I've thought about it and so I decided I should reread my chapters lolol. I think it's too short for one thing and made some mistakes I woulda noticed if I read it once more. I think also need to but more clarity on settings and stronger adjectives for Hinatas and Sasukes emotions. Hinata needs to be a bit more darker too.
Thank you the reviews!
Atykka - haha studying French paid off~ *cough * google translate *cough* after rereading, I must agree with you. I tend to go a bit fast so I'll try to slow down. Tell me if I should go slower since I don't know the drifts yet. Looking forward to your further advice! :D
tastetherainbow17 hehe thank you 3 I try my best to make characters not OC. Sasuke needs to be Sasuke for this fic. Please look forward for the next chapters!
nanitaa you know, I only read a few fics about hinata being the caretaker lol. But don't worry! Hinata's the main character. Should recommend me some fics about that too btw lol. I hope it's different. Don't wanna let ya down now D:
Ill re-do the whole chapter but I want to see my progress with the following. In other words ima rewrite the story when it's finished. Thank you for all those favored and reviewed! Hope ya guys keep on reading and givin me more advice!
Am I allowed to recommend a fanfic here? Lol it's the one that inspired the beginning of this.
Disclaimer- I don't own naruto
It has been a few days since Sasuke woke up and Hinata never failed to stop visiting at noon. After all, visiting the Uchiha brought a little comfort to the young Hyuuga, considering that he doesn't give her pity. As for Sasuke, he actually 'enjoys' her company. She isn't loud like his other two teammates and doesn't smell like fucking ramen. In fact, he really likes her soft voice; it reminds him of his mother. Not that he'll ever tell Hinata. Sometimes, the raven-haired boy would just listen to her occasionally saying "hn" or nodding his head if he finds the conversation interesting. And the Hyuuga seems to radiate happiness every time he gives her acknowledgment. Other times, they would just sit in silence. The young woman would just think about her own problems while clenching her baggy pants. These are the times where Sasuke would observe her through the corner of his eye, watching her inner battles and actions. He could ask her what's wrong but then again it wasn't his business.
Just where the fuck is she? Not that the cold-hearted Uchiha was worried about her. Sasuke just hated hospital food. It was so fucking... Bland. And why was it so damn cold?
He heard the footsteps closing in to his door.
It was not Hinata.
And he definably hates it.
The door opened while the displeased boy glared at the intruder. If only looks can kill.
"Get the fuck out Sakura." He dead-panned.
"Sasuke-kun... How are you feeling today?" Sakura notably disregarded his greeting.
"Great until I saw your face."
She signed with obvious pain displayed on her face, "we need to talk Sasuke-kun."
"Get out," he glared.
Sakura walked to the chair closest to his bed, "Sasuke-kun, why-"
"Stand."
The Uchiha formed some type of bond with the Hyuuga over the days and branded that chair only hers (inspired from anther fanfic. Don't recall the title but I fuckin loved it. Need to read it again now). He knew Sakura meant well but doesn't change the fact she wanted him dead at some point. Well, almost everyone wanted him dead. Sakura's affection towards him annoyed the shit out of him, but he was still thankful nonetheless. Perhaps it's the way she treats the blonde idiot, or maybe it's she isn't the same person as he once knew her. Not that the raven-haired boy would even consider her as someone above teammate. In fact, the only reason why he came back was for his loyalty to a certain stupid dobe and to claim his clan's estate. Anyways, where the hell is that pupil-less freak? She should be here by now with his damn tomatoes!
"... Suke-kun... Sasuke-kun!" An annoying voice broke his trance, "are you even listening to me?"
"Hn," he replied without looking at her.
She sighed.
"For all these years we searched for you. Don't you feel anything? Every night, Naruto and I would think of you. Didn't you know!?" Sakura's voice started to rise, "Naruto blames himself for not being able to bring you back home. Sometimes, the night you left us - me - it's just... Kami! It hurts me to see Naruto beat himself; it hurts me that I couldn't do anything too! And now you're finally back..."
Sasuke just stares with his all knowing poker-face.
"I'll do anything for you, you know that? There hasn't been a day when you weren't in my mind." Why can't you see that Sasuke-kun? "Can't we please... Can't we go back like we were-"
Sasuke looked towards the window. "Sakura, people change." He knows he can't go back to his childhood. After all the decisions he made, he's unable to take them back. His pride won't let him. His guilt will forever dwell in his hardened heart. The guilt of betraying his precious older brother, and his wishes, but training with Orochimaru was not part of that list. And the thing is, he's completely fine with that.
