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First of all allow me to apologise for taking so long to repond to any of you. I had intended to put a AN up to explain what was going on but it I forgot to post it, so I'll explain what went on and is going on now.
I've come up with a basic idea for how I want the Hyuuga inident and the Uchiha massacre to play out but I need to make the final decision on a few last things. Thus a while ago I put a poll up for possible teams, these team options would affect how both turned out. This poll had two main possible options:
Naruto, Sasuke and Hinata under Torune Aburame or
Naruto, Neji and Tenten under Itachi Uchiha
I still need some more people to vote before I can make my final decsion so here's what I'm currently doing.
First of all I've got another poll up at this exact moment for a Naruto/To Love Ru crossover I'm planning to write, this poll in two days will be taken downand the team poll will be placed back up. ONE WEEK after this the team poll will be taken down, and I will finish writting the next chapter and according to the results will be finished and placed up. Thankyou everyone for your patience. Just to make something clear, this is NOT the final decision for each team, it may change later on and I'm still open to suggestions. It's more a case of which ever one I do write for for the next two chapters, will lock the other team out completely, so I won't be using that group no matter what. The one that is picked will basically be a default team though, unless another team is chosen later on, however.
I'm also doing Omake's now, for the most part these will have occured within the backstory of Child of Sin and will hopefully humourously help demonstrate how the World of Fullmetal Alchemist changed into the world of Naruto and Thus Child of Sin. You could still not read them and fully understand what is going on in the story if thats not your thing, but I still reccomend that you do, just to help expand the world of the story and of course to entertain you. While this isn't a proper full on chapter, I've included three Omakes, one for each of the chapters so far and I should bring out one more with each new chapter for the story.
I'm doing a Q&A thing now instead of directly answering reviews from my stories now so here it is for the last couple of reviews I got
Q: Why did Pride reveal so much?
A: I admit he did reveal a lot but it was mainly so that Pride and the council, in particular the Hokage would have an understanding. Given Naruto's current age and reletive lack of skills, it would be near impossible to hide the Homunculus, so revealing themselves would be the best course of action. Theres also the fact that Pride doesn't want anyone to try and kill Naruto on a regular basis, because he doesn't want to waste his time killing everyone that tries to harm him. Most of the information Pride revealed was also relatively pointless to his grand scheme of things. He did leave a lot of the story out though as well...
Q: Why make Ling the Sage of Six Paths?
A: Really, I thought it would just help out the back story and tie the two storys together a lot more, it's much more beliveable in the scheme of things, that someone could gain new abilitys for exposure to a Philosophers Stone rather than just a purely random occurence.
Q: Can Hinata be part of the pairing?
A; No, as I've stated before Hinata will not be paied with Naruto. This said, I am not going to bash her character, depending on team choices she may still be an important character, she just doesn't need to be paied with Naruto to do so.
Q: How can you not have a Harem with Lust as a core component of his personality?
A: That is a good point, mainly it was because I doubted I could write a Harem story and still keep the focus on the main plot of the story. That and I had even questioned having a Naruto pairing in this, keep in mind Naruto is a Homunculus now so he will look down in humans in general. It'll be a few more chapters before I even begin to consider the pairing at all however.
Also please check out my Profile page. I write a variety of diffrent stories for diffrent categories so please read if any of them strike your eye and if they don't, well then please read anyway. I've also posted up a few Challenges, so please check them out if your interested, or even if your not check them anyway, I'm really hopeing people will take them, so please spread the word.
I'm running a poll at the moment for a Naruto/To Love Ru crossover I intend to right at the moment, yes I'm offering the same thing as a Challenge but I believe there are quite a few directions you can go with it. So please vote. If you don't have a profile and want to vote then I will count votes done by Anonomous Reviews, though please do not misuse this feature.
So please read, Enjoy, Review and vote in all of my polls.
OMAKE 1 – Ancestry?
"ALPHONSE!" The Xingise princess, Mei Chang yelled out as her long-time crush and friend Alphonse Elric stepped out of the train, along with his two cohorts Zampano and Jerso.
"Hi Mei" Alphonse said excitedly running over to meet her.
"WHAT ABOUT US?" Zampano and Jerso yelled out angrily, causing Alphonse to scratch the back of his head good naturedly
"Sorry about that, guys."
"Master Alphonse, Zampano, Jerso, good to see all of you again." An older looking man said stepping out of the shadows.
