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I had just put the first chapter of Twin Ravens up.
Read it, I think it is pretty interesting. That was not me gloating. Please give Twin Ravens a chance.
So here's chapter 34
I had just saw Max catch my eye before she was blindfolded. In that one look she told me 'Fang, I'm going to help in anyway necessary'. Or at least I think it meant that. I noticed another girl with her, with a tail, holding her hand for comfort.
I turned back to my group looking intently at me. I took a breath in and started the plan. We found out the approximate measurement of the building. We also decided that we will all stick together. I explained everything to the group and started assigning them positions.
"Iggy and Gazzy take lead." They obeyed and stood in the front of the line. "Max II, Angel, and Nudge are in the middle" They stood behind Iggy and Gazzy "Everyone else will be around the perimeter of the building." They split into groups and went to the sides of the building. They were close but safely far away enough for them not to get spotted. I breathed in and thought of Max.
Max I'm coming
Max Help me
My eyes snapped open
I just hope that only scientists will be in this 'School' and not Erasers and Flyboys. I gripped my Golieth blade and called for fifteen minutes until the raid on this alleged 'School'
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
When Down, Stand Up
Max P.O.V.
They led me and Adais to a cellar but I couldn't recognize the place because there were so many turns in this place. The Whitecoats took off our blindfolds but kept the cuffs on us. We were silent until we heard no more distant footsteps.
"Who or what was the shadow in the woods."? She asked exasperated
"Fang" I said brightly gaining my strength back. Ready to help Fang.
"Who the F is Fang"
"He came to break us out of here"
Adais' face physically brightened and she thumped down on her butt. After a while she started talking again.
"You mean that someone you know has come to save you-" I didn't let her finish before I started talking.
"He came to save us"
"How has he come to save 'us' when he doesn't even know me of vice versa" She asked flailing her arms.
"That's just the type of person he is. He will help you if you need help. He will comfort you when you need comfort. Except that he isn't very talkative." Images of Fang flooded my mind until Adais started asking questions.
"Wait is this the Fang you told me about in the van"? She asked confused
"Yes he is. This is the one and only Fang"
"How will he break us out when this place is full of creeps and mutants"?
"He's not alone" I said shrugging.
"Well who did he bring"?
"Friends and others"
"Well what do you-" She was going on but then we heard rattling and footsteps and... shootings? We looked at each other and stood up clawing our way out of this death cage.
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
Never Give up
Iggy P.O.V.
I was scared as shit as we raided the School. I haven't been here for years. I was probably shaking a lot because Angel's small hand wrapped around my right index finger from the back as Fang was explaining again on what to do. I kept saying to myself Never Back Down, my motto, to calm myself down. Angel chimed in, in my head.
"Iggy stop shaking."
"But I can't I'm nervous"
"I know you're nervous and all but you have to save your sister"
"You know for such a little girl you can have the most soothing words. Thanks Angel." I tried to calm down as Angel let go of my hand after a squeeze. I started humming to myself to calm myself down. I cracked my knuckles and neck and jogged in place a little.
When this is all over I just want to go home be with my sister and my possible girlfriend, Nudge. Those thoughts just wanted this to end now, but I controlled myself.
Fang had just finished talking and walked around. I did too then I noticed Nudge alone.
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
Never Back Down
Angel P.O.V.
Talking to Iggy like that helped not only him but me to. I was also scared and wanted Max back. But what could I do except control and read minds. I wanted to do more but I just don't have the physical strength. I looked up at Fang as he told us we would go in ten minutes. The others would follow a little later. I looked up at Fang and he looked down at me. He walked over and lifted me up and hugged me close. He put me down but was on his knees. He sighed and started talking to me.
"Angel no matter what happens you and I will still be brother and sister. No matter what happen you have to pull on even if I'm not there. You will have your friends and all."
"Fang don't say that" I said crying
"Angel I don't know if I will live but you know what to do." He hugged me close to him again and he kissed my forehead.
