Ok, here's chapter 7. This a little short but it's what i can think of for 'that' kind of time. As in what i think would fit well after chapter 6. Again, I'd like to thank Candy sweetxcandyx for letting me help her and write this 2-way story. I hope you enjoy this! Thank you, enjoy, and review =D
if no one likes this or if i dont get a lot of reviews...then i'll stop writing and let sweetxcandyx continue from where i left off. so please review =P
"Thierry, oh my Thierry, you don't know how much I really want you to love me right now. Sadly, I don't love you anymore. But to stay alive, I need to keep my promise about the deal. I don't even get why Hecate made such a deal with me.
Maya, I think you know that your spell won`t work. In order for you spell to work you need a shell, in other words, a body. But I think you already know that your body isn't found or it could possibly be even burned to ashes so even if your soul can escape from hell, you`ll have no shell for it. But that is where I come in. I can help you get you own body back. But you must make a deal with me.
At that moment, I really wanted to live to take revenge that I didn't really remember clearly what the deal was. But because I have nightmare about the whole happening every night, I remember clearly what the deal was and I regret promising.
You will have to find true love. I will give you a faux body right now, but I have cursed it so it rotten and will slowly rot away. But I hope you know that finding true love is very hard, so I'll give you 2 months. If you can find true love by the end of the 2 months and your body hasn't rot away yet, I'll take it back and your soul will return to hell and never return. The deal is off when your lover says 3 words...I-love-you. When those 3 words are spoken, the deal is off, you`ll get a non-rotten body and stay alive as a human until you get killed.
Hecate, you have a more evil mind than mine. But, then again, all these thousands of years of being alive, I've loved Thierry, he never loved me back and no one else did too. In fact, no one I love loves me back. I have to find my true love soon and I know Thierry isn't my true love but I need someone to say those 3 words to me, or else...
I can already see that some parts of my body are rotten and rotting. I think I have enough time, but I don't want to let Thierry see me all rotten and love...isn't that just like soul mates?...I want Thierry as my soul mate, oh I've longed for him and I want him to leave- this is just like killing 2 birds with 1 stone. I get Thierry and stay alive, and I somewhat also take my revenge on Hannah Snow. Perfect."
That was the end of one entry. It was written the night Maya had made her unexpected visit to my mansion. So this wasn't the recent entry.
Thierry then flipped through a couple more pages until it was the last entry of the diary.
"If Thierry doesn't fall in love with me then I'll –"
BOOP BOOP It was the noise that the small car remote makes, signaling locks to lock.
Before Thierry could finish, he knew he had to leave, now. He couldn't let Maya see him reading her diary, even worse, in her room. But he wanted to know what she'll do to him if he doesn't fall in love with her. If he continued reading then it'd be too risky. There, it came to him like a lightning bolt, he knew he already stalled too much time thinking. Instantly, he placed the diary back to its original spot and left the room. When he stepped out and took his first step.
Right in front of his eye was a crossed-arm angry Maya.
NOTE: i'd be happy to take any suggestions for how this whole story should end or go to an end( you will get credit, dont worry)
um what i mean by "deal's off" is like you do the deal and something like accomplished it, but i didnt know how to write it so i just wrote 'deal's off'
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Chapter 8 release date: Wednesday, August 19 2009- Friday, August 21 2009
I am very sorry that that chapter 8 will be coming out not so soon, but this whole week, i'm busy with Volleyball Camp =[
i will try to finish writing and upload them all at once but i need ideas for a good ending. Again, i'm very sry(sorry)