Neither Naruto nor Watchmen belong to me.
Bear in mind, we are viewing Hollis from Eddie's perspective, not mine.
sorta semi-short chapter.
Part One is completed, expect updates once every five to seven days. There are eighteen chapters in Part One. Part Two looks to be shaping up nicely, and the chapters are longer than in Part One.
Oh yes, and the rape scene is coming up after this one.
Twenty-nine chapters written and counting...
The war's over.
Eddie started out fifteen and chuunin, and came out a legend, seventeen and ready to make jounin.
The war's over, and Sally keeps her promises.
So they go out on that date.
Rolf Muller isn't even a factor – he's been shacking up with Nelly for more'n a year now, and doesn't everybody know it, because Nelly is a screamer.
He gives her yellow daisies - she's allergic to roses – yellow like her dress, and takes her to that Wind-country restaurant because she hasn't been and he can afford it.
She laughs at his jokes and he keeps the comedy PG-13 rated so the restaurant staff doesn't ruin things by kicking them out. He doesn't act perfect, but he lets her see him trying to behave, and maybe that's enough, because at the end of the night she kisses him on the lips and reaches for the door.
"Let's do this again sometime," She purrs, moving inside. She licks her lips and closes the door behind her.
And hot damn. Best. Night. Ever.
Hollis Mason has been tripping over himself around Sally lately, all moony and shit.
Eddie's got his number, can smell lust all over the chivalrous boy.
Thing is, Mr. Owl can't win, because Eddie knows Sally.
He's known her for five years now, knows her habits, likes, the whole damn list.
He knows she likes picking fights, likes him to hit her like he means it. Sally is a kinky girl, most kunoichi are, but Eddie doubts Hollis Mason would believe that, not when he's set Eddie's girl up on a pedestal to admire.
That pretty face may be flawless, but she's never been perfect for anyone but Eddie.
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