Im deeply disappointed in the amount of reviews I got for chapter 8. Only 3! I expect more from you guys! Anyways in this chapter im switching back to Hinata's point of view to explain her side of the waterfall scene. And Naruto's jealousy gets the better of him in this one! Satisfaction
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Disclaimer: Im sorry to say this but because of a lack of reviews im going to stop writing this fanfiction. However I have some good news too. I just saved a whole bunch of money on car insurance by switching to Geico.
P.S. Im just kidding about quitting this fanfiction.
Chapter 9
"WATCH OUT!"
"GET OUT OF MY WAY!" Naruto yelled as he raced through the village, knocking over bystanders as he went.
Unfortunately, Ino was outside her shop at the precise time Naruto ran by. Naruto, too enraged by the thought of Kiba to notice her, ran right into her shoulder, knocking her down and cousing the pot she was holding to shatter as it hit the ground.
"NARUTO, YOU DOPE!" Ino yelled as she got up to give chase. However, Naruto was nowhere to be seen. "Jeez! That jerk…"
Meanwhile, Hinata was having some problems of her own. She was mentally infuriated with herself for running away from Naruto like that.
It was the perfect opportunity to tell him how she felt. After all he had called her pretty back then. She would never forget that day. To be called pretty and amazing by Naruto in one day was almost too much for her to handle without passing out.
She had almost passed out that day, too. Naruto and just scooped her in his arms and called her amazing. Thankfully she was too exhausted to feel embarrassed. All she felt that day was pure elation in Naruto's arms.
Suddenly a voice in the back of Hinata's head began to crush her hope
If he thinks you're pretty, then why doesn't he ask you out?
He doesn't know it was me at the waterfall!
He does now! Why didn't he ask you out!
Hinata knew this was true but she continued to defend her pride.
I ran away! He didn't have enough time!
He didn't chase after you, did he
Note: (no Hinata is not crazy. Nor does she have some spirit like Naruto. They r just some negative thoughts she doesn't want to accept.)
Hinata became lost in thought and failed to notice Kiba walking towards her.
"Hinata! Guess what? Naruto likes y-"
"Not now Kiba. I'm busy."
"But its important! Naruto really likes-"
"Kiba! Leave her alone!" Shino interrupted. "She said she is busy. It is rude to interrupt someone when they are busy."
Hinata hated conflict and there was no way she could keep track of her thoughts like this. She decided that she had better just confess what had happened.
When she had finished Kiba's jaw was hanging to the ground, but Shino seemed unaffected.
"That is quite a long story, Hinata. Is there anything we can do to help?" Shino said without breaking his monotony.
"You bet there is!" Kiba yelled with enthusiasm. "We can make Naruto jealous!"
"That doesn't sound like a good idea, Kiba…" Hinata said quietly.
"Yes it does! All we have to do is pretend like we are dating!"
Hinata gasped. "That's mean!"
"It could work, Hinata." Shino said. "Think about it. Naruto may not be the brightest ninja around, (Hinata shot him a defensive glare) but he has some of the strongest emotions I have seen. I would bet seeing you with a boyfriend would really ignite some jealousy and passion for you."
Hinata frowned. It seemed like it would work and Hinata really wanted him to notice her so she gave in and allowed herself to be taken off to search for Naruto.
At the time Naruto anger had drifted off when he ran into Lee. He had decided to talk to Lee about what Tenten had said.
He took Lee to Ichikura's and ordered two ramens.
"So Naruto, whats up?" Lee asked curiously.
"Um… well, have you ever thought about anyone besides Sakura?"
"Naruto? Why are you asking me that?"
"I'm just saying there are other girls besides Sakura. And one of them really likes you."
Lee's head perked up. "Who?"
"Well… its T-"
"Hey Naruto!"
Naruto poked his head out and saw Hinata, Shino, and Kiba walking towards them.
He smiled brightly and waved to them. Then he noticed how close Hinata and Kiba were. Then KIba smirked and put his hand on Hinata's butt. Naruto's smile vanished.
"Naruto? Are you growling?" Lee asked
Then Kiba leaned over and kissed Hinata on the cheek.
Suddenly, Naruto dissappered. Before Hinata could even blink with surprise, Kiba was on the ground with a snarling Naruto on his chest.
Naruto's eyes were blazing red as he shouted at Kiba. "If you EVER touch Hinata like that again… I'll kill you!"
"Ok Ok! I'll back off." Naruto got up and let Kiba stand up. Kiba left as quickly as he could. Shino grabbed Hinata and walked off towards Kiba.
Lee stepped out of the stand and ran up to Naruto. "Naruto, that was amazing! I couldn't even see you move! I had no idea you were that fast!"
"Me either… my body just seemed to move on its own!"
Hinata and the others had met up in one of the training grounds. Kiba's eye was already turning a ugly shade of yellow.
"Jeez! What the hell was that!" Kiba yelled rubbing his eye. "Did you see his eyes? They were red!"
"I don't know, but whatever it was… it scared my bugs to death." Shino summoned his chakra and raised his arms. "They won't even come out. There was something deadly in his eyes…"
"Yeah… that plan totally failed. But I have another one!" Kiba yelled.
"Please no more! Naruto has been through enough!" Hinata pleaded.
"Don't worry. We just have to find Ino, get her to use her mind transfer thing and read his thoughts to see if he likes you!" Kiba laughed out loud. "It's perfect!"
Hinata sighed softly. She didn't want to do this to Naruto, but she was just too curious. She really wanted to know how he felt.
Meanwhile, a dark figure had been watching the entire thing. It seems the kyuubi has a certain fondness for that Hyuuga girl. The figure laughed quietly and retreated into the shadows.
I'm sorry for not posting this chapter sooner but I got lazy… anyways I hoped u liked this one and hopelfully ill get more than three reviews this time.
Next time on sunflowers: Ino discovers something in Narutos mind. A dark and evil presence. Will she survive the trip into Naruto's mind and just who is this figure following Naruto?
Lol that was fun I think ill do that from now on. I should post the next chapter sometime this week. See ya then!