Hey guys! Thank you for the reviews and follows!
I have a question…
How good of a writer am I on a scale of 1-10? It's my first time writing, so I don't expect 8s, but what do you think?
Also, sorry for last chapter (it was really short.)
*keep in mind, clouds move and they sparkle. They are also on different levels
They looked like two comets dashing throughout the cosmos, flying up down and around the clouds, their magic trailing behind them. They were holding hands, and it wasn't fair because Zerin could hide his blush as if he could control his hormones. Lucifa however was as red as a rose, and Zerin couldn't stop teasing her about it.
At this point, they were out in the middle of nowhere, surrounding them were deserted clouds that were being taken over by nature, and it was tingling with life. Sometimes you could see the brave celestial foxtrouts looking over the edge, it was adorable.
Finally they reached her destination, their sacred fields. They descended onto the fluffy ground, picking up their lovely sent. (Some of you might be wondering about flower fields and clouds… it's like the garden, you can see their roots in the cloud.)
"Ah, this place never gets old, does it? Not even if it's cloudy." Lucifa asked, amazement in her voice and a smile on her face. She gazed upon heavens above. That million dollar smile, that girl has. Zerin thought, this time a hue of pink on his face. Apparently her words couldn't do, but her smile could. "A smile of a million words." He murmured, not even noticing his mistake.
"Huh? A smile of a million words? What does that mean?" Zerin hesitated to speak, now red as if all his hormones have finally come out. And it didn't take a second for Lucifa to know what he was referring to.
"My smile? You think I have a pretty smile?" She teased, although it was evident that she was flattered.
Zerin, unlike Natsu, didn't have a window to just jump out of. Crap. But Zerin, unlike Natsu, wasn't going to chicken out.
"Y-yea, I think you do."
*Natsu's POV
I kept running until I finally reached the guild. I was thinking over what just happened.
Why did I say that?
Lucy is my Nakama, maybe it is okay to think that.
But I've never said that to anyone else before?!
Why is she thinking wearing that? She should know better, she might be spotted by some boys! Baka! Baka!
Wait, what if she gets seen by other boys! No one will be there to defend her!
I made a 180 degree turn and ran to her apartment. On the way I felt a huge wave of magic.
Baka! Baka! I left Lucy alone! As I turned the corner I was blinded by the light emitted from Lucy's windows.
… I left Lucy alone. This is all my fault.
*Normal POV
Like her knight in shining armor, Natsu dove head first into the into Lucy's windows despite the blinding light. He plumped unto an occupied bed with an glowing mage tucked in. Next to her was Loke, who seemed to tuck in the celestial mage. He wore a worried look on his face.
"How long was Lucy like this?" the pink haired boy asked the spirit.
"For about 10 minutes."
Their little conversation was broken by an angel voice.
"Her eyes."
Before Natsu could question her random comment, she spoke once again.
"Free them."
In short, everyone was shocked. No, speechless. Like what? What's so special of eyes? Whose eyes? Lucy at once returned to her normal state but was still dazed. Pure astonishment painted the boy's faces.
"Hm? What's the matter boys?"
Loke spoke first. Well, more like yell.
"What!? What? But! You? What?"
Lucy seemed completely naïve of what they were talking about.
"C-calm down Loke. I'm right here! No need to shout!"
"Hey Luce, what's so special about eyes?"
"Eyes?" Lucy repeated, sadness in her tone with a face to match. The two boys scooted closer on the bed, interested in what she has to say.
Then a drop of water hit the bed.
"L-luce, are you crying?" Natsu asked.
"You don't have to tell us." Loke reassured, grabbing Lucy's slightly radiant hand.
"No, I'll tell."
"It started when I was just a little girl.
