Moonstorm; I feel so bad about forgetting 2 of my reviewers last chapter
-_-, but it's my computer's fault not mine.
WhiteRabbit5; No, it's all right, I'm perfectly fine when it comes to criticism. As long as it's constructive. I realize that I have a problem with short chapters, but I'll try to work on it. I thank you for your honesty. I'm glad you liked that part too!
Mia1218;o0o0o she's busted, jk. No I don't really, but I can tolerate her if I have to.I'm really sorry for not replying to your review -_-. Gomen.
Buffybot76; Sure, just ditch Dance of the Damned, Jk. That movie sounds funny, you better start updating your story soon tho, I'm getting impatient.
Rurouni tombo; lol, when I read your review and I can imagine Misao doing that. I might add that in sometime, thank you.
Neross-god; I agree, and I've got a LOT of pictures of Kenshin ^.^
DragonHacker; I'm sorry for not answering your last review, it's not that I don't like you, I swear. But my computer was being an ignoramus. I'll make sure it doesn't happen again tho, okie dokie?
Mori'guessir; Monkey, huh? Them's fightin words, Jk. I'm glad you like it.
Lilac Cheery Blossoms; I shall continue, thank you for your input!
a reader; ^.^ I luv your pen-name. Hope you keep reviewing!
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The cracks grew wider, and the light became more intense. Misao fell back, and her eyes widened. oh no!
Stone became softer flesh, and began to breath. Hair was ruffled by a gentle breeze. And the eyes... Were the most incredible eyes she had ever seen. Misao gaped.
He blinked, and his eyes widened. his fingers flexed, and his arms tighten as he moved long unused muscles. He brought his hands up to where he could see them and stared at them in wonder.
Misao shifted, ready to get up from her seat on the floor. He looked up, and his eyes locked with hers. Misao was breathless. She heart gave a funny little jolt. The expression in his eyes changed from suprise to an uncontrolable fury.
He unsheathed the sword at his side. Its edge winked at her, and it was deadly in it's own beauty. Misao barely had time to react when he deminstrated how deadly it can be. She rolled, and the blade hit the floor near her head.
Misao was up in a flash. Her arms came up, and her feet rested in the familiar C-step she was taught. He looked all the more irratated at this, and slashed at her again.
She dodged nimbly, jumping back out of the reach of the sword. Once again in ready stance. He thrust his sword forward, as if to skewer her on the end. Misao stepped to the side. She found her balance, and, before, he could pull back his sword, delivered a front round-house kick.
He stood there for a moment in shock. She took this opportunity to cut kick him, hoping to throw him off balance.
He recovered his footing and began the attack again. ____________________________________________________________________________ _________ Moonstorm; I know, it's horribly short, but hey, I updated. I actually started this chapter quite a few days ago, but then I bought some books and forgot to finish it.
Henchman; You lazy a-
Moonstorm; *covers his mouth* Hey, none of that.
Henchman; *mumbles something incoherent*
Moonstorm;What was that?!
Henchman; I said, "review,"....................please?
WhiteRabbit5; No, it's all right, I'm perfectly fine when it comes to criticism. As long as it's constructive. I realize that I have a problem with short chapters, but I'll try to work on it. I thank you for your honesty. I'm glad you liked that part too!
Mia1218;o0o0o she's busted, jk. No I don't really, but I can tolerate her if I have to.I'm really sorry for not replying to your review -_-. Gomen.
Buffybot76; Sure, just ditch Dance of the Damned, Jk. That movie sounds funny, you better start updating your story soon tho, I'm getting impatient.
Rurouni tombo; lol, when I read your review and I can imagine Misao doing that. I might add that in sometime, thank you.
Neross-god; I agree, and I've got a LOT of pictures of Kenshin ^.^
DragonHacker; I'm sorry for not answering your last review, it's not that I don't like you, I swear. But my computer was being an ignoramus. I'll make sure it doesn't happen again tho, okie dokie?
Mori'guessir; Monkey, huh? Them's fightin words, Jk. I'm glad you like it.
Lilac Cheery Blossoms; I shall continue, thank you for your input!
a reader; ^.^ I luv your pen-name. Hope you keep reviewing!
____________________________________________________________________________ ____
The cracks grew wider, and the light became more intense. Misao fell back, and her eyes widened. oh no!
Stone became softer flesh, and began to breath. Hair was ruffled by a gentle breeze. And the eyes... Were the most incredible eyes she had ever seen. Misao gaped.
He blinked, and his eyes widened. his fingers flexed, and his arms tighten as he moved long unused muscles. He brought his hands up to where he could see them and stared at them in wonder.
Misao shifted, ready to get up from her seat on the floor. He looked up, and his eyes locked with hers. Misao was breathless. She heart gave a funny little jolt. The expression in his eyes changed from suprise to an uncontrolable fury.
He unsheathed the sword at his side. Its edge winked at her, and it was deadly in it's own beauty. Misao barely had time to react when he deminstrated how deadly it can be. She rolled, and the blade hit the floor near her head.
Misao was up in a flash. Her arms came up, and her feet rested in the familiar C-step she was taught. He looked all the more irratated at this, and slashed at her again.
She dodged nimbly, jumping back out of the reach of the sword. Once again in ready stance. He thrust his sword forward, as if to skewer her on the end. Misao stepped to the side. She found her balance, and, before, he could pull back his sword, delivered a front round-house kick.
He stood there for a moment in shock. She took this opportunity to cut kick him, hoping to throw him off balance.
He recovered his footing and began the attack again. ____________________________________________________________________________ _________ Moonstorm; I know, it's horribly short, but hey, I updated. I actually started this chapter quite a few days ago, but then I bought some books and forgot to finish it.
Henchman; You lazy a-
Moonstorm; *covers his mouth* Hey, none of that.
Henchman; *mumbles something incoherent*
Moonstorm;What was that?!
Henchman; I said, "review,"....................please?