Chapter 9: Helpless

The Diary of a Konoha Vixen

By: _*-L-*_

Starring: You! ( For the Girls )

DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto. GAWD! I am so tired of saying that, LoL!

SORRY FOR SPELLING ERRORS!!!! PLEASE DON'T NAG ME ABOUT IT PEOPLES, WE'RE NOT IN ENGLISH CLASS RIGHT NOW. - -LOL!

Story Continues

"Well…I am waiting for an answer. What is going on here?" Itachi asked patiently, hating to repeat himself.

"Please don't all of you jump up and answer at once." Sasuke chimes sarcastically, seeing as nobody waited to speak up.

You frowned to yourself and started to speak up while watching the others tend to the now bruising Tenten. "Well actually it was all my fau-"

"It's that little bun wearing twit's fault right there Itachi." Orochimaru said in angry tone, as he pointed an accusing finger down at Tenten.

"Orochimaru-Sama please don't move or you'll get blood all over your new suite." Kabuto pleaded to his master, as he help balanced him onto his feet.

"No, Tenten has nothing to do with this and you know it, the matter was between you and me. So don't pull others into our little quarrel, Orochimaru-Sama." You said calmly to the snake-like man.

"From the looks of it Y/n I would have to say that Tenten was indeed involved in this matter. If throwing a drink on someone else isn't starting a conflict, I don't know what is then." Itachi stated simply, as he looked down to you with a calm facial expression.

How did he know that Tenten threw a drink in his face? Were they watching us the whole time? You thought.

"Itachi I don't know why you bring in such worthless whores into the Uchiha manor, but someone needs teach them a lesson quick. So next time they won't go around disrespecting others that are clearly of higher stature than themselves." Orochimaru said.

"And just who in the hell are you calling a worthless whore? You sneaky two-faced snake, go back to the hole you slithered up out from you bastard." Tenten countered, as she stood up and spitted at Orochimaru's face.

Tenten what the heck are you doing? You just added 20x more fuel to the already raging fire by doing that. That's not helping us on our part right now. You thought with a shocked look on your face. You heard some gasps erupt from the room, while others were making rude remarks on Tenten behavior right then.

"Tenten calm yourself before you do something you regret." Naruto whispered to his companion.

Orochimaru's face had darkened at Tenten. "I hope you don't let this behavior go undone without punishment Itachi." He stared into the dark eyes of the elder Uchiha. "If not her, then someone has to pay for her negative actions." Orochimaru's stare focused onto you now.

Kakashi then stood in front of you, as if to protect you from the snake. "Now, now Orochimaru I am sure we can work things out in Itachi's office." Kakashi reasoning with the snake.

"Of course this event won't go unpunished; our girls know their place in this business or at least we thought they did." Sasuke said coldly as he stared at Tenten.

"But Sasuke it wasn't Tenten's fault please don't punish her for my misdeeds." You pleaded to the raven before you.

"That's enough Y/n. There's no need to create a bigger scene then there already is." Itachi said to you. "Come lets us handle this matter somewhere more private, so the others can continue to enjoy their stay here." He added on as he placed his hand behind your back to guide you out of the lounge.

"O…okay Itachi." You said slowly, going along with the older man.

"Hey, you three!" Sasuke snapped his fingers at Naruto, Kiba and Shikamaru and they jumped at the man's calling. "Get this mess cleaned up, this is a business here not a playground." Sasuke then followed behind you and Itachi.

"Yes sir." The three men said in unison as they quickly did as they were told, like a dog to its master.

"After you Orochimaru." Kakashi said as he motioned with his hand for him and Kabuto to got before him and he followed behind, then he stopped in his footsteps. "What are you waiting for an invitation? Come on Tenten we're not threw with you." He told the young woman without even glancing back at her.

Tenten frowned. "Yes Kakashi-San." She said in a faint tone, realizing she wasn't off the hook just yet. She followed behind Kakashi.

