Here's a pretty long chapter

I want you guys' opinion on something; not to be self promoting, but I was thinking of starting to write other stories. Would you guys read them? I have this one idea that a new vamp comes to forks and all the cullens love her, bella doesn't trust her. And some other stuff happens and I have an idea for a sequel to that story(if I wrote it). It wouldn't slow me down on this one at all. What do u think? Tell me what I think in the reviews. Again, not try to promote myself on a story that didnt even belong to me at first. :)


Neferet POV

I paced back and forth in my office. "What do I do with Bella?" I asked out loud. She is going to ruin our plans. Get rid of her, she has abilities that are powerful. I can sense them. "What are they?" I said again aloud. I sense great mental abilities. She can control with her mind. She's also has an immunity to your mind powers. "So I'll have to find another way to destroy Bella Swan." I said.

"I think I can help." A voice said from nowhere. I turned and a girl suddenly appeared. She looked angry and powerful. I liked her already.

Unknown POV

"Who are you?" asked the brown-headed woman. She was beautiful; I'd give her that. Tall, brown hair, great body. And she seemed to have power and she seemed crazy enough to help me. I mean I walked in on the chick talking to her self.

"Let's just say I'm a friend. And friends help each other, right?" she nodded. "I'm going to help you get rid of Bella. On the condition that I get to do the honors."

"Feel free! I just need her gone!" she said. "But what do you have against her?"

"That's my business, and it will stay that way unless I say otherwise." I growled.

"I apologize. I am Neferet, head master and High Priestess of this House of Night." She held out her hand to me. I shook her hand. She seemed shocked at the temperature of my skin. I love doing that.

"So, what do you have in mind for Bella? What can you tell me?" she asked.

"Not much. I do know that she is no longer under the protection of the Cullens and without them she is weak." I said. "I do have a plan."

"Well, please do tell me. Could you possibly tell me your name?" she said.

"Victoria."

Stark POV

Bella cried out in pain and began to fall to the ground, but the guy kissed her caught her in inhuman speed. He kissed Bella. The thought of her in his arms made fire burned through my veins. I ignored my anger and ran over to him and Bella. He was supporting her in his arms, and she was unconscious.

"What happened?" I asked. He looked up at me. "I don't know." Then looked to his left on the ground. "I think this rock just came out of nowhere and hit her."

"We should take her to the infirmary." I said. "I'll do it. You don't even go to this school and you can't be caught." Get the hell out of here and don't come back, I thought to myself.

"I'm not going anywhere! I'm staying with Bella." He snapped.

"Regardless. She needs help." I snapped back, staring at Bella, limp in his arms.

"Edward, let Stark take Bella. We can't get caught, if we do it'll be bad and Carlisle would be upset." I looked up and saw a pixie like girl standing behind him. Where had she come from? And how did she know my name? He turned his head away from Bella and stared up at Alice, the looked like they were some kind of silent conversation. He let out an angry huff of breath, and stood up.

"You take her straight to the infirmary. If anything happens to her, I will personally see that you are dead!" he said shifting Bella into my arms. He looked down at her and stroked her cheek. I've had enough of this!

"What's your deal?" I said. "You show up out of no where, kiss my girl, and now your acting like your in love with her! She's my girlfriend! Your not even Marked!"

"Girlfriend!" Edward growled, then stiffened. He turned to face the pixie. "You saw that! And didn't even tell me!" he growled at her.

The pixie girl looked down at her feet sheepishly. "Well you know how you get when it comes to her…" she said. "What were you thinking?" Edward said. "You should know." She muttered under her breath, "Look, we can talk about this later."

Bella groaned and tried to shift in my arms. "You guys go some place and hide for now. I'll take her to the infirmary." I turned and walked to the infirmary, my head spinning.

I walked into the infirmary and the nurse asked what had happened. "She hit her head," was all I said. I laid her down on one of the beds. The nurse busied around her, and then turned to me and asked, "Who is her mentor?"

"Priestess Neferet, I think." I said. "Well, she's going to be okay, but her mentor should now where she is." The nurse said. "Maybe you should alert her." I nodded and toward Neferet's office and stopping by to get her roommate, Zoey, on the way.

BPOV

I really wished that I could wake up in my bedroom back in Forks and this could all be a dream. But, I know that I'm in Tulsa. I know that Edward is back because I'm in danger. I also know that Stark saw Edward kiss me, and that made me so upset that I didn't want to open my eyes. I heard voices. None of them seemed familiar at the time, but I began to identify them one at a time.

"What happened?" I heard voice one say. Zoey?

