What's up guys? I hope you all enjoyed the first chapter. I appreciate all the positive feed back from those who read it. I still need some ideas for the next chapters. I will read and consider all ideas, so don't think yours won't work. You don't know what I have planned for future chapters ;). Anyways, lets get reading. ~Love ya
Mabel:
That was the worst thing he could have ever said to me. I never thought he would say that, and yet it just happened. Dipper hates me. My twin hates me. Because I chose Stan over him? I listened to Stan because he said please. He never says please, so I knew it was important.
Then everything got blurry around the edges. I couldn't see who was whom, but I could tell people were standing in front of me. All of a sudden, a blue glow formed in the center of my vision, filling the room with it's light. I felt myself start to grow weaker every second. My breathing became heaver as the blue light filled my lungs. I started to panic. Whats going on? Where is this blue light coming from? Why is it here? Why am I having trouble keeping myself awake? I feel my legs give out and before I know it, everything goes bright blue, the same color as the portal.
I'm the only person in this room. There is nothing in it except me, the walls, ceiling and floor. There all the same color, that blue light from the portal. Where am I? I wonder. I look down at my feet, and see that they're floating a few feet off the ground, but no where near the ceiling. I turn around to see if there's a place to escape. Nope, not one window or door.
"Hello?" I call. Maybe someone can hear me. "Hello!?" I scream a little louder. "HELLO?!"
"Hello to you to shooting star. There is no need to yell. I'm the only one who can hear you."
I know who it is before I even turn around. Bill.
Sorry, I know it's short, but I wanted to get Bill in there as fast as I could. Alright, survey time. Who's P.O.V. Should I do for the next chapter, Dipper or Mabel? Please let me know. Any questions? Let me know. Again, I need some suggestions if you have any. I will try to incorporate it into the story as best I can, but I can't guarantee all will be used. Thanks for all the support! ~Love ya