"How troublesome…somebody always has to start a uproar in this place, and leave it to Tenten to stand up for her womanly rights." Said an irritated Shikamaru.

Kiba watched all of you exit the lounge, and everybody went to go back to what they were doing and rolled his eyes.

"Get this mess cleaned up, this is a business here not a playground." Kiba said mockingly. "Ugh! That Uchiha is such an ass. He needs just one good ass kicking to set him straight, bastard." He said as he moved the table back onto its legs.

"Oi Kiba…." Was that the blonde boy could say. He was too focused on what was to become of you.

There you stood in the deathly quiet elevator with the Uchiha brothers on either side of you. Behind you felt the darkened eyes of Orochimaru and Kabuto glaring into the back of your head, which made you feel uneasy and sort of….dizzy? You didn't like being in small tension filled areas; it kind of made you feel sick to your stomach. That's when you felt a strong hand fall upon your shoulders and you suddenly stiffened at the touch.

"Are you feeling well Y/n?" Kakashi murmured softly into your ear, as he leaned forward towards your body.

You saw that Sasuke and Itachi's gaze fell on upon you from the corner of their eyes when they saw Kakashi showing his concern for you. You looked down to the ground and breathed in slowly before exhaling just enough for the other ears in the elevator to hear you.

"I am fine Kakashi…just feeling a little tired. That's all." You said slowly, choosing your words carefully.

"Umm…I see, you should probably get some rest then." He replied.

You agreed with the mysterious man with a nod, you suddenly found your eyes glancing towards your friends direction, behind you toward the right. Tenten was indeed nervous, but you couldn't make out her facial expression, it was unreadable. She caught sight of you glancing at her and she gave you a forced semi-smile as if to tell that 'everything is going to be alright, don't worry.' You had the feeling that Tenten was having trouble believing her own thought herself. And you just gave her a sad, apologetic stare asking her silently for your forgiveness, because it was you were the reason they were in this situation now.

You heard the bell of the elevator chime stating the arrival of the floor. Itachi walked out of the elevator with his hands behind his back and turned around to face you.

"Follow me Y/n." was all he said.

"Yes sir." You walked out of the elevator and stood next to him.

"Sasuke, Kakashi would you please lead the other to my office." Itachi said smoothly.

"Whatever." Sasuke said looking at his older brother, as he pushed the button on the elevator.

You watched a frown cover Tenten's face as the doors close of the elevator before you. A terrible feeling crept over your body as your friend vanished before your eyes. You felt Itachi take his hand into yours and pulled on it lightly indicating for you to follow him.

"Itachi…how come we separated from the others? I thought we were all going to go and talk things over on what happened." You said quietly while a faint redness crept over your face.

"We are but you're going to your room, its clear that you're not feeling well Y/n." Itachi said in his deep rich voice.

"But…Tenten….she needs me. Don't you want to hear my side of the story Itachi?" you questioned the elder Uchiha softly.

Itachi opened your door and pulled you into your room and closing it after you.

"I do, but going up there now will only put more stress on you." Itachi reading you like a book, he could tell that something was bothering you. "I would like you to rest Y/n, Kakashi was right you don't seem to feel well." He continued as he placed a hand on your cheek and rubbed it softly.

"I …" you started then stopped. I am sort of tired; maybe rest will do me some good. "Yes Itachi….if you insist." Agreeing with your boss finally.

"Why don't you change into some more comfortable clothes, so you can lie down while I go to get something for you to make you relax, okay?"

"Alright, thank you Itachi." You agreed, as you made your way to the dresser to pull out some clothes. "Itachi-" You called out to the man only to find that he was gone already.

Where the heck did you go? I wanted to ask him a question. One minute he's there, the next he's gone.

You settled on just wearing some little shorts and a tank top. You let your hair down and fell into your bed carelessly with your feet dangling on the side and closed your eyes waiting for Itachi's return.

"Well that was quick." You open your eyes to see Itachi standing over you, with a tray in his hands. He placed it on your nightstand. "I see you're quick to get out of your clothes, some would find that a positive thing." He joked.

