Okay, so heres another piece I wrote, this one is based on Cato

My eyes are blue
like ice on water
people see them
and fear my power
But I'm not that heartless
underneath the facade
I'm a regular guy
just learning a trade
I'm taught to be cold
to kill without mercy
to look down on those
who die with a plea
But I'm not that cruel
I'm a pretty nice guy
but in this situation
I just have to try
I have to win
I have to get home
I have to show them
That I stand alone
Because without that
I don't know who I am
I don't have a purpose
I don't have a plan
I can't tell you how
How sorry I was
the day that I entered
and found what it does
It makes you go nuts
with all of that fear
It makes you lose it
and your reason disappear
Now here I stand
On the edge of the horn
Knowing I'll die
nobody will mourn
I hold on to the boy
I'm covered in red
she shoots at my hand
and I fall not yet dead
Whats waiting for me
Is something much worse
a death that is slow
and I scream out a curse
"Kill me" I plead
I know I've been heard
Because in comes an arrow
and lands in my head
The pain fades away
and the world goes black
My name is Cato
and thats the end of that

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