I'm redoing this.

As I stated before, I started out as a shitty writer(and I still kinda am) so yeah. Not much to say here, so I guess I'll begin the final responses.


HavenofUmbar, thanks man. I know I haven't really talked to you much in a while but I really appreciate the support.

The Kitsune Saiyan, don't worry. I personally think my skills as a writer have been improving so I'm sure the redo will satisfy your tastes.

Firedragon. ed, will do.

Reborn Chance Maker, sorry dude, but I've made my decision.

1ce, I'm up to date on both mangas, so I know plenty enough. Again, this was one of my first fanfictions so I didn't really think people would expect much from me.

Guest, will do.

darkchannel30, ouch, I can feel the burn. But hey, it's your opinion and I respect it. My redo should be up to par with my current skills anyway.

GR, as I stated above, I'm up to date on both mangas and know plenty enough. But I suppose I can do some research for the sake of accuracy.

Guest, again, I apologize, but my mind's made up. I do appreciate the fact that you like this story.

On Soaring Wings, rest assured, I will still keep elements from this story and implement it into the rewrite.

Rednaut67, will do.

Smartpain101, glad you feel that way.

Guest, sorry dude, my decision's made.

Red John, I can safely say that points 1-7 are a given. I've said this once, and I'll say it again. The harem route wasn't even a THOUGHT when I was writing this story. Any suggestive bits between the other girls are strictly for comedic purposes only. Regarding Points 1 and 2, I was a Sheele-lover at the time and I wasn't thinking straight by any means, at least at the time. Points 5 and 6, you bet your ass Bulat's staying dead(not trying to be cruel) and I'll try my best to give the other Night raiders a chance to shine. Regarding point 7, I remember seeing a previous review touch upon that fact, and yeah, I'm definitely fixing that. I had no idea what I was thinking, making Luffy kill someone. Now as for Point 8...I have mixed feelings about that one. It sounds like a cool concept, but I'm not sure as to how I would actually execute that idea. The part involving Kuma teleporting Luffy sounds realistic enough, but like I said, the other stuff is kinda like..."eh." I'll consider the idea though, and if I do implement that idea, I'll make sure to credit you. So thanks in advance. Either way, I'm glad you took the time to point out flaws and suggest new ideas.


Now that I have that all settled, it's time to get going now. I'll keep this story up, in case anyone still wants to read this, be it old or new. When I post the rewrite, it will be titled "One Piece: Rubber and Scissors V2" with a new cover picture.

This is vocaloidHM01, and as always, see you next chapter.