You gave him a slight smile, noticing his small humor. "Haha, very funny boss man." You said softly and closed your eyes again.

Itachi found himself, yet again, staring at the beautiful features of your face. He watched your chest rise and fall slowly to your steady breathing. You opened your eyes to focus them on him when you felt his sudden touch on your thick, but toned thighs. You found that he was staring back at you; he continued to slowly move his hand down your thigh onto your leg. He felt you flinch a little by his touch and smirked at you, he slowly lifted your legs up with his hands and turned your body so now you were lying down correctly in your bed. Itachi then pulled the covers over your body and sat down beside you.

"Thank you." You murmured to him for helping you into bed. "Itachi when am I going to be able to go back home to visit my dad, I know he's worri-"

"Shh." He said as he placed his finger on my lips. "You will be able to see him in due time Y/n. You should give your father a call after you wake up okay?"

Why doesn't anybody want to talk about my dad when I bring him up? You frowned a little, because you wanted a real answer from Itachi. You figured that he would be the one to finally give out an answer, but you were wrong.

You sighed out and rubbed your eyes feeling a headache coming on. "Yeah, I think I will do that." You said in defeat.

"Here take this." He said holding a pink pill in the palm of his hand.

You sat up slowly, letting the covers fall to your lap. You took the pill from his hand and stared down at it. "What is it?" you quizzed Itachi.

This kid is sharp; she lets nothing get passed her. "Just something to help calm your nerves, so you can sleep better." He said in all honestly.

"Oh…." Glancing at it once more then back up at him.

"Go ahead Y/n…take it, it not poison." He said steadily with a small smile on his face. "Don't you trust me?"

"Of course I do Itachi." You said softly before tilting your head back, opening your mouth and letting the pill fall to the back of your throat.

"Good girl, it should start to kick in within a couple of minutes." He grabbed the glass of ice water and brought it up to your lips and you slowly taken in a couple of gulps of it.

"I can feel it starting to work on me already." You said cutely with a smile, as you leaned back down to rest.

He pulled the covers back over your body and rested his hands on either side of your face. He drew his face close to your ear. "Now I want you to rest and don't even think about leaving this room." His warm breath tickled your ear.

"I will, don't worry." You said, watching him pull back a little with your half-closed eyes.

I want her so bad right now. "You are one beautiful girl." Itachi said, now that you two were face to face, his hand caressing your cheek again. I want to kiss those feather soft lips of yours.

You felt a little hot with him so closed to you, but you didn't care. Relaxation had taken over your body, thanks to that mysterious pill you had taken. "Thank you."

"I just can't seem to take my eyes off of you; every time I do you manage to draw back into you." He kissed your neck softly, as he was taking in your scent.

"Really, I do?" you asked, not really hearing what he is saying because you're half asleep now.

"If you only knew the things or positions I would have your body in once I get you to myself." He traced his tongue from your neck up to your cheek and kissed it. "But I wouldn't take advantage of you when you're vulnerable like this." Well…maybe not just yet.

You giggled at Itachi. "Eww, that's nasty and it tickles Itachi." You're so out of it right now. You're seeing double of Itachi now. "Dang Itachi I didn't know you had a twin there buddy, Hey Itachi's twin brother, how are you? You leaned in close to his twin brother (which is thin air by the way) and whisper to him. "You're SO much cuter then your brother over there." You nudged your head over in Itachi's direction. "But don't tell him that, or he'll get mad, Okay?" You laughed quietly to yourself.

What the hell? Maybe I shouldn't have given her that pill. He steadies his gaze on you then smirks while letting out a small laugh, then leaned forward and kissed you on the lips. "I want to have your body right now Y/n." Your lips are so soft, I want more.

"I want you too Itachi." You're clearly not in your right state of mind. You lean up a little and kiss Itachi and wrap your arms around his neck and pull him down to deepen the kiss, as you laid your head back down on the bed.

