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Chapter 5
"We missed you at the dance Mary," said Natalia, with an air of fake sadness, as she walked past. "I guess a maid's work is never done," she called, as she headed down the hall.
A couple lockers down from Mary, Joey scowled. He really couldn't stand Natalia. She was everything Joey hated in a girl; a wannabe, a bully, obnoxious and a slut. And now she was laying into his girlfriend.
Joey glanced down the hall to look at Mary and she was smiling with Tami. "Must be remembering the weekend," thought Joey.
After leaving the dance Saturday night, they had headed to Mary's so she could deal with Dominique.
They had stayed the night there and woken up in each other's arms. They had woken at about 9 on Sunday morning. The girls and Dominique were still asleep and wouldn't wake till around 11. They had lazed around cuddling in Mary's bed for an hour and then remembered no one else would be up so spying the opportunity to break free Mary had gotten ready and they headed to Joey's so he could do the same.
They had quite a relaxed day watching movies at Joey's, going in the pool and laying by the pool. They didn't do that much and the only other places they went, were out for brunch.
Joey was currently insisting he take her out for a fancy dinner. However Mary was having none of it, and insisted along with a puppy dog pout that they stay in and cook together.
They laughed and danced as they prepared salad to go with their barbeque chicken and bacon with melted cheese. And in their opinion it tasted great, you got the bite and smokiness from the barbeque but it didn't overpower the chicken so it lost its taste - the smokiness was just there.
What surprised Mary, was that Joey had thought ahead to having dinner together. Well, when she insisted having dinner at his anyway. He had been sneaky; he'd snuck out while she while she was having a well earned nap and bought some dessert - a gorgeous chocolate ice cream cake. It looked like vienetta but there was cake in it. Anyway when he brought it out, Mary smiled. She hadn't thought of dessert.
"When did you get this?" she asked.
"While you were sleeping," smiled Joey, as they dug into dessert.
"Thank you," she smiled, as she pulled her spoon out of her mouth.
If this is what forever was like, she couldn't wait.
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Gabriella Somerfield.