Ah, he can hear that damn Hyuuga coming.
About time.
A twinge of slight disappointment appeared on her face. "Sasuke-kun! Please-"
The door opened.
"Ah! I'm sorry, should I come back another time?" The indigo haired girl squeaked.
"No, she was about to leave." Sasuke closed his eyes trying to dismiss the Haruno for making his ears hurt.
Pain and jealousy flashed in Sakura's eyes. For once, why can't things go her way? She sighed once again,"... Just so you know, you will be discharged in three days, and glad to have you back, Sasuke-kun," she left glancing quickly at the apologizing Hyuuga.
"Sorry. It seemed like..." The Hyuug's eyes drifted to her feet.
"It's fine. Sit." He stared. He noted that the Hyuuga's eyes were a bit pink. Had she been crying?
"Oh..." She sat down, "sorry I'm late-"
"Stop apologizing," the obsidian eyed boy glared.
"Sor-" the Uchiha's glare hardened.
"Hai..." She poked her fingers.
It was weird. The more the ex-avenger looked at the Hyuuga, the more he noticed the color of her skin. He couldn't see much of course, considering that the konoichi was wearing a baggy jacket, he could see her abused color of skin. But then again, as curious as he was, it wasn't his business.
"Ano... Sakura-chan and Naruto-kun... They really missed you... In three days, you should visit them-"
"Not your business. Worry about yourself," the Uchiha demanded. Even if it wasn't his business, he did imagine quite a few scenarios.
Her lavender eyes widened slightly. Hinata faintly felt that the man in front of her can see through her. She could feel the anxiety bubble up then died in her chest as she remembered flashes of memories she experienced moments ago.
It just got her off guard.
No worries.
However, it was a bit amusing to see the expressions on the Hyuuga's face. Sasuke inwardly smirked.
"Hyuuga, let's spar." He broke her trance.
"Huh? Ah, hai!" After all it was good exercise for the male. If he pushed himself too much, she could easily use her gentle fist to stop the chakras flow temporally and heal him. On the plus side, the hokage would want reports on the Uchiha's strength. Well that is, if she's fast enough to do it.
As for Sasuke, he would slowly earn the village respect so the damn ANBU would fucking stop breathing down his neck and slowly regenerate his strength.
The obsidian-eyed man was actually pretty grateful that his "watcher" did not possess a shitty or bitchy voice and above all, she held comfortable silence with her. If his watcher was annoying pinklette, she wouldn't stop talking about his, her or stupid dobe's fucking feelings. He could care less because he couldn't change the damn past. On top if that, his feelings are not to be shared. He ain't no chick.
As for Naruto, too fucking loud. He just got out if the hospital for Kami's sake. He needs to 'adjust'.
Any other, he just hates 'em them all. Ino? -shitful chatterbox. Annoying as hell.
Shikamaru? - lazy smart ass
Choji? - fuckin fatass! Sounds of chips cracking will drive the Uchiha insane!
Kiba? - the mutt boy the Hyuuga has been talking about. The Inuzuka visit him once with the pupiless and bug boy and the whole time, the damn mutt boy obviously showed his dislike in him. After all, 'Hinata shouldn't even visit him' or says the mutt.
Shino? - Sasuke can tolerate that is because he was usually quiet.
Lee? - Oh my fucking- hell no.
Neji?- Damn cocky Hyuuga with a cousin-con.
Ten Ten? - not interested
Ah! That's right she forgot!
"Ano... Uchiha-san, I have further news from Tsunade-sama."
He nodded so slightly, it didn't seem like anything but his gesture told her that he was listening.
She continued, "In three days, you will be living at the Uchiha compound-"
No shit. He isn't going to live in some fucking infested apartment.
"With me."
Oh, that changes everything.
"Until Tsunade-sama has further orders."
Sasuke replied, "Hn."
An hour flew by with the Hyuuga talking or enjoying each other's presence. It was unusual since the women had to leave early - with a good reason of course: clean up and prepare the Uchiha compound for his arrival.
The Uchiha grunted his farewell and so she left his room with a gentle click of the door leaving the obsidian-eye boy with his own thoughts.
Alrighty so ill recommend the fanfic i simple adore!
s/8902724/1/Rubatosis
it inspired me the most!
- I still need to make it a bit longer though huh? I need to adjust to the changes but is it better than the last chapter?