For some odd reason you found yourself willing to give your body to the elder Uchiha, no you wanted for him to take you to places you never been before, and have him do things to your body that no man has ever gotten close to in a million years.

Your hands drifted from Itachi's neck down to his hard chest, where you began to feel all over his muscles. You slowly begin to unbutton his shirt without breaking the kiss you two shared deeply. "Itachi please…give me what I want. I need you." You whispered into his ear seductively before biting on it, as you successfully removed his shirt from his body. You're glanced at his body; it was so chiseled and toned. He has the body of a Greek god.

Itachi being the one to always take what is set out in front of him. He couldn't bring himself to take your innocence away from you like this. I want too so bad, but I can't bring myself to do this to such a thing to an innocent girl like you, Y/n. He suddenly broke away from the kiss, hearing a soft grunt come from you at the same time, indicating that you didn't want to stop doing what you were doing right now. He watched as your eyelashes fluttered some what as your blank golden eyes bore into his onyx ones.

He felt your hands wrap around neck again to pull him back in to finish what he started, because you were more than willing to do it now. Again, Itachi pulled back away from you sitting up straight on your bed, by your side. You huffed at him with irritation taking over you now, you made a second attempt to pull the man down into your grasp, but you failed when he grabbed both of your hands and pinned them above your head.

"Itachi, why'd you stop…I liked it." You whined to him.

"As much as I would like to have fun with you, I can't Y/n…not like this." He sighed, as he felt your body struggle a bit under his.

"But you can…I want you too, and I know you want too also." You purred to him.

"Y/n…" he said, as he thought things over in his head, almost giving into temptation. "Just rest little one." Itachi said as he kissed you softly on your forehead.

You blushed at the raven and watched as he pulled away from you. "But…Itachi." You pleaded.

"I will send someone to check up on you later, and no buts." He said in a firm, yet soft tone.

"Yes sir." You sighed in defeat to him as you laid back down in your bed.

"That's a good girl." He then pulled the covers back over you and tucked you in, as a father would to his daughter. He couldn't resist kissing you one last time before heading to your door to leave. Those lips are like a drug, they keep making me come back for more. "Sweet dreams, little one." Itachi added, before closing the door behind him as he left.

After Itachi said his farewell to you, you found it hard to keep your eyes open anymore; you suddenly fell into a deep sleep.

In Itachi's Office

"Yes…yes I understand Orochimaru. I will be sure to handle this situation myself personally." Itachi said, as he rubbed his temples to soothe down his upcoming headache. God, he won't shut the hell up.

"Well I don't see you doing nothing right now Uchiha, if you need any suggesti-" Orochimaru was explaining.

"Orochimaru are you trying to tell us how to run our business." Sasuke asked in a warning tone.

"No." He hissed in response. "I just want to make sure that this whore pays for her actions." He stared over towards Tenten who was being held captive by Izumo and Kotetsu.

"She will Orochimaru, so stop fucking pushing the matter." Sasuke gritted out.

"Sasuke calm down little brother. If all Orochimaru wants to see is Tenten face suffer the consequences for her actions then he will." Itachi finally giving Orochimaru what he wants, so he could shut the hell up.

"Itachi-Sama please hear me out, it wasn't my fault I was only defending Y/n." Tenten cried out to the man.

Itachi ignored the woman's pleas for sympathy. She then turned to Sasuke who seem to show no interest in the matter. "Sasuke aren't you going to say anything?"

"Yes, I do." He looked at her, seeing hope in her chocolate brown eyes. "You shouldn't be going around disrespecting your superiors, and then you wouldn't be in this predicament Tenten." He said coldly, as he sensed her precious hopes shatter before her.

"I shouldn't have expected help from an asshole like yourself." You screamed out with tears of hate in her eyes.

"Oh shut up will you." Orochimaru said, as he delivered a right hook to Tenten's already bruised cheek, forcing her to back a bit.

Sasuke rolled his eyes. "Cry me a fucking river Tenten, this has grown quite bothersome let me know when your finished with her, I'll be in my office." He said nonchalantly, before exiting his brother's office.

