Okay so I thought of the way to counter act with the broken promise.
I will put this chapter in Max's POV, because looking at the comments a lot of them say
'can't wait until Max is back in' or 'where's Max' or what a friend of mine said to me earlier this week 'put Max back in god damn it or I will rip your testicles off and staple them back on'. ( All the people who are male that are reading this must have felt the pain run down them. I know I did)
Yeah I know she is really weird but you gotta love her.
Anyways I decided I would be a nice author and put Max back in.
so here is Max's POV. ( I should really be doing my homework and projects for over break)
This small cramped cage is hurting my back. A LOT. I tried breaking the bars but I'm not strong enough. I tried everything it still wouldn't budge a bit so I just quit. I had lost count of how many days they had kept me in this hell hole.
My whole body was sore bruised and beaten from the last few 'meetings' with the Whitecoats. I was dirty from head to toe and I had nibbled most of my nails off. I had bled so much that I think if I even et one more cut all my blood would flow out of me like a river turned upside down.
They barely feed me anything. They chained me to huge, heavy things when I am outside of the cage. I had cried so much these past few... I don't know that I had probably lost all of the tears I would ever be able to cry.
The only reason I haven't killed myself yet is that I know Fang is coming. He is the reason the I am sane. I tried lying down but I couldn't so I just sat there leaning against the bars only in my hospital gown, barefoot. The door opened and I was blinded by light momentarily. A tall figure, in a white coat, reached my cage and unlocked it. It was a different man, like everyday, that came to get me. The man had a thin mustache and beard. Graying hair and his eye color was unusual, red, like all the other redcoats. This was usual so I didn't do anything. He just talked.
"So Maximum" They had started calling me that because it pissed me off. "how are you doing this fine day." He said with a sneer. I growled at him.
"Now now Maxie" They started calling me that because Jeb did "Don't growl at me. I'm bringing you somewhere new today." My brain was throbbing erratically. "Oh you still don't know do you" I looked at him funny. "There is this horde of things trying to invade here, but with all these new robot things they can't even get within thirty feet of this place." My mind was reeling of many thoughts
Was it Fang
Was it some group 'destined' to kill every last human on Earth
Or were they just plainly lying to me.
I moved my mouth to speak but all that came out was a squeak. I hadn't spoken for a long time and the Whitecoats think that I am mute. Which is a benefit to me because I don't have to speak to any of them.
He started rambling on and on until something caught my ear.
heard a large bang from the other side of the wall. There was more banging and yelling. The man lifted me up and threw me on a chair. I groaned ass the cold metal made contact with my calf and the parts of my thigh that wasn't covered from the gown.
"Ah there you go Maxie. You have this room to yourself until we take carer of the pests." He said walking out of the door. He slammed it shut and I heard many gears moving and footsteps fading. I looked around the room until I spotted a bowl of water and food. I plopped down on my knees and hands and crawled over to the food and water. When I got there what I saw was not what I thought.
The water was brown and yellow and the food look like shit. No I mean really it looked like it came from a dog's behind. I tried to throw up but I had nothing to throw up so I crawled back to the chair and lied there for a few seconds before I heard more banging and yelling behind the walls. It sounded like I fight was going on. I leaned against the wall and listened closely to the voices.
The sound was faint and I suspected it was happening on the ground floor. I was on the basement level where the most security is. I listened to the battle. There were robotic sounds, animal sounds, sounds in between, and human sounds. None of those voices really mattered to me until I was about to pull away from the wall.
"Thanks Iggy" Said a husky, deep voice. I recognized it fast.
Fang.
I started banging on the wall but I was pretty sure he couldn't hear me. I stopped and slid down, pulled my knees to my chest and tried to imagine the fight going on. The fighting went on and on.
I so wanted to fight beside Fang.
Hold him like he was all I ever needed.
I just wanted to be with the people I love and care about the most.
Hold them and tell them that I love them.
I tried zoning in on what Fang kept saying over and over again. It was ragged but it was audible to my enhanced hearing.
"Max I will save you" or
"Max I'm coming" or
"GET THE HELL OUT OF MY WAY" or even just his breathing and the sound of fist to metal.
I had never heard Fang this ferocious before.
I smiled.
Fang is here.
Fang did come.
Fang please save me.
I stopped smiling and folded my hands.
Fang...don't die.
So tell me what you think
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Who is excited for an epic battle between mutant and mutant. *gasp*
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