The Reaper's Lullaby

by iTorchic

"It was a song that she had never heard before, but as the bone-chilling melody wavered in the air, she couldn't help but be enchanted by it." AU. An FMA version of my entry for a creative writing contest I entered. I'd appreciate critiques!

2. NOTICE

Hey everyone! So, I had some great news that actually pertains to this story…

Well, the original version of this story (the non-fma version) was edited a bit and I ended up entering it into a screenwriting competition! The good news is…I made it into the top fifty! That means that I'm in the second round where I'm actually typing up the story in screenplay form. So, if I get into the third round it'll be the top 15 where I revise even more and work with a professional director and producer and I revise even more from there. Now, if I end up winning then this story will be produced into a legit and professionally made short film, about 10 minutes or so.

Well, the meaning behind this is that I wanted to know if you guys wanted to stay updated in how I'm doing in the competition. So, let me know in a review please!

BTW: The competition I'm entered in is the 'Milwaukee Film Collaborative Cinema Screenwriting Competition'.

~iTorchic