"Kakashi…please…help me." Tenten said in a low tone. Kakashi was the only reasonable one out of the other two men; she figured that he would not allow this to go on.

"You should have thought things through before you decided to act out in such an idiotic matter." Kakashi said, showing no sympathy as he turned his back to the girl.

"You heartless bastards, I hate you all, I quit. I regretted the day I decided to work for you piece of shit Uchihas." Tenten bellow out.

Itachi shot a life threatening stare to Tenten, with his darkened, emotionless eyes. "The only person that decides when your services are not needed is me, other than that the only way you leave this manor is in a body bag Tenten."

"Hopefully you could arrange for that then Itachi." Orochimaru said wickedly.

"No, that wont be needed." He responded as he leaned back in his chair. "Kotetsu." He called out.

"Sir." He responded.

"Izumo."

"Yes boss." He replied also.

"Why don't you two do us a favor and show ole' Tenten here, how we handle those who decide to break the rules here." He paused for a moment and smirked. "And go easy on her since it's her first time."

The men both nodded to Itachi. Izumo let go of Tenten's right arm and Kotetsu grabbed onto to it. Izumo then stood in front of Tenten and stared into her into her eyes that were fueled by hate. 'I'm sorry' he mouthed out to her before punching her in her face, causing blood to come gushing out of her bottom lip.

"Oh…I think I'm going to enjoy this." Orochimaru said with a smirk spreading across his face, he did enjoy her pain.

Tenten soon felt another sharp pain surge through her body as Izumo fist connected with her stomach, causing her to double over and cough uncontrollable trying to gasp the air back into her lungs, her saliva oozing from her mouth. She tried to break away from Kotetsu tight grip holding her back from defending herself, but she only received another bone cracking hit to her ribs. She screamed out in pain as her body than became weak and Tenten began lean forward as she began to fall, but Kotetsu pulled her limp body back up onto the feet.

"See Tenten, now you know what happens when you break the rules here, you suffer for it." Itachi said as he laughed at her.

Izumo had then grown tired of beating up on the girl and decided to switch up with Kotetsu. Tenten who was obviously damn near unconscious continued to take powerful, painful blows to her body from Kotetsu. The sadistic look on Orochimaru's showed nothing but pure bliss and he licked his lips with his inhuman tongue, he loved hearing every yelp, scream, gasp, crack erupt from Tenten. Tenten was now on her knees with Izumo stilling holding onto her. Her face was bloody, hair was messy and unruly and her head bobbing up and down slowly trying to remain of coconscious. Kotetsu landed another punch to her face and Izumo let her lifeless body fall to the floor.

"I want more, give me more pain." Orochimaru said.

The two tired men were standing over Tenten huffing and buffing, their gazes both fell on Itachi who just stared down at Tenten from the seat of his desk, seeing unfazed by this woman lying on the floor. "No….she has had enough pain for now." He said stoically.

"Yes sir." Both men backed away from Tenten.

Thank god, I got tired of hearing her scream out like that, made me get a damn headache. Kakashi thought to himself.

"What?" Orochimaru's joyous expression left his face and replaced by one of anger.

"Tenten has been beat for over a little over 5 minutes, I believe she has learned her lesson." Itachi said dryly. "Is that a problem for you Orochimaru?" He questioned that other man.

"Fine, that is enough then." Orochimaru growled out, before looking down at Tenten bloody body.

"If that lasted any longer, the poor girl would have had ended up in hospital …or worst." Kakashi said in his deep velvety voice.

Orochimaru walked over to Tenten's body and knelt down by her side and grabbed a fist full of her hair and whispered into her ear, "Look at where your so-called 'defending a friend' got you, next time you should know just to stay out of people business you lousy wench."

Tenten forced herself to open her eyes slightly and lay her blurry vision on the snake before her. "Go..t-to hell….you ba-bastard." She managed choked out before passing out on the floor.

