Where did Evermore go? Has the authoress forgotten her work?
The answer you guys will be happy to hear is no. It's just that as I was writing the newest chapter, I reread some of my older ones. I was in eighth grade when I started with Evermore. Six years ago. I'm now a senior, attempting to prepare herself to go out into the real world(SCARY!). And I've learned a bit too much about writing in my recent times, once again. I guess you could say I'm now highly dissatisfied with the earlier chapters and in fact, have been working on an alternate version, better, longer, and with much more development and with a few tricks I've been investing my time into learning.
I promise it won't get too much different, but I recommend you either reread it(daunting task) or read the little summary I'm going to make of all the changes I am making. I will be making an epilogue recap to Evermore, which will sum it up so you don't have to go digging through everything if you so wish. I've been worse than CP himself about keeping my updates on schedule. The summary will also appear in the sequel(which I have began work on despite not being done with this one.) It'll be the same in both though.
Canadian-Girl14
2010-07-22 . chapter 40
I thought for sure Eragon was going to kill Murtagh there, but I'm so glad he didn't! I can't wait to see what's next!
I wouldn't be that evil. As the next few chapter's theme song goes, "The Story is just beginning."
Leonopteryx2009-09-28 . chapter 40
I thougt your story was very well done, but having just read it, and hitting that end, I do wish that you had made the last few chapters to tie up the loose ends.
That isn't the last chapter.
spartanburns2009-09-08 . chapter 40
do you ever plan on finishing this story? it's been just over 4 months since you last updated. I know you are most likely busy with other things, but you can't just leave a great story like this where you left it. I hope to see an update, if not, oh well, people have things to do.
I regret I haven't worked on it more, but senior year's proving to be...different...than I expected.
Kibble Beast2009-07-18 . chapter 40
woah!
i feel a big uh-oh coming...
poor eragon :( i feel so sorry for him.
he needs his saphira!
you have to update this!
don't be leaving us all on that cliffy!
I shall. I might post a chapter just to establish I'm still working on this. It'll be the same outcome, this battle, no matter how I slice it.
Canadian-Girl142009-04-30 . chapter 39
Good chapter!
Thanks.
Canadian-Girl142009-04-24 . chapter 38
Good chapter! There were a few spelling mistakes and such, but it was good otherwise. And I don't remember Silver Lake. Should I?
Most of the things in this story, even back when I wrote Silver Lake, has a purpose.
Canadian-Girl142009-03-31 . chapter 37
Good chapter! Please update soon! You can't tell how the battle ends and then not show right away how it happened! :)
Yeah, that I'm going to change a bit as well. Try not to get too lost...
Writer of the North2009-03-08 . chapter 1
cool
Thanks.
dreyanor2009-01-14 . chapter 37
good story. hope you can update soon. but is saphira going to be ok.
You'll just have to wait and see, I guess.
Canadian-Girl142008-12-25 . chapter 36
Good chapter! I liked the brother-dynamics of the story.
Believe me, I have more planned...earlier in the story. We will also be seeing a bit of Vexie, since I decided to change that part of the story. Had a massive plot bunny for her I'm thinking will cause quite a bit of interesting things to happen...if the world doesn't explode from her reappearence first...
xLilypadsx2008-12-25 . chapter 36
Another great 2 chapters!
Merry X-mas to you too, and keep with the updates!
Good luck and update soon.
Regret that I haven't been better about making sure I update on time. Hopefully what I am now doing to Evermore makes up for it
Canadian-Girl14 2008-11-27 . chapter 34
Thanks!
Canadian-Girl14 2008-11-11 . chapter 33
:)
xlilypadsx 2008-11-11 . chapter 33
ya eragon was a bit angsty, wasn't he? oh well. we'll get that fixed as soon as the next chapter, 35 is up.
xLilypadsx 2008-07-14 . chapter 32
don't worry. no matter what, i'll work it out for you guys
Canadian-Girl14 2008-07-13 . chapter 32
thank you!
