Random question, do you like my fluffy scenes? I know they need a little work… But I can't figure out what's wrong with them…
So, what do you think of all my fluffiness? Should I do more? Or… less?
Or… what?
Thanks!
And I'm not getting a lot of reviews… :(
Oh well, here's your story:
I ran inside after her to find Jessie pinned to the floor by a very much vampire, and very much awake Alexander James.
Chapter Ten
Alexander James' POV
The pain I had felt the last few days was… Intense, for lack of better word.
I didn't know what was happening to me, or why I was the one going through it. What had I done to deserve this fate?
My human memories started flooding through me. Wait, human? I wasn't human anymore? No, I wasn't human. Then… What was I? No, what am I?
I felt a warm body next to me… My eyes opened quickly and I jumped off the bed and twisted, landing in a crouch facing the body.
Jessie!
The human memories came back to me. She… She liked me. I liked her back. Why was she warm now? She was cold when I danced with her days ago… My super-brain answered for me. Cause you're cold now too, dummy. I told myself.
I spoke for the first time, my voice sounding as smooth as honey. "What am I?"
She answered, her voice sounding even more amazing now that I had super-hearing or something. "You're a… Vampire." She said, gauging my reaction.
A… Vampire. Of course, just my luck. Instead of thinking to much of it, I looked at Jessie, memorizing every curve and dimple of her body.
She appeared to suddenly get very self-conscious of herself and hugged her knees to her chest.
"Why are you doing that?" I asked her, cocking my head, confused.
"Doing what?" She questioned back.
"Trying to hide your beauty." I answered simply. If she was human, I know she would've blushed. Just looking at her sent a wave of lust over me, and I couldn't hide it, so I decided to just tell her. "Jessie," I said slowly, walking up to her, "I want to kiss you." Her eyes widened and lock onto mine. I sat next to her on the large bed and slowly tucked some stray hairs behind her ear. Even though she didn't need it, she inhaled sharply. She closed her eyes as I slowly leaned towards her.
The moment our lips touched, I wanted more. I involuntarily growled into her mouth, and the next second, I had her pinned down on the floor.
I heard a door open and I was suddenly knocked off Jessie by a large wolf tackling me. I was stronger than him, and was about to rip him limb from limb when I heard Jessie's voice.
"Stop! No, Alex, don't!" I paused for a moment, it was all they needed. All of a sudden I was being held back by two strong vampires, the lean blond one and the bulky dark haired one.
"Jasper." The dark hair one said to the blond. Jasper nodded and I felt a wave of calmness wash over me.
"What are you doing to me?" I asked through my teeth.
"Jasper's calming you down." Said the small almost child-like girl. "We can't have you tearing our house down. People would ask questions, and we can't have that."
"Alright, I can live with that." I answered. "So, who are you all?"
"I'm Alice," the short one said, "And that's Jasper, my soul mate." She smiled at the thought of him. She then introduced me to the others, all the while Jasper kept me calm.
"Alright, enough." Esme said, walking in the room. "He might need to hunt, you know." She smiled and walked back into what looked like the kitchen.
"Hunt?" I questioned, "What is it that I am hunting?"
"Animals." Edward said simply. "You will most likely feel the urge to hunt humans, but we have a cover to maintain, you must realize."
"I do." I had used up all my air and took a deep breath. As I did that, a sweet smell filled my head.
"Jacob," Edward said, suddenly grabbing me. "Get Nessie out of here." Is that what was smelling? What I wanted to kill? Jacob somehow managed to throw Nessie onto his back and ran out the door at top speed. "Let's go." Edward led me out the other door, and Jasper and Emmett followed us.
"Why are they coming with us?" I asked.
"Just in case." Emmett answered.
"In case of what?"
"Humans." He answered simply.
"Ah. What makes humans better than animals?" I asked again, as we started running towards the forest.
"We're vampires," Jasper said, "It just how we're made. We're programmed to eat humans, not animals."
"And yet you eat animals. Why? I mean, why go against what you are?"
"We don't want to be monsters." Edward answered, his tone suggesting the end of that conversation.
We were quite far in the middle of nowhere now, probably no humans for miles. I picked up a sweet smell, and then without thinking, chased it, tackled it and began sucking its blood.
Jessie's POV
Kissing Alexander was… Unbelievable, for lack of better word. It was very different from kissing Rex, though I wasn't really sure why…
Maybe because Rex's kiss was lust filled and Alexander's felt more like love…
But maybe I'm just imaging things. Maybe they were both just out of lust. I don't know, I guess I never will…
But… A small part of me, at the back of my mind, I couldn't help but think that maybe… Just maybe… They were both out of love.
I just don't know.
Rosalie's POV
As the boys walked out the door to take Alex hunting, I decided to get dressed for the battle.
I jogged back to mine and Emmett's house and began going through our closet, picking out clothes that we could move in. Alice was good at picking out fashions, but I know what was needed to fight.
I grabbed some stretchy jeans, a loosely fitted tee and my Converse for me and changed quickly. For Emmett, I got his Converse, his baggy jeans and his WWE shirt. He loved fighting while wearing that shirt.
He tossed his clothes on our king sized bed and I plopped down next to them. And shut my eyes.
I heard the door open and shut and footsteps coming my way.
"Hey, Emmett, your clothes are on the bed." I mumbled without opening my eyes or breathing, I knew once I got his smell, we would never make it out of this house…
And we might knock it down…
"Too bad I'm not Emmett, now isn't it?" I open my eyes and saw Jane and Alec standing over my bed. "Alec…" Jane continued.
"No-" I started, before I was engulfed by pain first, and then nothingness.
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What will happen next to Rose?
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Anyways, I know it's short, but I'm going to be gone for the weekend, and I wanted to get this out first.
So, I hope when I get back on Sunday I have lots of yummy reviews!!
Anna