Orochimaru threw her head back towards the ground. "You filthy little bitch!" he pulled his foot back ready to kick Tenten across her face, as she lay there helplessly.

"Orochimaru…don't lay another hand on my employee." Itachi said sharply and emotionlessly, causing the snake to freeze in his place, and he continued. "You had your fun today already, leave the girl along now."

"Yes, Orochimaru I think you have overdone you stay here, I think its best for you to leave now." Kakashi hinted out for the snake to leave.

"I agree Kakashi, Orochimaru you have started yet another uproar in this place." Itachi stood up from his chair. "So why don't you leave and come back another day, when things have died down?" Itachi added.

"Umph. Whatever." Orochimaru said, before taking his eyes off of Itachi down to Tenten and smiled. "Oh and before I go Tenten I owe you one." Orochimaru spitted out a big ball on saliva onto Tenten face, before he started to laugh. "Stupid on Kabuto let's leave this godforsaken hell hole." He called out as he exited the room.

"I'm right behind you Orochimaru-Sama." Kabuto responded as he stepped over Tenten's body and exited the over.

Itachi set his sight on Tenten, and then looked away from her with disgust. "Get her out of my sight…take her down to the dungeon, I'm tired of looking at such a sad sight." He said in a bored tone.

"Right away sir!" Kotetsu & Izumo in unison, before taking Tenten up by the arms and dragging out of the room.

"Kakashi call somebody up to get this mess cleaned up, it's quite a nuisance." Itachi rested his head in the palm of his hands, as he sat back down at his desk.

"Yeah, your right." He responded, as he saw blood splattered across the clean white floor, along with skid marks of it from when Tenten was dragged out of the room. Kakashi picked up the phone and call up for assistance.

In Your Room

You slowly began to awaken from your deep slumbers and you let out a big yawn as you stretched out in your bed. You rubbed your eyes as you noticed that there was no sun light beaming threw your window. What? Where did the heck did the sun go? You got out of your bed and ran to your window and stared out it, only to meet the moon light and the stars staring down at you.

You looked over your shoulder to stare at the clock by your night stand and it read 2:41A.M. A shock filled expression was plastered on your face as you ran up to the clock, picked it up and start shaking it, hoping it displayed the wrong time or something. I know I couldn't have slept this long, what the heck did Itachi give me?

"I was supposed to go home today to see dad." You frowned to yourself. "It's too late at night…now what am I going to do?"

'You should give your father a call after you wake up okay?' Itachi's words came to mind as you thought for a moment, then you smiled.

"That's what I'm going to do. I'm sure father won't mind me calling this late at night anyways." You sat down on your bed, picked up the phone and started to dial your phone number. The ringed and ringed and ringed but no answer. Why isn't he picking up? Dad was always a light sleeper, you can't get nothing pass him.

The phone finally stopped ringing and smiled spread across your face as someone picked up to answer the phone. Finally…. "Hey dad it's me, Y/n I hope your not that worri-" you were cut off in your sentence by someone's voice.

"Hi this is Iruka." He said cheerfully.

"And Y/n here!" you were laughing in the background.

This is the…answering service. You smiled softly to yourself

"Sorry we couldn't make it to the phone right now, but if you leave your name and number." Iruka said.

"We will get call you back as soon as possible - - If we feel like it, that is." You finished off before running away laughing in the background.

"Y/N! Didn't I tell you not to say that?" Iruka said, slightly irritated and sighed out, before he continued. "Anyways leave your message after the- -" Then you heard the beep from the machine.

"Uh…Hi dad…it me…." You said slowly searching for the right words to say. "I wanted to let you know that- -" You stopped what you were about to say, when you heard a knock come from your door. "I have to go, I'll call you back later dad - - I promise." You said quickly before hanging up the phone in lighten speed.

Then the knock came out the door again. Who can that be? You wondered. The heard the handle turn and you watched as the door started to open slowly. You couldn't make out the figure coming into your room, due to the darkness. You quickly got back under your covers and pretended you were sleep.