Deluxe489 2008-06-23 . chapter 33
I guess i should for sure thank you very much. Sorry I didn't send you the last update. You did such a good job with the last, I've just been so damn busy! Curse the rest of the world for not letting me write all the time by knocking inspiration out of me when I have time to write and giving me inspiration when I don't. Well, that might change a bit, as I have started carrying around a couple journals everywhere. Of course, that leaves the matter of typing it, but oh well...
deddy2die4 2008-06-22 . chapter 33
Don't worry. I'l probably do a small recap and then go right back into the story after a while. just have so much going on with the battle and moving of the varden
xLilypadsx 2008-06-20 . chapter 33
I could never fully abandon Evermore. Physically impossible with how long I've been writing...
DragonFireOKN 2008-06-20 . chapter 33
Ya I pretty much rock at it. I have 33 adults and am still going!
GrahamPegg 2008-06-12 . chapter 32
hmm. Good idea but no...
Mischivous Purple One 2008-06-09 . chapter 32
Thank yous. What do you think of it now? I can tell you how to set it up. It's actually pretty easy...
62635377-nameless 2008-05-05 . chapter 31
Glad you like it. Your wish is my command!
Du Moi abr Wyrda 2008-05-04 . chapter 31
Just got really good? Aww, means I gotta try harder...
Ryder Blade 2008-05-04 . chapter 32
Tis an Eragon/Arya fic. Hope you saw the little bits I've pushed in...
fAteD lOvE 2008-05-04 . chapter 27
Flattered you reread it. I do have some plans for Aiedail, but that is not them...
DragonFireOKN 2008-05-03 . chapter 31
She's not dead. Oh god no...
Canadian-Girl14 2008-04-25 . chapter 30
Thanks...
Ayus 2008-04-24 . chapter 30
Flattered you said that. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside...I don't think I could publish though. But you would be the first to know if I ever did publish a story!
DragonFireOKN 2008-04-24 . chapter 30
Thank you very much.
Ayus 2008-04-24 . chapter 22
thank you so much!
Ayus 2008-04-24 . chapter 17
damn, shame on me!
meee 2008-03-07 . chapter 29
soon
SEveN 2008-02-18 . chapter 30
THANK YOU
hmmm 2008-02-15 . chapter 29
you'll just have to wait n see
ooohh 2008-02-15 . chapter 28
oh dear
cool 2008-02-15 . chapter 27
done w/extras. you read framers yet?
nice story 2008-02-15 . chapter 26
me too...
fAteD lOvE 2008-02-13 . chapter 29
yes yes i always have those don't i? shame on me god...
Canadian-Girl14 2008-02-12 . chapter 29
oh ya...
DragonFireOKN 2008-02-12 . chapter 29
thank you so much. i do try and yes it can be confusing at times, but that is the wonderous world of my mind. crazy wild and sometimes really odd and confusing
Keep reading
xLilypadsx 2008-02-11 . chapter 29
then you'll love my latest chapter!
Canadian-Girl14 2008-01-24 . chapter 28
good
SNOWDRIVER 2008-01-16 . chapter 1
thanks. I am just terrified to fix it for fear of a repeat of the last time i tried...
who else? 2007-12-08 . chapter 27
good for you! i mean really!
who else? 2007-12-08 . chapter 26
he is isn't he?
who else? 2007-12-08 . chapter 25
dun dun dun! you're gonna love it
who else? 2007-12-08 . chapter 24
glad you liked it XD
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 23
oh noes! can't have greasy follicles!
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 22
seems that way yep
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 21
coolio
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 20
bet you were...
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 19
yep you guessed right
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 18
tis what i live for...
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 17
thanx
who else? 2007-12-06 . chapter 16
ya i'm embarassed...ars isn't done yet...
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 15
who knows?
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 14
love thos little buggers
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 13
curse you and your constant questions!
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 12
yep i'm known 4 um :)
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 11
ha ha! how late u up this time? 3? 4?
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 10
dun dun dun! yes he is...glad you like the conflict...
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 9
does it get dark at night?
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 8
*blushes out of shear embrassment* damn sorry...
