Hello, just thought i'd put a quick chapter up! Please review or follow this, i know its got new people and loads of twists but its fiction version of fiction! - if you get what i mean! Please review.


It was 7pm, Miles and Sam had been sent home and Jack had set up the usual surveillance programs and protocols to check they weren't calling everyone they knew to tell them about their amazing new job.

"So we've hired both of them?" Gwen said.

"It seems that way." Ianto answered, he was watched Louise carefully.

"Yes well we'll see how it goes." Jack looked at them all.

"You like them both?"Gwen asked.

"Yeh I do I reckon they'll be good, they should fit in alright."

"Do we need both?" Gwen asked.

"You know what this jobs like Gwen." Jack didn't want to say it but they all knew it. Being a Torchwood operative was dangerous and they always died young. Gwen got up from the table.

"I have some paperwork to finish, I'll check the rift predictor and if there's nothing there I'll go home for the night." She left the room, Ianto go up, scooped a heap of files off of the table and went to file them.

"You've made the wrong decision Jack." Louise said quietly.

"What do you mean?"

"We shouldn't have introduced them at the same time."

"Why not?"

"We have so much more to handle now; we have to watch both their backs."

"No we don't." He clearly didn't understand what she was saying.

"Jack to completely innocent people, you saw them, they've never encountered anything like this."

"And so what no one else had."

"Yes they had all of them had, Ianto worked for Torchwood one, Toshiko go pulled into it by developing a sonic device, Owen lost his fiancé to an alien creature, you know this is different, you've pick two brand new people and you're going to throw them in at the deep end." He stood up, knowing this was becoming a full blown argument. He put his hand on the back of his chair.

"What's going on Louise why are you so tetchy about this?"

"I've just got a bad feeling about it that all." He stood over her.

"Louise what's going on?"

"You know Jack you can try intimidate me all you like, it won't work!" she stood up at turned to look at him.

"You are going to tell me what is going on Louise."

"No I'm not and you can't make me!" Ianto and Gwen watched the argument unfold,

"Why have I done the wrong thing?"

"I've just got a feeling that's all."

"You've got a feeling, you've got a feeling!" he said exasperatedly.

"Jack something's going to go wrong."

"You know you don't know everything."

"I know, but something isn't right."

"How can you know that?" Jack yelled.

"I just have a feeling."

"You might be the first empress of the time lords but here you're Lieutenant Louise Carter-Jones and you're on my team. My team I don't care about your gut feelings."

"Should we step in?" Gwen asked quietly.

"No," Ianto shook his head, watching the two intently. "Who do you recon would win in a fight, the Captain or the Lieutenant?"

"Ianto Jones you are a bad man!" Gwen looked at him; a small smile was on his face. "A Tenner says it's Jack." She added. He shook her hand.

"It'll be a pleasure taking your money off you!"

"Why are you backing Louise?"

"I know she's got more fight in her than Jack!"

"How would you know that?" he thought back to the other day walking calmly through her memories. How surreal it was and how he'd felt everything that had ever happened to her the pride and the terror all mingled together.

"I just have a pretty good insight into the way her mind works that's all."

TWTWTW

"Oh I hate Jack." Louise muttered to herself as she typed away at the computer.

"No you don't." Ianto walked over to her with a coffee.

"No I really do."

"Calm down, I know he was harsh."

"He doesn't like the fact I'm right, something is going to go wrong."

"I admit, yes you right but you know what he's like he will monitor them and see what happens. Then he'll retcon one or both of them!"

"It's not a good idea; it's going to end in tears."

"No not tears, retcon and bullets."

"Well that makes me feel a whole lot better!"

"Look," Ianto span her chair around to face him and put his hands on either arm so she couldn't spin back round. "It will be ok; there is no point worrying about it. Now go and get your coat, I'm taking you out for that drink." She opened her mouth to protest. "No, we are going." He walked the short distance to a coat stand and pulled her coat off of it and opened it helping her into it.

"You know I think I like the commanding Ianto!" she said with a smile as she took his arm.

"I think I do as well." They laughed as they headed out into the night.

TWTWTW

"I don't want to go back." Louise moaned looking at her phone. Several missed calls from Jack, the messages getting more and more irritated. They stumbled round the corner.

"Screw Jack." Ianto muttered.

"No, that's really not a good idea!" Ianto looked at her and laughed, "No I meant screw Jack, don't go back!"

"Well where exactly am I supposed to go? I have nowhere else to go!" Ianto raised his eyebrows at her.

"Where do you think?" he kissed her passionately. "Back to mine." She smiled but hesitated. "Come back to mine please." He kissed her cheek then her neck.

"Back to yours it is then." She said quietly, looking into his eyes and kissing him softly. Ianto took her hand and they walked towards Iantos lovely bay side apartment. As they got to the door, he phone rang again she looked at it. Jack flashed on the called display screen. She suddenly felt awful, she'd promised. Ianto looked at her looking at the phone and felt as though he knew what she was thinking it was as if her thoughts where in his head. She'd promised Jack she wouldn't.

"Please ignore it, you don't owe him anything." He rested his forehead on the side of Louise's head, kissing her hair. She hesitated again. She clicked the reject button more forcefully than was need and turned the phone off. She adored Ianto but didn't want to hurt him, doing this she knew somehow would be the end of her and the doctor forever and the beginning of something huge and she didn't want that for Ianto, she wanted him to have a choice not a destiny. She knew enough about the transformation she was going through to be pretty sure Ianto was the man she was looking for.

"Ianto, I'm going to go back to the Hub." She took a few steps away with a small apologetic smile on her face. He looked at her.

"No don't please stay." He took a few steps towards her. She took a few back,

"I'm sorry Ianto I really can't; I can't do this to you."

"Please, do what to me? Just come in for a coffee. Nothing else I promise I won't try anything." She looked at the pleading look in his eyes, "It's just so lonely sometimes, come on please." He looked at her, knowing her nearly had her, he wanted to know what was eating her up from the inside out, he wanted to hold her and tell her it would all be alright but he knew she would never let him. She was like Jack, happy to give love but not happy to be loved. "It's just a coffee and a chat about what's bothering you." She smiled as nodded. He smiled, in some ways she was like Jack, stubborn, intriguing and Ianto was pretty sure immortal but in other ways nothing like him, she gave in gracefully, was open with him and she had an awful guilt complex, he was sure of it, he knew it she blamed herself for so much that was out of her control. He walked over to her and took her hand again; walking up the steps to his apartment he put the key I the lock and they went inside.


Tune in next week for the next part of Girl to God - any suggestions this story is getting longer and longer should i split it into another story at an appropriate point??? please review thanks muchly xxx