Ok guyz I re-edited this chapter cuz not a single one of you did not understand it... and ill quit it with the questioning
Ok at chapter 2 Star Butterfly screamed in her bedroom...so this is what happened...
A sudden portal appeared in thin air. A giant red,hairy hand appeared through the portal and grasped Star very firmly...
"AGGGHHHH! MARCO! HELP!" Star screamed loudly... then Marco banged the door open. Then Star was out of sight... Marco quickly searched for her dimensional scissors...when Marco found it he quickly opened the portal then jumped in. Marco was in a dimension that is red everywhere (kinda like in Tom's dimension) as he walked forward he saw a big steel gate and a sign on top that says "THE NABAKZA PRISON"...
(Ok guys bonus question..when you read the word NABAKZA in backwards what movie comes into your mind?...ok lets continue)
Then two big,hairy and red giants open the gate. Marco went in as the gate shut behind him...there was a tall pole that has a speaker on top...then a voice spoke out...
"GREETINS,DWELLER I WOULD LIKE TO ANNOUNCE THAT YOU WILL BE DEVOURED BY OUR...SORRY..I MEAN MY MINIONS SO THAT YOU WILL BE THEIR BREAKFAST...SO YOU WILL BE..." A sudden apperance of a portal made the speaker stopped speaking. Then a handsome boy with yellow hair and skyblue eyes suddenly appeared through. It was Darrel Cutter..the greatest dual bladesman..
"I would like my Starshine please" said Darrel jokingly then he faced Marco furiously"listen! I just came to save Star, not to HELP you"
"Okay...okay" Marco was scared as Darrel pointed his laser blade at him"take it easy man"
Then the speaker spoke again"ENOUGH WITH THIS! LET THE WAVES COMMENCE!" then a swarm of demons (with weapons of course) charged at the two...Darrel sliced through as he used his first skil(the X wave)while marco karate chops the demons. They ran through while Darrel was using his special skill(charge of death) then they reached the stairs. As they ran up, Darrel placed laser barricades using his third skill(wall of light) then they both searced the second floor. Darrel was on the right and Marco was on the left. Half of the barricade is now shattered but Darred placed more and more. Then they ran to the third floor ,they saw Pony Head. Darrel pulled out a very wierd key and somehow unlocked the the trio ran up Darrel keeps putting barricades for protection at the fourth floor Darrel placed laser turrets everywhere using his second skill (laser sentry gun). Then, finnally the trio got up to the top floor,while pony head was searchin around Darrel placed more barricades...then...
"HEY GUYS STARS OVER HERE!" Pony head and Darrel ran to where Marco was standing.
"Oh thank goodness your safe" Darrel was breathing heavily. While Darred was opening the cell,Marco heard something...cracking...breaking...Marco peeked at the he saw that the barricade was breaking...
"Uhhh guys the wall is breaking!" Marco shouted
"Oh no..." Darrel was shocked...he was out of mana and a swarm of demons came after them...Darrel had a good but horrible plan...they were cornered...Darrel turned around and looked at the frightened trio...
"Are you ready?" Darrel asked as they all nodded. Darrel pulled out his dimensional scissors and cut his last portal open...then the four came through...Marco,Star and Pony Head opened their eyes they were in Star's trio jumped with joy.
"You were amazing Darrel, gimmie fives..." they all stopped and looked at Darrel. Blood was coming out of his mouth..
"Darrel?! DARREL!" Star shouted...they all noticed a knife with a green handle stabbed at his back..the next thing they knew, Darrel was dead
Ok thanks all for reading and heres a bonus info of Darrel's skills
1st skill : the X wave
Darrel slices his laser sword forming a letter X then charging it at the enemy
2nd skill : laser sentry gun
Darrel spawns a LSG that fires big amounts of lasers
3rd skill : wall of light
Darrel creates a laser wall forming a barricade that both hurts and prevents enemies from passing through
Special skill (SS) : charge of death
Darrel charges at the enemy like a fireball and somehow instantly kills every enemy that hits him