"FU! But your dead." Alphonse yelled out shocked, while Mei laughed at his response.
"I was, but our Emperor brought me back with some of his new abilities."
"Your Emperor, you mean..."
"Yes, the young lord has grown into a fine Emperor for Xing."
"Ok, wow, but what about those new abilities?" Alphonse asked curiously
"It appears that our Emperor had developed some... rather unusual abilities recently, perhaps it's best if you see for yourself."
"Maybe, could it be because of the Philosophers Stone?"
"Perhaps, but anyway, his majesty sent me here to tell you it would be an honour if you joined us at his table this evening."
"Well lead the way then Fu."
Five Hours later, Dining Room Imperial Palace
"Ah Alphonse, good to see you again, sorry I couldn't speak to you earlier." Ling said entering the room smiling.
"No problem, Ling, how are things with you?"
"Good, good, I take it you've heard about some of my new abilities, I hope you might be able to shed some light on them while you're here."
"I'll do my best." Alphonse replied with a hopeful smile
"Excellent, now I believe we have a meal to enjoy." Ling said sitting down in his chair in front of a buffet.
"I hope you enjoy the food Alphonse, I know how much you enjoy trying new foods, so all of the foods here originated in Xing." Mei said smiling
"Really thanks Mei."
"Here try this," Mei said handing to Alphonse, what appeared to be a bowl full of noodles
Hesitantly Alphonse took a bit before his face lit up in wonder before he started to scarf down the whole bowl.
"More Please!"
Half and Hour later, Alphonse was on his tenth bowl of the stuff and still hungry for more.
"Wow, this is great, what do you call this stuff?"
"Ramen, and I've never met anyone who likes it half as much as you do Alphonse." Ling said with a half amazed, half disgusted expression on his face.
OMAKE 2 – Deleted Scene: Father?
"Well Naruto, have you come to a decision, yet?" Pride asked, impatiently. Pride had expected the young boy to have made a decision over which Homunculus to bring back over an hour age. He himself had already made his decision and was waiting for the boy.
"I just can't pick they all sound so cool!" Naruto exclaimed excitedly
Pride simply sighed at that. "Well then Naruto, think about it this way, what do you want the most?"
"What do I want, well I want the world's biggest bowl of Ramen, and cool stuff and lots of Money and ninja stuff and..."
"That's not what I meant." Pride grumbled under his breath
"...And I want a Father and..."
Upon hearing that Pride palled, Naruto just had to say it like that didn't he, well he did promise the boy he'd let him pick which Homunculus he wanted, and he didn't say Naruto HAD to pick a Homunculus he listed, he just assumed that he would, I mean what were the chances Naruto would say the name of the one Homunculus, he didn't list...
Apparently very likely considering Naruto's luck and his lack of it.
"Very well then," Pride said sighing, "I shall bring Father back, just like you asked me to..."
"And a another giant bowl of ramen and..." Naruto continued on, "Wait, what?"
With a flash of light, another person stood in the room, he was tall with long Golden Blonde hair and beard along with golden eyes and was wearing white robes.
Taking a quick look around he turned to Pride, "Pride, where are we?
"Um, well you see Father, we uh, we are inside this Boy, Naruto Uzumaki's mind and..."
"Wait where in the mind of this child? But then how is he in here? And what happened to us? Father exclaimed
"Um, well you see Father, we uh kind of lost in Amestris and I just brought you back, as for how the boy is in here, it's well, I'm not quite sure how it's possible, I think it's similar to how we can go inside our own Philosophers Stone's though" Pride stated confused
"I see..." Father said thoughtfully, "And how long has it been?"
"Well, it's been a few hundred years..."
Father suddenly glared at Pride and spoke with a dangerous tone, "And why didn't you bring me back earlier?"
Pride started sweating like crazy, "Well Father you see, um, I couldn't gather the energy and I didn't really have the chance, and I wasn't even going to bring you back at all, but I promised Naruto could pick one of us to bring back and... crap I really shouldn't have said that, should I?"
Father glared even harder at Pride, "No, you shouldn't have." He stated simply before walking over to Naruto.
"So does this mean, your my Father?" Naruto said happily looking up at Father with wide eyes and tears of joy running down his face.
"Yes It appears I am." Father stated simply while Naruto jumped up and hugged him, "Hm, but it seems you need a more appropriate name for a Homunculus... how about Pride?"
