Whoa...Your OC is 80% Mary-Sue/Gary-Stew. I'm actually a little worried for you. Are you sure you answered the questions right? If so, then you have a lot of aspects of your Mary-Sue/Gary-Stew...I mean, OC to modify, or just ditch. Most likely, ditch. Remember, making your OC 'better', doesn't make your story 'better'. To create a real, involving and entertaining story, means to create a well-rounded character with flaws and issues like everyone else. The stories you write on here are for the readers, and that means it has to be something you, yourself would take the time to read. Reading OC stories based on idealistic Mary-Sues or Gary-Stews are basically like reading biased biographies of some celebrity by some stalker-ish fanatic that idealises everything about them. Pointless and sickening.
Why not tell me what you got? All you have to do is press that little button, right there. Right down there. You know the one. All input is appreciated! :)