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 7
you and all you're questions gah!
same as the last, dumb ass 2007-12-05 . chapter 6
by your sis again? jeeze...
same as the last dumb ass 2007-12-04 . chapter 5
ha ha very funny
same as the last dumb ass 2007-12-04 . chapter 4
thank you thank you
same as before 2007-12-03 . chapter 3
l...o...l...
same as the last... 2007-12-03 . chapter 2
not bad not bad...yourself
u probably kno who... 2007-12-03 . chapter 1
you lied to me! told me you started weeks ago!Canadian-Girl14
2007-08-14
ch 24, reply: Thanks. Ya, but it will all work out in the end...if poeple keep reviewing.
fAteD lOvE
2007-08-06
ch 23, reply: Sorry for that. 'Muratgh' is that chapter and 'Thorn' in that chapter were never of course there. It was really Eragon and Saphira under the illution spell. I'm sorry that was a bit so-so. In the part when Aiedail almost dies, she hadn't seen Eragon throw off his cloak. The few features she was able to see of it before looked much like Murtagh's plus before when he had the illtion spell she saw his face exactly so she couldn't tell the difference till the spell wore off and the cloak was off. You were able to tell that Roran was Roran, right? If so, good because if you couldn't, I'd have cause to be worried. I have been going back and forth between what Eragon does with her, but know that he'll never truely be able to love Aiedail. Well, at least not in that way... He'll have the same role for her as Gladr had for Saphira...only ten times more dramatic.
fAteD lOvE
2007-06-21
ch 21, reply not quite. can't reveal too much more though
fAteD lOvE
2007-06-18
ch 16, reply Aiedail is in all of the following chappies: the Prolouge, what was found at Du Weldenvarden, My morning star, and A simple idea. Also see her in an up and coming chapters Inside ememy walls, A hard choice, and Sound the alarms. One chapter from now is the first one... As for who she is, that is going to be adressed later in the story.
As for your prediction, one is really close, but not quiete close enough. the other's fairly far off.
ERAGON AND ARYA FOREVER(lol ya no duh)
ps i probably will use that frase. ;) Arygon forever!
Mariano's-twins
2007-06-17
ch 19, reply The reason why I made this chapter was so I could answer questions and add little sneak previews early in the story...and yes I will do that. And I do realise the problem with more chapters then reviews. Atleast I don't have a flame. Most storries do by now. Hopefully that will change, but I'll still keep writing if not. Otherwise I'll have this story bugging me forever. A way you could help is to possibly tell others to read or give me suggestions on how to make the summary more appealing.
Spottedstar106
2007-06-17
ch 19, reply That's the big question that will be answered in the next chapter. I can tell you that it will all play into the final plot. I promise to update soon...like today maybe...
Mariano's-twins
2007-06-12
ch 17, reply
Yes I did make it, and that prophic song will come into play later. It shall be fulfilled, along with a few other surprises you'll never expect. As for whether or not Roran will die, you'll just have to wait. I can tell you it will be resolved in the next few chapters.
Spottedstar106
2007-06-11
ch 17, reply
Murtagh will be coming back in to play soon. But first I'll have to settle the matter of Roran's plight.
Spottedstar106
2007-06-07
ch 15, reply
Like I say, I never hate characters, just their perfection.
Mariano's-twins
2007-05-23
ch 14, reply
Well, some chapters are about that, others not so much. Just glad you like it.
Mariano's-twins
2007-05-15
ch 13, reply
Definitely.
EminaAnimanga
2007-05-15
ch 1, anon.
Wow, how very flattering. I try hard on any story I sign my name to.
Divine Dark Warrior
2007-05-15
ch 1, reply
Thank you very much. Watch for updates please. They'll come frequently unless I am at a show or busy for some other reason.
Mariano's-twins
2007-05-12
ch 12, reply
Thank you. Please keep reading and reviewing. I'm fine with suggestions too, actually, I prefer them. So any form of help is wanted.
The author
2007-05-11
ch 12, anon.
Problem solved.
eragonsgirl#1 11, anon.
I don't really have any problems with who the characters are, I just hate perfection. And hating Saphira is a flaw… Oh ya and if you 3 Murtagh, just wait and see what else is going to happen.
eliteElite
2007-05-06
ch 5, reply
Thank you. But you don't even know the half of the story…yet…
Mariano's-twins
2007-05-06
ch 11, reply
My only answer to this is that there will be….trust me, there will be. I'm probably going to ship Arya/Eragon (after I de perfectize them both of course) Katrina/Roran, Murtagh/Nasuada, and many other small relationships along the way. Like Aiedail is going to like Eragon but it won't work out for a couple of reasons…wait, I've already said too much about that.
Old reviews from the origional version and my answers
kyat
2007-04-26
ch 14, reply
strange, every time it says theres an update, it shows nothing on my computer o0
maybe fanfiction messed up again... gr... i want to read some updates if there are any!