"She should be waking up soon. I healed her head a moment ago." Voice two. Neferet?

"A rock came out of no where and hit her in the head in the court yard." Voice three. Stark!

My eyes snapped open and the first thing I saw was Stark's face. I felt tears well up in my eyes at the thought of how I had hurt him. "Oh Stark!" I cried. "Please don't be mad at me! Please let me explain-" he put a finger to my lips. "It's okay. We'll talk about it later." He whispered. I sighed and relaxed against the pillows.

"Bella, what happened?" Zoey asked.

"I don't know. I was hit in the head by something hard." I said trying to remember. "I know what happened." Neferet said. "Bella has been blessed by our goddess Nxy. The ability to control with her mind has been given to her. Physical objects of course."

"Really?" Zoey sounded exited Nxy had blessed me. Me, plain, nothing special me. Wow, I feel special. "Bella this is a very powerful gift, and should be treated as such. I should beginning training you soon." Neferet said. "Great." I said not liking the idea of spending alone time with Neferet.

"Bells! Your blessed like me!!" Zoey said. "And me." Stark said. Zoey and I looked at him. "Our Stark here has been blessed with amazing archery skills." Neferet said. (A/n; did she know about that??)

"Wow. So its not really that uncommon." I said. "Actually, Nxy only chooses who she feels deserves it." Neferet said.

"So, what's the damage?" I said, trying to change the subject and wondering where Edward and Alice were. Probably lurking somewhere near by. I may not want to see Edward, but I still miss Alice.

"Just a bump on the head." Stark said. "How do you feel?"

"Eh, I've had worst." I said thinking back to last spring.

"Well you should get some sleep." Stark said.

"Zoey, will you help Bella back to your dorm?" Neferet said.

"Of course." She said coming to help me out of bed. I hugged Stark bye and walked down to the dorm. Zoey made sure that I was in the room before she ducked out back to class. I changed into sweats, and washed my face. I crawled into bed, setting my alarm clock to wake me up so I could meet Jake after classes. Just before I fell asleep a thought occurred to me. I got out of bed, and closed my curtains. Knowing his stalker type habits.

I woke up a few hours later. My alarm was set to go off much later. I wanted to see Stark. I got up, got dressed and brushed my hair until it looked decent. And headed to the archery field, figuring that's where he would be.

I walked though the courtyard. I was the only one there. "Bella." A velvet voice said from behind me.

I turned around and groaned. "What?" I snapped. "We need to talk." He said.

"Really? Well, I'm a little busy at the moment. Rain check?"

"Bella, please." He begged.

"Make it fast." I said. He smiled his crooked smile, but it didn't reach his eyes.

"I'm so sorry Bella. Your being here is my fault and-"

I cut him off. "Don't pull that 'poor tortured vampire' act. Me being here has nothing to do with you. You left, I got marked, and now I'm either gunna die, or become a vampyre. And surprise! I was actually starting to be happy again, then you show up and ruin. Am I just some little human pet you like to toy with?" I yelled, tears forming in my eyes.

"Bella…" he started.

"I was happy!" I screamed, tears tearing down my face. "I was so happy with you, Edward! You took it away! You strung me along, after all the times you told me you loved me, every time you kissed me, every thing was a lie!"

"Bella, I meant every word I said to you. I still love you!" Edward said. I just stared at him. "I still love you, and you can't change that. I left to keep you safe, because I love you. I'm came back because I love you, and Alice saw a vision of you covered in blood. I just want to keep you safe."

"You can't come running back to me every time Alice has a vision of me dead. I'm human, I'm going to die eventually. Or at least I was human…" I said.

He stared at me. I turned and started to walk off, still crying. "Do you still love me?" he asked from behind me.

I looked down speaking quietly. "What do you think? I have no choice. I do love you. I don't get much of choice; I fell for you, and was hurt when you left. I love you. I don't know if I trust you."

"You can."

"Can I? Really? How do I know you just won't up and leave, next chance you get."

"I wont"

I shook my head. "I have to meet Stark." I started to walk away.

"Do you love him?" he asked.

"I don't know. I really like him, he makes me smile, which I haven't done often since you left." I said, smiling. "It could happen, I could the way I feel for you, toward him."

"I see." I could hear the pain in his voice.

I began running. I wanted to see Stark. He was on the archery field, just as thought. I approached him ready to tell him everything.


Songs- Go On by Taking Back Sunday- Photobooth by Death Cab for Cutie- Liar by Taknig Back Sunday- By Myself by Linkin Park- Chase this LIght by Jimmy Eat world.

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