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Hi! I'm back and stronger than ever! I received a good respond from some of my favorite fan! If they don't mind I will show their reviews!
Starthevampire
2009-07-05 . chapter 2
That was a really good chapter. Edward asked a really good question of himself. I thought it was funny that Charlie knew it was her because she fell. I love Transformer's 2! It was such a good movie. I personally thought it was better than the first one but my family said i was crazy. Jake really asked that question at such a random time. I cannot wait until the next chapter to find out what happens. Well I have the general idea but still. 8D
Starthevampire
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Well another one of your stories has now caught my interest. I don't know how you manage it. Jeez Bella was mad though. Way to be forceful and stand up for herself though! haha. Ann sounds so cute. I know for a fact that dogs do not like sunglasses. It makes it harder for them to see I guess. Oh, and dogs don't like phones either. At least mine doesn't. I know my friends doesn't mind phones. Anyway, I love the comment about Alice had about the stapler. It made me laugh. Also the line where she said she was so happy that she could spit. I can honestly say I have never heard anyone say that before. Did Edward not see how mad he made Bella or something? Well, she did say she acted all nice to him all the time. So I guess that would make sense. I think I just answered my own question. I really want to know what happens now. It sounds like it is going to be a really good story. And I love the click me sign over the review button. You arranged that perfectly. 8D
Frightening Little Monster
2009-07-06 . chapter 2
Wonderful, you really do have a large amount of talent. Please update soon! :)
-Frightening Little Monster
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Thanks and keep reviewing! Every now and then the Fate Sisters will pop into the story in third person with at the TV. All pictures are on profile, including Ann for the readers that didn't see it yet.
The Fate Sisters:
Starthevampireas Jess Fate guardian of the future.
ihatejacob1asStacey Fate the guardian of the past
JustBellaas Taryn Fate guardian of the present
Now on with the show!
Previously on Tainted Love!
Right as we finished the door bell rang.
"You get going and I'll do the dishes." Charlie said as he removed the dishes from the table.
"Ok, bye dad. I'll be out late so don't wait up." I grabbed my coat and purse as I opened the door.
"Hey, Bella you ready?" Jacob asked as he kissed my cheek.
I nodded and we climbed in to his Volkswagen Rabbit. He was very proud of his car seeing as he built it from scratch when he was sixteen. We drove to the movie theater in silence. Jake broke it with a question I never would have expected from him.
"Bella, are you sleeping with your boss?" He asked with a cold look on his face.'What! The! Hell!'
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Tainted Love
Fate
Bella's Pov:
I stared at Jacob with wide Shocked eyes. My mouth was so wide you could probably drive a hummer Jeep through it. He looked smug thinking my reaction was conformation.
"What do mean; 'Are you sleeping with your boss!'" I asked a bit insulted. I was shock beyond belief. He knows how much of an ass Edward Cullen is! "I hate his guts!" I practically hissed. We were in Port Angeles now and almost to the theater.
"If you hate his guts so much why haven't you quit!" He had pulled over by this point. He was fuming now but so was I. "Not to mention the way he looks at you when you're not looking. He looks at you like your something to eat!" He slammed his door open and climbed out. I followed him and all hell broke loose.
"He treats me like crap! He treats every woman like crap. The only women he treats with respect are his family members and old ladies! I AM NOT SLEEPING WITH HIM! I am still a virgin for the love of god." I whispered the last part, slightly tearing up.
"Then explain to me why you still work for such an ass wipe! If you're not sleeping with him he must be giving you something! What does he give you?" His usual tanned skin was red with anger.
'Jacob, what is happening to you?' I thought to myself as my heart began sink.
"I quit at noon today. He insulted me and I snapped. I told him to fuck off and left. He gave me nothing." He seemed to calm down but made a one eighty turn.
"You're a lying slut!" Next thing I knew I was on the ground with my right cheek burning. That was the first time Jake had ever hit me. I looked up at Jacob with wide shocked eyes. He was shocked to looking from his hand to me then back at his hand again.
When I could finally speak I stuttered out, "W-what i-is wrong with you!" It was more of a sob.
I held my throbbing cheek and I winced. He tried to speak but he just looked like a fish gapping is mouth opened and closed. He stopped trying and just ran to his car. He through my purse out and drove off leaving me alone on the side of the dark road.
When I came out of shock I pulled myself up and grabbed Samsung SCH-u706 Muse cell phone out of my now wet purse. I had no bars in this area so I started walking to Rosie's Diner just a few blocks away. I hope she was there tonight. I pulled my coat tighter to myself to fight the cold as I walked.
Third person:
Three sisters lay in their living room bored to tears. After centuries of controlling and meddling in peoples live it gets boring. Well the Fate sister's were really bored. The sisters haven't had a good meddling session in a long time. They were about to get that chances. At that moment the alarm started to ring. The alarm meant that someone was going off the path they where destine to walk.
Taryn the guardian of the present, turn on the plasma screen TV to reveal a woman walking down a street with a bruised cheek. In the background you could see drunken men stalking her. (The TV is a painting when it is not used. Picture of the living room was removed from the address I had on profile. The briefing room from charlies twilight angels is similar so use that image.)
