I loved all the reviews even though they werent alot they were great, i would prefer have good ones than alot of pointless ones, thank you for the idea about the exlamation marks, i dont know why they were there but my computer might be stupid, idk but remeber i love the constructive critism, it improves my writing, and i have to say, i read all of the other ones jsut as much as i right (maybe more) i get my own ideas from theirs they give my inspiration to come up with sinarios. ty much!

3RD POV

"Clare, hey what's up" Clare looked up and saw KC, who clearly was talking to her.

"KC what do you want?" KC was startled; she knew he wasn't just randomly being nice.

"Uh well I was kinda hoping we could talk" Clare really did not want to talk to him; she wouldn't try to be nice.

"KC I will not talk to you my life is hell right now and I don't need your drama, go tell it to your girlfriend." He looked surprised. Since when did Clare have a back bone?

"Well I need some advice, about Jenna"

"KC you lost me as a friend when you cheated on my WITH Jenna so just, no!"

"Clare please! I am begging you; I really need your help." Clare wasn't a mean person, she couldn't not help, it wasn't in her nature. "Fine. Talk."

"I was hoping to maybe talk to you in a more private place?" she had a deadly look on her face

"Don't push it, I agreed to talk to you, so talk." He looked uncomfortable.

"Well, I have a problem… Jenna well she's, she's kind of, pregnant." Once he said it he was relieved he got it out.

"KC that is so not my forte, I have no experience with this, you got her pregnant, you deal with it!" she was walking away furiously, when KC grabbed her arm.

"No! Clare, I never even had sex with Jenna, what should I do?" Clare's jaw dropped.

"What, who's is it?" he looked on the floor like if he was embarrassed to say.

"She doesn't know." Clare couldn't help herself he deserved this! He broke her heart, her perfectly pure heart. Clare would have never done this, he left her for someone who did what KC did to Clare, only way more, and more than once.
"KC I told you she was bad news. I told you she only wanted you because you were with me, you were just part of the game. Did you listen to me? No you did not. I can't help you, I have never been pregnant or with someone who was, you didn't have problems breaking my heart, but out of the goodness of my heart, I really hope you try to help her, and I wish you both the best of luck." With that she walked away.

CLARE POV

I can't stand this! I can't live like everything is normal, I just can't. I have to go talk to Darcy. As I walked home, I saw a hearse in my driveway, but no one was in it. Either HE was in her house, or someone died and happened to call Eli for assistance. The 2nd option sounded most ridiculous. When I walked in the door Eli was on my couch with Darcy, I knew he would go to her, even before he did. Their heads snapped up at me like they were caught doing something they weren't supposed to.

"Eli, why are you talking to my sister?" he looked at me with a emotionless face.

"What are you doing Clare, school isn't even over? Since when do you skip?" She didn't know a lot about the new me. So Eli just smirked. I miss his smirks.
"well for one thing, I skip school pretty often, for second, he skipped school too, and for three WHY IS HE HERE!" I could see the pain in his eyes. I ran to her room and slammed the door. I couldn't tell them that I skipped English BECAUSE I didn't want to see him, and my only escape was invaded by him as well. The saddest part is I was happy to see him. But I wouldn't bring him down with me.

ELI POV

Clare really looked like she didn't want to see me, but as they say the eyes are the window to the soul. I could see happiness in them when she saw me, but as soon as it registered, sadness filled her eyes. I would swear that she didn't want me anymore, but thanks to Alli I knew she was just afraid.

"Eli, you might want to go, she doesn't look happy to see you." Eli gave her a look "Fine." She raised her hands in defeat. "The last door on the right."

"I know…" probably shouldn't have said that, Clare wasn't allowed to have boys in her room. Darcy game me a look that let me know she caught me. As I walked up to Clare's room I heard sobs coming from her room, I thought of what to say to her, I knew I needed to be there for her. Her life is so miserable, and I was always there for comfort and venting. Now she had her sister, but Darcy had told me she just wallows around in self pity and won't talk to her. Well I'm not Darcy. I am Eli, Clare's Eli. I will get her to listen to me, and we will finally be together. I owe Alli huge.

CLARE POV

"Clare?" I heard from my door through my tears. "DARCY GO AWAY!" I heard a sigh

"Clare, it isn't Darcy, it is Eli, we really need to talk Clare, I won't take no for an answer and I won't let you yell at me through a door, at least yell at me in person that is SO not Clare." I could hear the smirking in her voice. I really did need to talk to Eli, I just hoped he wouldn't cloud my head with his beautiful-ness, I missed him so much. I went in to open my door and I saw his face. As soon as he went to sit on my bed, memories of him still their flashed through my mind, it is crazy to believe it has only been about 3 weeks and my life ahs went from boring Clare Edwards with a few friends that had dramatic lives who vent to me, to hyped up Clare Edwards whose life was extremely stressful and filled with Drama who vents to the guy she loves more than herself, but doesn't deserve him. What had he done to her? My first memory is when he first came here, and we worked on our English essay about Shakespeare, it was one of both our favorite writers. He quoted me Romeo's line and my heart sank to my stomach. The second time was when we were hiding from Alli because she was trying to play hook-up with me and Eli. And many, many more that flew through my mind. Right then my love for Eli- (and my hormones) took over and I ran up to him and started kissing him, when I realized what he was doing I pulled away and cried on his chest for an hour. There was no way I could make this work, could I? I had to let him move on, didn't I? but right there crying onto the boy I love, about the fact that I knew he couldn't love me back, I knew I wasn't good enough, he was better than KC and even KC knew that, why couldn't he just stop teasing me?

ELI POV

"Clare relax; stop crying everything will be okay. Shh, shh. Relax." When she finally stopped crying I remained silent just in case she wasn't finished. But after about 5 minutes and she was still silent I started talking

"Clare, you need to believe me do love you, I really do, so stop worrying about me not loving you back! Okay, you are the most beautiful, best perfect girl for me alright?"

She smiled at me then after she looked really pissed. What was wrong now?

CLARE POV

"Clare you need to believe me I do love you, I really do, so stop worrying about me not loving you back! Okay, you are the most beautiful, best perfect girl for me alright?" I was smiling ear to ear, how did he know the right words to say, I mean the EXACT words to say, wait how would he know? ALLI! I was really mad.

I watched a little video fo rthe next episode, i jsut got some ideas from it but with myown twist, oh well it is supposed to be original right?