Author's Note: Hi guys! If you looked at my reviews lately, I got this really mean one. Here is what they wrote.
"This is really bad. Over-used plot, the characters are very OOC, and the grammer and sentence structure is horrid. Please just stop and take the time to practice, rather than continuing this pathetic display of amateur skills."
They gave their name as, "Me" I was really sad that somebody would say that. I wanted to tell them that all the stories are OOC like Sonny getting pregnant or abused. Second this is supposed to be a fun story and not perfect with perfect grammar and sentence structure and by the way they spelled 'grammar' wrong. They read till only chapter 19, I think, so they probably won't see this.
It really hurt my feelings but I don't want to be mean to them. I really don't know what to do. But I'm happy that I got all those other reviews. And if they want me to stop then they'll be happy that this story is almost over.
I wrote a poem on this story so here it is!
"When it cuts into your skin
It hurts more than you can imagine
You want to squeal and scream
Cause a knife can cut you deep
A knife is hurtful and mean
It can hurt mentally and physically
You want it to stop
As you see the blood in a heap
But it just won't go
Cause an knife can cut deep
The burn will go away
But the scar will stay
You want to forget the day
Of the horrible incident
You pray and pray and say please
Cause a knife can cut deep."
WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE POEM!
I know this was a long author's note but I just wanted to say that. So here's the last chapter! :(
Chapter 21
The last chapter!
Hot People
1 week later
Sonny's Point Of View
Breathe in! Breathe out! Breathe in! Breathe out!
Here I was, in my cream colored wedding gown. I was standing in front of the garden gates to open. My veil was down and I was lightly crying.
Yes my wedding day was finally here, and Drake couldn't bother us.
The bridesmaids and groomsmen were already inside and waiting.
My dad was probably waiting for me to come. I heard Pachelbel's Canon in D Minor was playing and the doors were slowly opened by guards.
Zora and Dakota appeared in front of me throwing flowers everywhere. They didn't fight but gave each other, glares. Those two will never get along!
I lightly laughed and walked forward, right behind them, my steps following the music. I saw my dad and he put his arm around mines. I looked to him and smiled. He grinned back wiping away on of my tears with his thumb. They were sad tears of leaving my mom and dad (Chad and I had discussed staying in one of his parents mansions and it could be our house.) I had happy tears too because I was getting married to Chad Dylan Cooper! Chad Dylan Cooper, the best actor of our generation!
We walked forward. I saw Chad standing there smiling at me in his handsome tux. On the right of him stood his groomsmen, Niko, Grady, Mike and Ferguson, and all the way left was Tawni, Mina, Karen, and Lucy. They all looked so colorful.
Dakota and Zora finished their petals and sat down in the front row. My mom was there too right next to Chad's parents. I smiled and turned my head forward, again.
Dad let me go and I stood face to face with Chad. He took my palms and stared at his sparkling eyes. They both did sparkle right now. We turned our heads to the preacher.
"Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today in the presence of these witnesses, to join Allison Monroe and Chad Dylan Cooper on this happy and joyous occasion, to join this man and this woman in holy matrimony. FINALLY…" The preached added the "finally" part which I was positive that wasn't in his book.
"Chad Dylan Cooper, do you take this woman to be your wedded wife? Do you promise to love her, comfort her, honor and keep her in sickness and in health, remaining faithful to her as long as you both shall live? And till death do you apart?" He asked turning his to face Chad.
"I do," He said simply and confidently. He was positive and not nervous at all.
"And Allison Rebecca Monroe, do you take this man to be your wedded husband? Do you promise to love him, comfort him, honor and keep him in sickness and in health, remaining faithful to him as long as you both shall live? And till death do you apart?" This time the preacher turned to me.
"I do," I also said confidently without any hesitation. I looked to Chad and meet his gaze. He stared into my eyes and so did I (with his eyes though.)
"If any man can show just cause, why they may not lawfully be joined together, let him now speak, or else hereafter for ever hold his peace." The preacher didn't look anywhere and quickly continued.
"Then by the power invested in me and the state of California, I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride." This time the preacher didn't get invested, thankfully.
Chad reached forward and pressed his lips to mine. I kissed him back lightly for a few seconds and we ended it. We didn't want to give everyone a make out session!
We both were ambushed by our families and friends.
"Oh Sonny, my big girl's all grown up!" Mom yelled crushing me.
"About time!" My grandma Lillian yelled at my mom.
"And he's a total hotshot!" Grandma Lillian said as Chad freaked out and I laughed and grossed out at the same time.
"Grandma!" I yelled at her as she shrugged her shoulders.
"You're so lucky you get to marry, Sonny Monroe, she's smoking hot!" Chad's little cousin, Danny said complaining. I giggled at him as Chad slapped him on the back of his head.
"Hey!" Chad yelled at him.
"What she is!" He turned his head to me, "Sorry for my cousin's lack of sight, if I was married to you, I'd compliment you every day!" He said taking my hand and kissing it.
"Thanks… I think…" I said turning to Chad.
"Leave her alone, Danny!" Chad sad pushing the 12 year old kid away.
"You wanna go now?" Chad asked me taking my hand.
"Wait," I told him.
"FLOWER THROW!" I yelled. All the women and girls rushed behind me as I turned around and grabbed my bouquet.
"1…… 2…… 3!" I yelled at threw the flowers behind me which happened to land in my little cousin, Rose's hand. She squealed and laughed. Aw she was so cute! I grabbed Chad's hand and ran to the limo.
I waved goodbye to all the cheering people.
"My lady," Chad held out the door for me as I bowed and giggled. I waved one more time and climbed into the limo as Chad entered too.
He turned to me as I turned to him.
"I love you, Mrs. Cooper." He said grinning and leaning his head forward to.
"I love you too, Cooper." I giggled and pressed his lips to mine. He added more tension into it and I gladly accepted.
This was my happily ever after!
THE END!
Author's Note: It's finished! 21 chapters long! Wow my longest story.
I want to thank all my reviewers and people that added this story to their favorite story and story alert list. Thank you so much!
I'm planning on writing a new story, so go to my poll and find out more about it and choose the title.
I want to make this a trilogy with their honeymoon and stuff like that, but that might not be for some time.
So in the mean time check out my new story that I might make soon. It's going to me really funny! Check the poem at the beginning of this chapter in the author's note! PLEASE!
So thanks again, and this is the last chapter of "A Knife Can Cut Deep." Don't forget to review.
Bunny and Channy Love