Well, that's because I was always adding to the chappies I already had instead of adding chappies. Now I'm sure to add all I can to the chappy before updating...
AlinaAnila
2007-04-13
ch 15, reply
That was really cool! Update again! BUT, make the next chapter longer!
You'd certianly be proud of it now...
kyat
2007-04-13
ch 15, reply
nice story so far... its has its own originality in the plot.
the thought of murtagh taking on a fatherly role seems a bit strange but it gives the whole story a new twist on who this little elven girl is or could be in the future. i especially like the scenes with murtagh making sure aiedail was safe and the race with the fall. i thought those were cute scenes.
keep up the good work :
Glad you like it. I think he's had that side all along. And yes, alot of my story does revolve around her and her furture desitny. You'd be rather shocked if I were to tell you the truth of this story. Ya, those father-daughter scenes were fun, but I can't do many now that there'll be an ocean of land between the two...
Blacktangledheart92
2007-04-13
ch 15, reply
I like it. Keep updating and ill keep reading. Good work
Thank you. I aim to please
AlinaAnila
2007-04-12
ch 14, reply
That was great! Update again! Whats gunna Happen to Aidale? TELL ME!
pS: I cant post my own sotories, it keeps coming up wih things like: An error occured while processing your request.
Help me!
hope the problem's fixed now. Can't tell you bout Aiedail. Only my beta reader knows and she's impossible to reach for you guys...;)
Crystalblade Warrior
2007-04-11
ch 1, reply
Nice.
Nice
Given-Inside
2007-04-07
ch 12, reply
You have some good writing/grammar skills. It is a very impressive story to read. Keep going on it.
didn't even realize you had reviewed this! Thank you. I've been doing alot of editing and work, but it can't be perfect...
LightningStorms
2007-04-05
ch 8, reply
is angela old now?
maybe...
swim freak 9000
2007-04-04
ch 8, reply
It was...okay. Not your best chappie. Things are happening REALLY fast, and after working such a big spell to reverse Elva's curse, you might want to describe what's happening more, and wouldn't Eragon be tired? Well, I still really like this fanfic, so keep UPDATING...
Well, doesn't matter now, as I realized I could use her and changed it so that she isn't healed. I know it's confusing, but give me a break! I was new!
eragonsgirl#1
2007-04-04
ch 7, anon.
O.O wow...like i said before awsome! i believe this is one of the best stoires i have read. possibly the best...keep up the good work. i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you very much. I decided before I get off tonight, I was going to spread the message that this moved as my old fans have not returned to the new version.
eragonsgirl#1
2007-04-04
ch 1, anon.
wow. that was awsome! two thumbs up!
Glad you like it
swim freak 9000
2007-04-03
ch 7, reply
NO! Don't kill Roran! No! One question: where is Aedail? They wouldn't just leave her back at home...would they? Oh, and (though I should have said it earlier) YAY! CHAPPIE 7! I luv your fanfic. No ending it. Or else...I'll...be sad, I guess. Not much I can do here.
Lol, have you been reading the newer version
swim freak 9000
2007-04-02
ch 6, reply
Whoa. Here comes Murty! YAY! Great chappie, I loved the description of the stag. I don't really like how stupid Katrina sounds, but whatever, it's your fanfic. UPDATE!
Sorry, I know you like her, but it was nessesary for drama. This is a drama fic after all
swim freak 9000
2007-03-31
ch 4, reply
HEY! I'm the first reviwer! I guess I'm just amazing like that (jk).
Aw...poor Eragon. Thanks for rescuing Katrina, though. She's one of my favorite characters! But why would Murtagh pick up a helpless random elf baby and keep it? You'd think he'd give it away or sumthing when he got back to the city, or he'd kill it, or even take it back to the elves...oh well. Oh, and I REALLY luved your description of Thorn in the beginning.
Keep up the awesomeful (and yes, I know it's not a word) work!
Sorry to break it to you, but your acually my second... sorry. Keep reviewing! they brighten my day, good or bad
cyber viper42
2007-03-31
ch 4, reply HI
This is a great start for ur story, keep updating it!
The idea of the baby elf is AWSOME...wish i thought of that...
Keep up the great work
Thank you and too all my reviewers, never stop with your reviews, they make me smile:)