"Hey, get her file, now! I don't think she's supposed to be gang rapped." Taryn screeched to her sister Stacey the guardian of the past.
"Isabella Swan, dating Jacob Black but he's not her soul-mate. She is walking because he slapped her and left her on the side of the road. They are meant to break up tomorrow but if she's gang rapped she will be dead." Stacey read from the file in her hand.
"She has to live to clean the heart of her soul-mate or he will become a black Soul. She can't die! We need to distract them somehow!" Jess the guardian of the future said with horror in her voice. (Black souls eat other lost souls like hollows on Bleach.)
"I have an idea! Jessica Stanley is passing to go to her corner right now. If they see her they will attack her instead! She's going to be killed by a serial killer tonight anyway." Taryn rushed to her laptop and typed out the happening and the men followed like lost puppies. (Jessica is the local hooker; she has every STD in the book. So all the men will be infected. That's karma for yeah.)
The sisters watched as Bella walked to the diner. She was deep in thought, not paying attention. She was safe for now at least but when she gets to the diner; that's a different story.
Bella's Pov:
Rosalie is Jaspers twin sister and married to Alice's other brother Emmett. Rose opened the diner after she founded it boarded up and run down five years ago. It was for sale and she bought it. In fact that's how they all met. Rose needed someone to help repair the old diner and make it new. So she hired Esme.
Esme is a famous architect and restores old house. When Rose asked her she jumped at the chance to help. She had Emmett, who is in the contracting business, help as well. The moment they locked eyes sparks flew. Alice and Jasper met on opening night, it was the same way but they locked eyes from across the room. She walked up to him and said 'I'm Alice, your future wife!' I'm not kidding she said that.
I was brought out of my thoughts by the loud whaling of a car horn. I looked up to see a minivan coming right for me. I braced myself for the impact but I was tackled out the way by someone. They twisted so I would land on their chest. I heard the crashing sound of the van smashing the light pole and the screaming of Alice, Rose and Esme. I looked down at my rescuer to tell them thanks and to make sure if they were ok but did a double take. My rescuer was…
A/N: I bet you thought I would stop here but you where wrong. If you want to find out who saves Bella keep reading.
Edwards Pov: it's about 8 o'clock.
The afternoon was horrible. My mind kept going back to the moment Tanya betrayed my trust and ripped my heart out stomping and spit on it. Then it would go to Bella and how kind she treated me and everyone else. I didn't deserve her kindness. When I took my pain out on her she always turn the other cheek.
I needed to talk to someone other than Alice. I needed to talk to my mother. I called her cell, and she picked up on the third ring.
"Hello" She spoke in her motherly tone.
"Mom I need advice." I said in a pleading tone.
"Edward I was going to call you. Alice just told me about Bella quitting." She said in a scalding manner. She always taught me to be kind to women. Tanya is an exception; I have never seen Esme so scary. She was angry.
"Wait, where are you?"
"I'm at the diner; Alice and Rose are here too. Come over and we'll talk." She said then she hung up. I grabbed my keys and drove to the diner. The whole way there I felt like something was about to happen.
I passed a Volkswagen Rabbit on the side of the road. It looked like Bella was arguing with this tall tan guy. I shrugged and kept driving and soon I was at the diner.
I walked in and looked around for my mother. I found her at a booth in the back with Rose and Alice. I sat down next to Alice and put my head in my hands. Rose spoke first.
"Have you had dinner yet?" I shook my head no and she went to get my usual shake and burger. She placed the order and came back. Alice was itching to speak. I pointed to her for her to start. She didn't need to be told twice.
"Is this about Bella?" she asked calmly for once.
"It's part of it. Have I been taking the pain from what Tanya did out on other women? If so how can I stop?" I waited for the answer to come from the women in front of me but it came from my side.
"Stop seeing them as the kind of woman Tanya is. I never liked her one bit. But that Bella is a sweet girl. So much like her grandmother." I looked over to see Mrs. Cope with my food. She was like a grandmother to everyone.
"You knew her, Sarah?" My mother asked. She nodded and talked about how they grew up together. She was to one who introduced her to Mr. Charles Swan. It was interesting.
"Son just be nice and let the fates take care of the rest." Esme patted my shoulder.
"Thanks mom. Hey where's Ann?" I asked looking around.
"She's with Jasper, its girl night tonight." Alice chimed. Every Friday they have a girl's night. It's something they have always done.
I looked at the clock and it was almost nine. I had to go home if I wanted to get up on time. I told them all bye and walked out to my Volvo. I was about to get in when I heard a screeching horn. I looked up to see Bella about to be crushed by a minivan.
I have no idea why but I ran as fast I could and tackled her out the way. I did this twist thing I learned from high school football so she was on top and not be crushed by me. Never thought I'd used that off the field.
I heard the crash of the van and the light pole that was replaced with Bella. My head smacked the pavement and a pain shot through my spin and head. The last thing I heard was my family screaming and Bella shaking me. Then everything went black.
(To be continued)
_This is my line!_
A/N:
I hope you enjoyed my new born. This is now my baby. I worked really hard on this chapter. I want to say thanks to the ladies mentioned above who are now The Fate Sisters. They will come in a lot. They are the key to this story. There are pictures on my profile. Will Edward live? To find out review?
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