I probably should have posted this earlier when i have made the decision, but I decided to rewrite Konoha Academy. The rewrite so far sounds like a completely different story (I'm sorry), but I am definitely more satisfied than the first.
WAIT! DON'T LEAVE YET!
It has the same humor in it as the first one, except it has a pretty intense plot (you'll see why later on... if you decide to read it.) My writing style hasn't changed, but it has definitely matured and I know you won't be disappointed by it. If you are, I am sorry, but I'm gonna stick with it and I'm sad to be losing your views :'(.
The new Konoha academies first chapter will actually be posted either later on today or tomorrow because I've finished it about a month and a half ago, but I was still reviewing it
Changes: So the new Konoha Academy will take place in the same setting and there were changes in the structure of the school and what the school is about, The school is for the rich and prestigious students, but Naruto only got in because his adoptive father Iruka is a new teacher for English and Creative Writing. This story is very music oriented, so music will be a major part of this. I don't know what I should put in this because i do not want to spoil any part of the story, but the events that happened in the one I've written before, most of them will be in the rendition of it. The first one went by way too quickly and the emotions weren't properly developed, so I hope the second one will turn out to be better.
I seriously thank you for sticking with me throughout the writing process and if you decide to leave and unfollow my stories I really don't blame you, but those who stick to it I love you! Oh my goodness we should just be best friends. Haha I have no life
If you read the rewritten versions first chapter, tell me about what you think of the new changes and if the first one was better or not.
Oh and if you're interested, a user named Unpredictable Eatsy made a forum for NaruSasu stories, so if you want to check it out go to DOT net/forum/Belonging-To-Each-Other-NaruSasu/180374/
(Just change the DOT to a period... I'm pretty sure you already knew that) Oh no how do I turn the highlighter off?!
Well Uh Bye I'll see you on the Revised version!
