Hey guys. A reader called Undeadhero 143 told me that I'm making Jaune to OP and going to fast, and to be honest, I agree with him/her. I thought this was at least moderately paced, but I see this going to fast. I will continue with this, it isn't canceled. So I'm making a new story where he is younger and the story goes slower for a more intriguing story.
Same plot line, younger Arc, better story!
I hope...