cargo room of the warehouse." said a new voice. They saw the man from the warehouse entrance. "Sorry if I scared ya. It's just been a while since I've been able to pull a gag like that on someone, and I just couldn't resist." All he received was a death glare from the three people in front of him making him shift a little nervously. "Anyway, back to the business at hand. I had Duko hear bring you here for more than to scare the living shit out of you, No I have more important business than that." Snagiyo said. "Ummm, before you start could I ask something" Snagiyo turned his head to look at Hinata. "Shoot" "Ummmm, well I always thought that the hachibi was a giant Ushi-Oni"
When the man went to respond his eyes glazed over and he responded in a hiss. "Don't remind me. Seriously, why would you people put him in the eight-tail seat and not me? I mean honestly I was just as good if not better than that fool."
It was true the real hachibi was a giant Ushi-Oni, or a demon with the head of a bull and the body of a sea animal. (I believe that's right, or at least pretty close.) Yamata was a candidate for the position, but in the end, he was denied.
"And now look at him, not only has he lost one of his horns, but he's been sealed into a vessel. Plus he doesn't even have tales all he has are those damn freaky ass arms or tentacles or whatever the fuck he calls them, and another thing-"
As Yamata continued his rant, Duko was conversing with our three shinobi. "Well as you can see when ever someone mentions anything about the real hachibi, he tends to go on this little rant; he'll probably realize nobodies listening in about thirty minutes from now."
"That ain't no shit. Back in Makai When he found out he didn't get the position he ranted for years, it got really bad when ever he got drunk." Kyuubi said from his cage. Naruto mentally chuckled at the fox's comment.
"Any way back to the matter at hand. As Snagiyo was saying earlier, you were called here for a reason. As your already aware, there is an organization who are after all of the jinchuriki for unknown reasons, called the Akatsuki". The three nodded grimly at this information as it was quite well known to them.
"Well, what if I told you that there was another organization after them and others." The three nin gasped at that bit of info. It was hard enough keeping the Akatsuki at bay. But now someone else was out there. "What you can't be serious, its hard enough keeping the Akatsuki at bay, now we have someone else to worry about" Naruto exclaimed……Wait? Didn't I just say that? "Unfortunately yes, I can also tell you that these people could give Akatsuki a good long run for their money, they call themselves……Sin."
"Sin?" Temari questioned. "Yes, while not a lot is known about these people, I do know that they operated nothing like the Akatsuki. For one they don't have any damn uniforms that they are required to wear, they just have certain trinkets symbolizing there membership with them" Duko stated. "And trust us, they are not to be taken lightly. These guys, are way beyond anything you could come to expect from any of your usual opponents." "Oh, Snagiyo your back nice to see you how was Snaky's rant" Duko asked "Long winded as ever."
"Okay, enough of the talking, so what was this proposition you brought us here for?" Naruto questioned somewhat annoyed.
"Straight to the point huh?………..Very well……. My proposition is this."
Me: CLIFFY NO JUTSU!!!!!!
Naruto: GODDAMMIT!!!
Me: I know right. Well this is the latest installment, I've believe I've got someone for a BETA so I might be able to get these in quicker hopefully.
Naruto: god knows you need to.
Me: SHUT UP. Look I'm sorry that I'm slow, but I can't help it. I wander if maybe it would help to have a laptop…… Eh.
Snagiyo: Ummmm isn't there something you were going to say to the readers?
Me: Ummm, sorry for being slow?
Snagiyo: No, the other thing.
Me: Oh, right, O.K. I've got a poll on my account for my Clan of the Eclipse fic. If any are interested go vote……And I really need a translation site. I keep looking, but nothing works for me. Well I think that's it.
Ja Ne.
