A/N: so thanks for not giving up hope, and getting this far. I really appreciate it. Here is how Freddie feels About Tris. I'm not sure what to do about some of the other characters. If you have any ideas, it would help, a lot.
Tris catches my eye next. I don't know all that much about most of the initiates, seeing as they've been here for about two weeks. I know that she was the first jumper, quite odd for a stiff. Not only was she abnegation, but she also probably 5"0, and has the body of a 13 year old. How she managed a #6 rank for stage two amazes me. She is obviously very determined. I can see it in her eyes. Sometimes being small and underestimated can make you more willing to fight for what you want. All I can say is that she must be very tough, like calculus.
As far as I've heard, she's been doing really well with the simulations. I guess even though she may not excel physically, she probably does mentally. Or she's just divergent like me, and possibly Four. I heard that she stood up for Al, when Eric was PMSing or something, and had told Al to stand in front of the target, while Four threw knives at his head. She volunteered to take his place. If I'm right about him having a thing for her, then it must have been absolute torcher for him. It also probably fueled Al's crush on her too. If I had to guess which guy Tris would go for, it would be Four, besides; Al was almost at the bottom for stage one, and he's not doing very well in stage two.
I feel like Tris will get ranked very highly at the end of stage three, I can just see it in the way she is so determined, the only problem is that she doesn't fit in. She doesn't like to listen to the leaders, which could get her into trouble one day.
Thanks for reading, please review, and I am fully open to criticism.
