Chapter 2 guys… I don't know. I am really not satisfied with my work… I really need advices.
Disclaimer: I feel so stupid every time I say I DON'T OWN BEYBLADE.
Thanks to: Sonata Hirano, Sakura-Firefly, Cheese Grows On Apples, Tenshi OF Freedom and NecoDee
And Steve: you think I should try better? You know you are right… but this is my first fic. And I need help… if you don't like it, say its bad I respect it… (I respect that you said I should try harder) but how? and what exactly that need improvement? Or is all my fic bad?
Promises of lies… chapter 2
"you know Kai… I hate seeing you look sad. Please stop"
Sometimes it's hard to keep the pain inside and we cant stop crying over our pain
That new guy in the tournament was good… hell he defeated Tala!
That's what Tyson thought there when he looked at the bladers.
Tala at first was annoyed that he lost against an amateur. But with his friends beside him he got better. Specially when Kai insisted that that new guy was no an amateur, but a very skilled blader. And he damn proved that.
Tyson now is going to duel him after his match with Brooklyn witch he won.
Flashback:
"Tyson! You won your match!" Brooklyn said smiling. Tyson felt creepy toward that smile. He saw Brooklyn smile like that in the previous tournament. Brooklyn smiled as if nothing was wrong in this world… the smile was nice, but Tyson feared of the things behind that smile. Last tournament Kai suffered enough because of Brooklyn and Tyson vowed that he'll protect Kai.
"congratulations. Tyson!" Brooklyn said as if he didn't care about his defeat. Weird! Didn't he feel worse the last tournament when Kai defeated him?
"thanks I guess! You also did well!" Tyson said, fighting that creepy feeling. Maybe, MAYBE Brooklyn changed to the better. At least every one deserve a second chance
Brooklyn smiled more, but was a soft smile "thanks, but I was congratulating about you and Kai. Are you sure that you can be together? I mean he suits Ivanov more!"
"do you mean that I don't deserve him?" Tyson said sending a glare toward Brooklyn.
"no offense!" Brooklyn said holding his hands up slightly "really I didn't mean it. It just that it wasn't expected. I mean Kai is just different from you, but you proved that opposite attract… anyway, congratulations!"
Tyson nodded. If that was what Brooklyn thought, then it was fine. Hell he even heard worse. Lots of people even said that Kai actually loves Tala. But caring for his reputation, dated the champion witch was Tyson. Even he himself thought that.
Kai and Tala just suit each other. But I cant help but love him. Hell I feel myself fly every time he says that he loves me. Even if I know it was just a lie he then shake his head but if I was the champion in this tournament also, Kai still will be mine
"thanks Brooklyn!" he said and left to see the next duel. Which was between Tala and Mark. The new talented blader in the tournament who managed to reach the finals without loosing for once. I wish for Tala good luck
… End Flashback…
And Tala lost. The duel was fast and simple and Mark made Tala look like an amateur. Now Tyson is going to duel him. He never underestimated any opponent but still, being a champion for three years made him self-confident that match I'll win for sure
A hand interrupted his thoughts and he looked to find Kai smiling at him "good luck Tyson!"
Tyson smiled back and nodded "thanks. I love you Kai! Cheer for me huh!" Kai nodded.
That was another reason why he thought Kai loves him only because he's a champion. The dual haired blader never said 'I love you' back. True a lot of his action proved his love, but Tyson couldn't help but wonder if it was because he had a hard childhood or because he loves Tala more?
quit being an idiot Tyson! He loves you and you love him. That's what matters
He stood in front of Mark. The boy appeared to be at Hitoshi's age. there was a big smirk on his face. His eyes were red… but Tyson was paying more attention to the mark under his right eye… Tyson thought that the guy looked handsome with his red eyes and purple hair tied to a pony tail. But that smirk made him look… evil.
"are you ready Kinomiya?" Mark asked "you should give me a good battle, or you'll lose. I cant promise that I'll be easy, and you saw what a good blader I am. So if you wish to keep Hiwatari for yourself then you have to win. Or he'll be in Ivanov arms"
"Who said that Kai loves Tala? He loves me. If he loved Tala, then why would he bother to stay with someone other than the person he loves?" Tyson replayed.
"oh poor little Kinomiya! Are you really that blind in your love that you don't see the truth?" he said "I'll tell you. If Kai was a very private person who loves quiet places and quiet people, then why would he bother to stay with you? If Kai always berated you for your eating habits, then why would he want to stay with you? Because you're nice? Well apparently that there are a lot of nice people… like Ray, he's nice. And instead of eating Kai's food, he can cook food. Because you're handsome and strong? You're not the only one. He can go to Tala. He's handsome, strong and he was raised with him, so they understand each other perfectly!"
The way he said all that with that mucking tone made Tyson lose control
"shut up! You are here to duel, not to talk about my relationship with Kai!" he shouted.
"I just wanted to warn you" he raised his blade "I'm not going to be easy!"
LET IT RIP
Some how, and without knowing why… Tyson felt like he's loosing something or someone important.
You had enough pain Kai…I promise…I'll protect you…forever…
' I will not loose you Kai… I cant loose you!'
Chapter two finishes here… please guys, I need your help.. I am happy with my work. Should I continue or stop?
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