Good job, your OC is only 30% Mary-Sue/Gary-Stew! That's quite good, really. A nice mix of the realistic and fantasy. However, you may want to tone them down a little, or else watch as your readers drift away fed up, disappointed and sick of the same tired story lines. But, by and large, you're doing pretty well. Keep it up. :)
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