Okay here we go

Diclaimer: I don't own Naruto


Naruto jumped out of the way of another snake and landed closer to his knife.

'Just a little more!' He thought.

He crawled the rest of the way and just as his hand gripped the hilt of his knife one of the snakes lifted him by the ankle and held him infront of Orochimaru's mouth.

"Any last words Naruto-kun?" Orochimaru hissed.

"Heh." Naruto smirked.

Naruto sliced the snake holding him and landed flat on his back before rolling out of the way and behind Orochimaru. Five snakes stuck at him but he dodged all of them and cut two of them off. Orochimaru turned to him and stuck again, Naruto jumped onto Orochimaru's head as he went down and ran along his back. Orochimaru flicked his tail and sent Naruto flying towards his mouth. Naruto placed his hands on Orochimaru's top jaw and his feet on Orochimaru's bottom jaw.

"I did not come this far to be your dinner!" Naruto growled.

Naruto took his knife and planted it into Orochimaru's cheek. Orochimaru spit Naruto out and shook his head in pain before getting his barings back. Outside the burning building the Haruno's watched on hoping to see Naruto come out soon.

"Sakura, we have to go it's been too long." Ichizane said.

"No! He said to give him twenty minutes!" Sakura cried.

"Sakura, it's been half an hour." Ichizane said.

"Ten more minutes please! Just ten more minutes!" Sakura plead.

Her father gave a sigh of annoyance and got into the driver's seat. Her mother came up behind her and hugged her daughter.

"Sakura, sweetie. I'll give you five more minutes but if he doesn't come out then..." Her mother trailed off.

"Don't talk like that mom! He'll come back I know it!" She cried.

"Sakura, why are you so adamant about this?" Her mother asked.

"...Because I love him mom. I love everything about him, and I just can't imagine life without him anymore ya know?" Sakura said.

"I understand sweetie. Ten mintues but after that we have to go." Her mother said.

Sakura nodded as her mother went into the passenger side of the car.

'Please, please come out Naruto! I know you can do it!' Sakura thought.

"Son of a bitch!" Naruto growled as Orochimaru slammed him against another wall.

Orochimaru roared and attacked, Naruto rolled out of the way and stabbed him in the eye. Orochimaru roared in pain and slammed Naruto under his tail. Naruto stabbed Orochimaru again and rolled out from under his tail then backed up into a wall.

'Damn! He's got me trapped.' Naruto thought.

"Grr! I'll make you pay for this Naruto-kun!" Orochimaru growled.

"Heh, come and get it!" Naruto taunted.

Orochimaru growled and struck again this time Naruto waited and ran to his back where he plunged his knife into and slid down to the ground.

"You're getting slower Orochimaru." Naruto said.

The snakes on Orochimaru's back whipped out and tried to grab hold of Naruto but he either sliced or dodged them. Two of them however were able to get a grip on his knife hand and one of his feet. They threw him into the air and he was caught at the same areas by two snakes on Orochimaru's front. Orochimaru opened his mouth ready to swallow Naruto whole but just as he struck Naruto used his free foot and kicked him in his large face. Orochimaru recoiled and tried again and was met with Naruto's foot again.

"Hell no Orochimaru." Naruto said.

Orochimaru growled and slammed Naruto into the ground then threw him into a support beam that was almost coming down from the fire. As Naruto crashed through the beam the debris crashed down on him but he was able to lift it off of him.

"This has dragged on long enough Naruto-kun, I'll kill you here and now!" Orochimaru hissed.

Naruto jumped out of the way and was right next to the door. He knew if he went out of it he could get to the car and they could get out of here... but there was no way he could let this thing free.

"Sakura, the ten minutes are up... time to go." Her mother said.

"Five more minutes please! Just five more and I'll go I promise!" Sakura plead.

"...Okay five more minutes... but that's all." Her mother said.

"Thank you." Sakura said.

Orochimaru struck out of frustration and missed again this time Naruto was near the door he came in from. Orochimaru was almost completely out of snakes he only had a few that were actually able to help him, all of the others were either head less or sliced in half. Orochimaru was breathing hard and was swaying from side to side from blood loss even with his giant body. Naruto ran at him and jumped on his head with knife raised up high.

"I've... had enough of your bullshit!" He roared.

Naruto plunged his knife down into Orochimaru's head and his body crashed to the ground. Naruto jumped off and went to the door but looked back in time to see Orochimaru give one last strike but he never made it to Naruto. Orochimaru's body went down and all of the heads of the snakes still there exploded and shortly after so did Orochimaru's.

"Sakura it's been five minutes come on." Her mother said.

Sakura nodded her head and turned around slowly until she heard the sound of a door getting kicked open. She instantly turned around and saw Naruto standing there with his knife in one hand and the other holding his side. Sakura smiled and ran down towards him.

"Sakura where are you go-oh!" Her mother said.

"Naruto!" Sakura cried.

Naruto looked up in time to see Sakura jump at him. He held his arms out to her and caught her in a loving hug.

"You're amazing Naruto! I knew you could do it!" Sakura cried.

"Yeah... come one let's go." He said.

Sakura nodded and led him back to his car.

"Haruno-san, please take us to the hospital." Naruto said.

"Right." Ichizane said.

Ichizane sat in the driver's seat while his wife was next to him and Sakura and Naruto were in the back seat. Naruto leaned against Sakura as he held his side in pain but Sakura made it better by stroking his forehead in a loving manner.


The next chapter will be pretty short but the next two after that will be decent in length.

-Raidori