The dark figure slowly crept over to the side of your bed and called out to you. "Y/n…are you awake?"

WELL THAT'S ALL IM WRITING DOWN FOR NOW PEOPLES, LOL IM TIRED AND I GOT SCHOOL IN THE MORNING….SO I'LL TRY TO UPDATE LATER MAYBE ON SATURDAY OR SUNDAY. OH YEAH, HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS LITTLE TIBIT…..AND DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW - - MY PRETTIES!!!

PAYCE OUT!!!!!

- L

Oh yeah I almost forgot…I know some of yall been asking, waiting and probably thinking, when the hell are you going to get laid by a guy in this story - - I' am sorry that I hadn't got to the juicy stuff yet. But the reason why is because I decided who should I make you stare your first time with. Man I love all these guys so much I would make you have a 9-some or a 10-some with all these dudes just to make myself happy LMAO! But then again I thought that I that would be going too far.

So what better way to discover who is the first guy that is going to get a taste of your goodies, then by a good old fashion POLL!

So Vote now on who you want to hump first ladies, and I'll gladly make your dreams come true.

Naruto

Sasuke ( LMAO! I completely forgot to add him...thanx to -diamond-chic-94.x for letting me know about that)

Itachi

Kakashi

Neji

Kiba

Sai

Orochimaru

Kabuto

Rock Lee

Shikamaru

Gaara ( almost 4got about him--lol )

Temari…LoL!

WARNING!!!!!

Whoever ya'll decide pick will probably effect you in the future of this story and most likely how you will turn up at the end of it, some for the GOOD other BAD! So choose wisely! Thank You! LMAO!

AUTHOR RESPONCES

PYROMAGIC - YOU KNOW HOW TO WRITE A STORY! PUTTING ME IN THERE ROCKS MY SCOKS, ROOM, WORLD! AND TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH...I LOVE YOU! YOU MUST CONTINUE WRITING OR MY TWIN SISTER WILL PUT IN THE DAREKST, DEEPEST, BLOIDIES PITS OF HELL! JA NE!

---- Awww you think I can write!!! ( blushes ) I knew my idea would be good for not only me, but for everybody. And I love you more for taking the time out to read my story. LMAO! And I will continue writing for you…and your deep dark twin, gotta keep everybody happy. ----

Mary Quillin - No, no!!
Tell me what is going to -forget the worl- P
Well, a really nice chapter
Can't wait for the next one!!

---- Hehe, Well I was going to put what was going to happen next in chapter 8, but I decided to be evil and have you wait a bit, But now you shall see what is to become of you my dear. Muhahahaha (dark, depressing music playing in the background) ----

Kristy Kitten - it's getting better and better. I'd so do that to Orochimaru if he hit TenTen.

---- Thanks, I knew if yall would give me a chance it would get better, hopefully. "….Oh Orochimaru is a A-hole….but in some sick and twisted dream I had a couple of nights ago. (Looks around and whispers to you) I did it to him - - and I enjoyed it LOL! (dies) ----

SaaneChan - Yay Chapter 8 is up and I have to say I LOVED it like your other one's and I was getting rely into in it when you had to stop it.
Please UPDATE SOON!
Oh yeah and Lemon means...coughSEXCough

---- I'm glad I totally made you happy Saane, lol I thought I was the only one who did it. If I'm reading this crazy bomb story and find out the writer hasn't updated, I would go back and read the other chapters over to satisfy my fix, LOL!