"Angel I also want you to have this" He took off his necklace that he had never taken off before and put it around my neck "Just in case the worst happens. I want you to keep this and keep it with you forever." I hugged him around the neck and let go.
"Love you Fang" I said sweetly
"Love you Angel" He kissed my head and stood up. I sat the fingering the necklace for a while. I kissed it and stood up.
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
Keep Moving Forward
Nudge P.O.V.
Max please be okay. That one phrase kept running on my mind. Fang had just went to talk to Angel. It was sweet to watch and all but I need someone to cry on to. Iggy must have read my mind because he came over and hugged me. He patted my head and I buried my face on his neck and sobbed for a second or two before he started talking.
"Nudge you know that we may not get out of this alive so" He choked so I started talking.
"Iggy I will be with you from beginning to end, always."
"Nudge I will be here for you as well. And well I have to say something." He kissed me briefly but it was sweet. "Nudge I love you for all that you are. I don't care if someone is rich and all. I love you for who you are."
"Iggy I love you too" I kissed him and Fang called him over. He held onto my hand but when he was far enough he let go. I stood there reminiscing about my life before this and surprisingly enough, I wouldn't change anything that has happened to me. Ever. I love my life and everyone in it.
Human or not.
I started thinking of what to do afterwards and started walking around. Then I heard Max II and Gazzy talking
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
Pull on and you will achieve
Gazzy P.O.V.
I paced around waiting for the invasion. I even got so bored that I started drawing stuff on the trees. But inside I was scared to death. All my memories from all those years ago flooded my memory as I saw the School. I tried keeping my cool but Max II noticed. She walked over to me and put her hands on my shoulders
"Look Gazzy I haven't known you for a long time so I barely know you. But I do know that you can kick major ass and you are a freak at making bombs."
"Thanks Max II. I appreciate it" But even that didn't bring me anything but fear.
"Okay so look here Gazzy I haven't told anyone this but I'm nervous too" She didn't seem to nervous.
" I was made her and I can and probably will be destroyed here also. They can just press a button and I will be smithereens on a battlefield. This is my last battle so I ask you can you fight for Max, Angel, Iggy, Nudge, and Fang. They all need you. Without you they don't have someone with extreme talents."
I was quiet the whole time she said this. As she said this I gained a new... feeling. The feeling that I have to gain courage for my sister and brother and my friends. I have to help them and they have to help me.
"Thanks Max II. That really helped me."
"There you go. That's our little trooper." She stood up and walked away. I gained courage and determination to go on and fight.
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
You're Never A loser until you quit trying
Max II P.O.V
I can be destroyed here. I have known that for a while but never told anyone until now. I need to fight to my fullest until I fall down or get smashed or anything. I just have to fight until I can't anymore. I need something to fight for. I had just found the reason to fight... To condemn myself for all the wrong things I have done in my life. When this is all over that is when I will drop down on the ground and die happy to myself. I was so deep In thought that I didn't notice Nudge come over to me.
"Hey" I greeted
"Hi" She also greeted " I am sorry but I over heard you talking to Gazzy and just want to help you In anyway possible. I want you to live. Even though I haven't known you for a long time I want you to live for some reason. Even though you tried to kill my friends. They seem to have forgiven you and all so I thought I would give you a chance. I want to start on a new slate. So how about it." She said stretching a hand out to me. I took her hand but pulled her in and hugged her.
"Thank you Nudge but I'm not sure if I can live"
"Don't be so doubtful I know that you will live. You have been important to us and we will have your back. We are one unit that means that when one dies we avenge for the fallen one." I was in tears because nobody has ever cared about me like the people around me now.
"Thank you Nudge. For everything" I choked out. She nodded and went to Iggy and Fang. This gave me confidence. I will try my best in this battle. Even if I die, I know I have friends like them. I shed another tear and got into place for the invasion.
Something ran through my brain and I liked it, it gave me courage and strength. I kept saying it to myself over and over
Finish Strong
Third Person P.O.V
On all of their minds came a single thought:
Bring on the fight
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All the underlined words are Quotes. Except Nudge's I don't know where I got that from. I just made it up.
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