Welp, this is a nice beginning. I got my first review. Thank you, shado-chan! ^_^ ratchet and superbub used gust or didn't have an account, so I only saw shado's. Sorry. Shado and ratchet are in the story now, but superbub, you need to fill out the form. Sorry… still, if you can fill out the rest of the form, I'll be glad to put you in. now, chris(D4505) has a message.
Chris: I found a good server! :D if you want it, go to element animation and check the update with the testificate/npc/villager/whatever you call it and look in the description! Its normaly full, but they are amazing with what they do. If you can manage to get on, I'll see you there! :D
Ok now lets get started.
EDIT: made the ending a bit more... "Detailed". i was rushed for time, so i cut it short. now start readin!
Chapter 2.5: the accused (revised.)
"So, WHY don't you explode?" Chris asked Cupa on the way back.
"That's because I'm pacifist, and unlike all other creepers, I fight with my hands and weapons." Cupa answered. Purple sparkles started appearing around the three. At first it was one or two so they couldn't really notice. "So anyway… I think there's an enderman around here. It just feels too quiet not to be here." Casey said a tad bit nervously. "you just need to eat some food. You probably were hungry because you only eat cooked chicken or bread."
"Yea, well, slyfox says—wait… something isn't right here… Chris. Get your swords out. We got at least a couple enderman on our hands." Casey said. Although he pulled out six, three were knocked away by a circle. "what the hell? Nothing should be able to be the grip out of it unless its—well… shit. im gonna have a hard time." Chris shrugs because he cant do anything unless he fights the enderman alone.
"Got that right." Two people said. Enderman—Queen, and discthrower, Shado and ratchet.
"Keep the hell away from us…" Casey said.
"why? Your friends just the same as us." Ratchet said.
"no im not. You will never have the same kind of parents that I did. Nobody but creepers will.." chris said a bit lower than usual. "And why is that? We were all raised by minecraftians. Exept shado. She was raised by… well… youll see." Ratchet said.
"hm. Bring it!" chris said, thinking of a plan for Ratchet. Shado teleported behind them, taking Casey and cupa… somewhere, so they wouldn't interfere.
"think you can beat us?" shado said.
"Yep." Chris replied. he shot out two swords at both of them and while ratchet took them straight up, which seemed like it did nothing, Shado teleported behind Chris to flank(?) him from behind. when he saw that Shado was gone, he was going to send the two remaining swords behind him, but Shado beat him to the punch. "Gah!" Chris got a bit startled because of where EXACTLY Shado hit him. it was near the side of his ribcage, where hes ticklish. he fell over on his side laughing, which made shado and ratchet laugh a little too. but when he got back up, he saw them laughing and caught Shado off guard by grabbing her with the chains, which instantly made both of them stop laughing. because he went for shado first, he couldnt grab him, but he improvised. "BONK!" Chris shouted, and used Shado to hit Ratchet on the head... with her head. "OW." they both said at the same time. then chris just started hitting ratchet to keep him from using the bedrock disc he had. "Bad minecrafter! BAD!" Chris said after Ratchet was up to his waist in the dirt. "I GET IT, I GET IT, you like hitting me on the head..."Ratchet started to say, and Shado finished "And using me as a mallet. or is it hammer?" Chris then put shado down (But still managed to keep her from teleporting by imobilising her) and asked her "ok. now tell me who you two are before i put you both in the ground completlley."but then a disc of bedrock cut the restraints keeping her from teleporting, and the teleported a couple feet away from him. Ratchet, now out of the ground, said "Face the facts. were too evenly matched. Its just a battle of stamina." of course, Chris knew he had more than just his swords on him. he transformed the bandages into cannons and shot some of the rotten flesh at them. "Ok what the hell is this?" Ratchet asked. "it tastes horrible." Shado said. "You ATE it?" Ratchet and Chris asked at the same time. They looked at each other with the same expression "Where would she even get that idea?" Before Chris realised somthing he had that they didnt: Dispensers!
(on a side note, that was my longest paragraph!)
Chris: get back to the story.
fine, fine...
"You forgot one thing. My bandages wont work with only swords… they make good dispensers too. FIRE CHARGE!" Chris said. The bandages moved around him to form something along the lines of a cannon, and started to rapid fire the fire charge's at the two "Shit." Were the last words heard before the bombardment of the fire charge's.
A couple minutes later ratchet was still standing, but shado was gone. She teleported away near the end of the shots. "well… looks like you stand over most minecraftians. What happened to you?" chris asked ratchet. "I had… accidents with radiation. Yours?" "creepers for parents. I also had to save my best friend from a creeper explosion , which gave me these bandages. Question is… what about your friend?" chris asked. "im the queen of the enderman." Shado said behind him with casey and cupa.
"well, thanks for the explanation and all, but we need to—did you say QUEEN of the enderman?" Chris said questionably. "yep." Shado said "Well, you coulda said that before I shot you guys with fire charges. Anyway, we gotta get home before—"FREEZE!" inturuppted again. Poor chris. D: always etting inturupted. "who the hell was that?" Chris asked.
"casey, you are under aresst for associating with creepers making us belive you are plotting the downfall of minecraft."
"Wait what." they all said.
Dun dun dunnna! WHO KNEW? I hope everyone did because I put that in the first thing.
I was quick for time on this one because I saw the other comments at the last second -_- sorry if this chapter isn't as good as the first one.
Also, yay for being completely off topic for the chapter's title! :p
Anyway, 3 more spots left for power thing people! Hurry up!
Next time, we WILL see notch and herobrine… hopefully.
Chris: no. please no, don't make notch the judge please no
… um… I cant garuntee that will happen but… eh. See you all next chapter!