"But that's my name!" Pride protested weakly
"Not anymore it isn't, your name is Shame now." Father said back to him, "Now New Pride, what do you want to do?"
"I want to go to the Zoo!" Naruto, a.k.a New Pride said excitedly.
"Very well then, and while where there we might as well turn all the animals into, Philosophers Stones." Father replied
"But doesn't that kill them?" Naruto asked Father confused
"Not at all, it'll just put them inside you so you can play with them all the time."
"YAY"
"You know what, we could even make it so that all the people of the village are inside you, so you can play with them and the animals forever, wouldn't you like that."
Naruto nodded happily.
And thus a plan to turn Konoha into a Philosophers Stone was created...
OMAKE 3 – Origin of Clans – Akimichi
It had been Two months since the discovery of his new Powers and Ling was bored.
After the events in Amestris, Ling had arrived home in Xing, only to soon be crowned with the title of Emperor of Xing, life was good and normal for a while after that, then he started discovering his powers. Due to the fact that he had a Philosophers Stone inside him, at least that's what he thought it was, Ling started to develop some really weird powers, such as the mind reading thing, the ability to alter a person's genetic makeup, the awesome gravitational abilities and the weird freaky eyes, oh and the whole being able to resurrect the dead thing, can't forget that, it allowed him to bring his good friend Fu back to life after all.
But despite all of this Ling was bored out of his mind most of the people he was actually friends with around the palace were unavailable at the moment, Mei was still showing Alphonse around Xing, Fu was training the new recruits for the Imperial Guard and Lan Fan was out training, not that he'd be able to do anything with her if she where here anyway, his mother would probably catch them.
So it was in this state of boredom that Ling sat. For a few more minutes he waited like this until he sent a message to the dining room staff, to prepare him a table and a meal. Some good food would help take his mind off of the boredom, plus he was hungry and all good Emperor's do need there Seven square meals a day.
A few minutes later, Ling sat in his favourite chair, within his favourite room, in his favourite palace (his), eating some of his favourite foods.
Around half an hour later, Fu busted into the room and started looking around the room.
"Fu, What's wrong?"
"Your Majesty," Fu said straightening up, "One of our newer recruits has gone missing, and I thought he might be in here."
"Why?" Ling asked, with a mouth full of food.
"Because this particular recruit has a particular liking for food."
"I still don't why I need any more guards than you anyway Fu, It's not like anyone would be able to kill me anyway."
"I understand that your majesty, but we can not take the risk of you being killed, please try to understand."
Ling just rolled his eyes, if there was anything in Xing that could actually manage to harm him, not even a few hundred guards would make a difference, not that he would tell Fu that.
Lifting up the Table cloth, Ling and Fu saw a rather heavy set soldier, dressed in the standard garbs of a Xingise soldier, along with a bit of light blue cloth to signify which clan he comes from, he had a plate of food stolen from the Emperor's table with him.
"CHIEN-PO, What do you have to say for yourself, you could be executed for stealing from the emperors table!" Fu said angrily.
"Sorry your majesty, but I was really hungry."
"Relax, I'm not going to execute someone for this." Ling said smiling.
"Honestly Chein-Po, if you spent half as much time training as you did eating then..."
"THAT'S IT."
"Your majesty?"
"Tell me, what clan are you from?" Ling asked the recruit excitedly.
"Um, Akimichi my lord?"
"Well, what if I gave you and your clan, the ability to turn fat into energy, would he be a good guard then Fu?"
"Well he would, your majesty, but I don't see why you would go so far for... your bored again aren't you?" Fu stated, figuring out what Ling was trying to do. "Your majesty, you really should,'t alter a persons genetic makeup every time you get..."
"I agree your majesty."
"Good, now this may sting, a lot... all over."
And with the screams echoing across the palace the Akimichi clan we know today was born.
Hope you enjoyed.
I was recently playing in Land of Dragons in Kingdom Hearts II and decided to make a reference with the last Omake there.
As I said in the AN up the top. Two more days for my Naruto/ To Love RU crossover Poll, which I hope people will vote in, closes and the team poll is put back up, which I also hope people will vote in. And then One week after that and I'll finish writting the next chapter of this and post it.
So please Review, tell my what you want and what you think of the Omakes and of course remember to vote! for those of you who don't have an accout and therefore can't vote, I will accept vote via anonomous review.