Lemon means sex…..WELL I MUST BE A LEMON-FIEND THEN HAHA ----

kitoku Flow - Oh yeah i love kingdom hearts i play the game like crazy ...when i have the cheat book looks around
i mean its not a cheat book it...a... guide...yeah thats it

---- OH YAY!!! A fellow kingdom hearts addict, I LOVE YOU! LOL! Man I just can't get enough of that game - - I can't wait til KH3 comes out, maybe by that time I would have enough munny for a PS3 (sighs) LoL. Girl don't trip at least you can afford the cheat book, or what we like to call them a guide lol. My broke butt has to go online for cheat codes and write'em down because my printer broke lol…..But I think I'm going to come out with the KH story maybe later as I write this story or when I finish this one - - I'm not really multitalented like that you see. I have the plot ready and everything….its going to be a YOU, Sora, Riku, Squall and Cloud story (devils horns come out of my head )----

kitoku Flow - I hate your stories I Hate - nah im just playin
the character is just like me but im not thaat beautiful im just God dang sexy
i would have whoped sakuras monkey tail first ya'll see my right eye twitch then say some things then start throwing my fist...thats how i roll throw her hands u HECKS YEA keep it up gurl

---- LOL! I was about to cry when you said you hated my story kitoku. (dies) All hail the sexiest goddess known to man - - Kitoku! (bows at your feet and kisses them) Hell yeah I totally want to roll with you - - I like that 'kick your ass now and ask questions later' vibe thing you got going on there lol. (grabs a chain saw) Let's go kill that monster we all know of and hate - - that is Sakura! ----

YouAndMe - Your stories are flipin awsome please update I realy wana see who you have sex with first

---- Thankies for loving my story, love. MAN! I am totally lost at this moment too. I have no idea who I am going to make you hump first. If it was my choice I would have all those guys run a train on you lol, but maybe we should take baby steps first LMAO! I think imam hold a poll on who you want to make sweet, sweet love to first. ----

Junjun249 - Yay for another chapter of awesome sexyness! (sorry I didn't review on the last chapter- visiting grandma in florida DX) gives you pocky Here's for you:D Keep writing!

---- (cheers along with you in a cheerleading outfit) Yeah, YAY FOR ME UPDATING!! Oh hey no problamo about the last chapter, do you enjoy your trip? I so wish I could go to Florida. (sighs) OH YAY! I HAVE A PRESENT!!!!!!!!! I'LL TREASURE IT FOREVER JUNJUN! (puts it in her closet next to her Itachi Shrine) Oh Itachi, Itachi, Itachi! (drools) ----

TheOtaku - Update Update Update!

----INDEED, INDEED, INDEED I WILL. Hehe! ----

TwilightPrincess - I only comment on good Stories and ket me tell you this one is AWSOME AS HELL.
update!

---- LoL! You do the same thing I do, or either I am too lazy to sign in and comment to the story. (feels bad for not commenting to other ppls stories) I need to stop being so darn lazy haha. I will update as soon as possible. ----

Suimasen - I just have 1 word UPDATE!

---- Your wish is my command, master! (makes chapter 9 appear right before your eyes) I hope this satisfies you mistress. ----

SasukeNaruto2039 - Update update update update I cant wait to see chapter eigth I wanna see what Sasuke and the otheres are gonna say when they see that you hit Orochimaru

---- (reads your comment and starts writing until fingers pop off then stops) LoL! Wait what am I going to make Sasuke and them say? (scratches head) Aww darn it you readers have the easiest part of the job, and that's sit back and enjoy. LoL! ----

-diamond-chic-94.x - damn girl!! she beat oro-temes ! This is one awsome story! Update!

---- LMAO! Well somebody has to do it, since nobody else can seem to do it in the real show, he's always getting away from them LMAO! Maybe they should add you on as a character in the show - - you'll be whooping on everyone lol ----

CrzyC - I absolutly love this story I cant wait to see who she does it with first and Orochimaru got knocked the out.
Plz update

---- YAY! Somebody else loves my story too!!!! Gosh I am so lost on who you gonna hump first, and its making me MAD! LoL! Orochimaru needs to get his ass kicked more often, that man - - err wait creature…(pause for a second and decides on it) Yeah creature needs to get smacked up a few good times once in a while. Haha! ----

kachie1317 - w00t! awsum story! (sorry for not reveiwing in the other chapters sheepish
look) hope you update soon!

---- Thanks girlie, hehe. No problem just be sure that you review ALL my chapter in the future ( LMAO! Just kidding, okay no I'm not ) ----