Question (I'm new to fan fiction) Do you have to put a disclaimer on every chapter or having it on the first fine?
He ran straight into Rorschach falling back to the damp ground. He looked up to see a man with no face just white emptiness with ever moving shadows.
Kelly sat on the ground; one arm wrapped around the blonde girl the other holding him up behind him. He looked up at the man, his eyes wide, mouth slightly open. Hearing the men coming up behind him, he looked. The men were closing in on him. With some difficulties he got up, the child's thin arms and legs wrapped around the older boy's neck and waist. Giving the man with no face one last look, before running. Leavening the men behind.
At the mouth of alley he shifted his gaze to the sounds of fighting behind him. The man with only black and white swills for a face, moved around his opponents with the ease of a wolf that circles his prey. Kelly stood there, trance by what he was seeing; only when the girl in his arms give a sniffle did he break out of his haze…
Back at the van, the team was split into three sides, one side thought Kelly was died, the second side was sure he wasn't, and the third thought he was an idiot. Scratch that, they all thought he was an idiot. Who in their right mind would go down a dark alley to see what was making noise? Besides Kelly, none of the team could think of another person.
"Rise of hands, should we leave dumb ass behind?" Tanner quipped. Amanda slapped the back of his head, while giving him a glare.
The knock at the van window made them all jump. Ahmad leaned over the front seat to unlock the door. A heavy breathing Kelly and a girl of about four years of age got into the front seat. "What's with the kid?" Ogilvie asked
"Don't have time to explain" reaching for towards the ignition only to find there were no keys "where are the keys?"
"Here" Amanda took them. Somewhere between Amanda giving the keys and Kelly taking the keys, they were dropped down in between the seats.
"Crap" Kelly frantically looked for the keys while looking out the window every few moments. The team grew worried; they had never seen Kelly like this. Whatever he had seen was freaking him out and whatever it was. It wasn't good…
"Shit" Kelly had finally found the keys, but shortly after he looked out the passenger window and saw the man from the ally. Kelly fumbled with the keys trying and failing to put them in the ignition. The man with the black and white face tried to open the van door, only to find it was locked. The man grew angry when none of the team would let him in. Making a triangle with his arm, he hit the window with his elbow, causing it to shatter inward. The children inside shielded away from the invading glass. Reaching in he unlocked the door; he sat down on the seat next to Kelly, not even bothering to brush the broken glass off.
"Drive" the voice of the stranger was rough and sudden like that of a dish unexpectedly dropping on the tile floor of a kitchen. Giving the child to Amanda to hold, Kelly stared the car.
For the first time since the trip began, the van was in utter silence, no soft snores, no loud chattering, no off key signing. Just a van filled with quiet human being. The only noise was the occasionally direction given from the passenger seat.
Soon the man told him to pull over. He got out and walked around to the back of the van. "Maybe we should make a run for it" Tanner suggested.
"We won't all make it" Ogilvie countered. The man opened the back door to the van the children pilled out one by one. Kelly got out of the driver's side door. The man was surprised to see that the teen hadn't made a run for it. They were led down a deserted narrow one-way street. The man lifted a maintenance hatch that led down to a dark tunnel. Using the ladder that was welded to the side of the opening they made their way down.
The tunnel was narrow and tall, it looked like an old subway passageway. The man pulled a flashlight from his trench coat and after knocking it against his hand a few times the beam of light was showing them the way…
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