TO EVERYONE WHO'S GIVEN ME GREAT FEEDBACK AND EVEN SOME GOOD CRITISM THANKS AND DONT WORRY I'M NOT GIVING UP I'VE JUST BEEN REALLY BUSY WITH MY STUDIES AND OTHER STUFF. I'VE DECIDED TO GO BACK THROUGH THE 2 CHAPTERS THAT I'VE WRITTEN AND REWRITE THEM BECAUSE I THINK THAT BOTH OF THEM NEED SOME WORK AND TO DIANATHE HUNTRESS I'D LIKE TO ESPECIALLY THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK I'VE ALREADY DECIDED TO INCORPORATE SOME OF YOUR IDEAS IN TO THE STORY. PLEASE KEEP READING AND REVIEWING. THIS NOTICE WILL BE TAKEN DOWN ONCE I'VE REWRITTEN THE FIRST 2 CHAPTERS WHICH SHOULD BE SOON. I'M ALSO LOOKING FOR A BETA IF ANYONE WANTS TO DO THAT FOR ME THANKS