Hey readers! I came up w/ this story from this movie I saw but its a little different from the movie. Well COMMENT A LOT if you want more.

PS: Dont own anything.


"Leah!" Jared calls from a distance. I look behind myself to the gate and he walks into my backyard.

"Hey Leah, what are you doing?" he says while sits next to me and has his arm around my shoulders as we face the forest.

"Oh Im just taking pictures of the nature, today seemed like the best day to do it." I say as I take my camera and take another picture of the forest.

"That's my Leah, always taking every opportunity that comes your way." He says while kissing my left cheek and I smile as I take the shot.

"Come on, I want to get more pictures inside the forest too." I say as I get up and Jared follows right behind me.

"Okay Lee-Lee but we shouldn't get lost in here." He says as he's behind me and intertwines his fingers with mine in my free hand. Jared and I have been dating for almost a year, we love each other so much that we're almost always together. Everyone thinks of us as La Pushes Destined Couple. Jared even talks about our future together, he promised me that we're going to get married right after college and make a big house in La Push. Have 3 kids named Sarahy, Elena, and Jared Jr. I remember last year for my 15th birthday he gave me a promise ring with a rose on it(Its on my profile along w/ a dress also), he told me it didn't cost a lot so I don't have to worry but his family is rich so a low cost to them is $200 and lower.

My cellphone vibrates and its Angela, my worlds best friends, we're so close that people say wear twins from different families. "Hey Angela." I say as I answer the phone.

"Hey whats up?" she replies.

"Jared decided to accompany me to taking some photo's of nature." I say.

"Oh sorry for interrupting, god Jared's so I better let your get bsck to lover-boy, Bye." She says and then the line goes dead. And so Jared and I keep walking before he speaks.

"I like it when you wear that dress." He says and I look down at my black long sleeved dress with a ruffled skirt and black flats. He always says that when I wear this, he said it brings out more of my cuteness.

"I know you do but thank you anyway." I say as I step in s tree root and hop on one branch.

"Leah, Don't climb up there! You going to get hurt and your wearing the wrong clothes for climbing." Jared says as I stand on the branch while holding another to keep my balance.

"You know the wrong attire has never stopped me from doing things before." I say as I climb higher. "Besides, I want to take a photo of that birds nest." I say and I'm almost there. I take another step but I lose my footing and suddenly I see every branch zoom past me as I fall and my curly black hair blowing in front of my face. I hit the ground hard that once I feel the ground below me, I see is black, Im scared.

"Oh my god! NO! Leah wake up! No! Lee-Lee please wake up! SETH!!SUE,HARRY!!!!!" Jared yells and I can feel his hands slide behind my back and hug me. "Please Lee-Lee wake up….I love you." He whispers in my hear before kissing me softly and then I can't hear or feel anything anymore, its like I'm asleep.

Month and a half later

Beep…beep…beep…beep…beep…beep.

Ugh that beeping is getting annoying! Someone needs to turn it off! Ouch, I have a headache.

"Mom, can you get me some Tylenol?!" I yell out and I open my eyes to see Seth sitting on the window seat in my room, he's gasping at me. Then his eyes start to water.

"Seth, what's wrong?" I ask while he runs and hugs me.

Then I remember I feel and blacked out. Everyone in the house walks in and cries about me and tells me what happened. Ive been in a Coma for a month and a half.

"So where's Jared? Or Angela?" I say excitedly as I get ready to go see them. Everyone in the room falls silent but I just walk out of the room and tell my parents I'll be back later.

I walk to Jared's white two story house. His parents car is gone but his is parked outside. I then see the front door open and Angela steps out while followed by Jared. I was going to say hi until I noticed something, they were holding hands. My stomach has butterflies in them and I don't feel so good.

Jared turns Angela around & she then puts her arms around his neck, I know what's going to happen now. I can feel my heart literally breaking from the sight. Jared says something to her and then they both lean in and they kiss. Then they don't stop and I can feel the tears in my eyes but I'm frozen, I can't speak or even do anything but stand there in pain. Jared then pulls away and smiles, it fades and turns into a twisted reaction once he notices me. He can see how hurt I am and he looks ashamed. Angela notices his reaction and turns around. I stare at her and she first looks shocked, then joy, followed by ashamed and looks down at the porch floor.

"Leah, I'm so sorry." Jared barely whispers. Angela looks up again but she has water forming in her eyes now. My best friend did this to me, hoe could she? She knew how I felt about him, she was the one I told all the stories about me and Jared and how much I loved him and the plans we shared together.

"Lee-Lee, Im so sorry, please, Im just so sor-" he said and the tears start to stream down my cheeks. I cut him off.

"My best friend." I whisper. Angela then starts to have the tears come down her cheeks too.

I slip the ring Jared have me off my finger and grab the best friend necklace and break it off of my neck. I hold them in my hand and stare at the 2 objects before tossing them into the mud, along with their respect.

Angela sobs as she sees the necklace tossed and Jared looks heartbroken from the lost of the ring on my hand. I just broke his cold heart.

I then turn around and walk town the road, once Im out of distance, I run. Jared Gilbert has broken both of mine & his hearts.


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