…Has anyone else noticed the HUMONGOUS plot hole in this otherwise awesome story?

Hint, it's the timeline. :3

lucky you all, I fixed it, and ended up changing a massive selection of the plot while I was at it, and an now in the process of rewriting this story. Once I've fixed the first chapter I'll have a chapter up that will tell you all, then delete the other chapters.

*sigh* for anyone else who reads fics of mine, me thinks EVERYTHING will he attacked. So, have fun. :3