This is unfortunately this is not the next chapter.
I was going to upload it tomorrow but I, stupid as I am, left my H-drive with the story on it at my dorm room. I know, I'm still kicking myself for it. But I'm getting worried that they may delete it if I don't touch it for this long and I have a snag a story, not a big one, just something that's bugging me and I want some fed back.
It's not a big thing but I should bring it up.
When Neytiri shows Jake Seze for the first time, we hear the ikran's name which is … Seze. So I was wondering, what Jake would name his ikran? I have a few names in mind but, to me they all seem to suck to me; Fang, Rogue, Rebel, Taw (that last one is the Na'vi word for Sky. 95% sure of it) but if you have another name, perhaps a better one, tell me.
I will update by Sunday night at the latest. Swear on my college money hours.