Butterfly Kisses

by newmew4you

The alien planet is dieing, the aliens plan to go back to earth with a new recruit, Demmi.But there is more reason she is there than to just save her planet.She is there to avenge a death, one that Pai caused.But is there more to the story? Discontinued

5. Authors Note

AUTHORS NOTE

Hey guys, newmew4you here! I just wanted to ask you guys, what do you think I could improve at in my stories? Spelling, grammar, description, length, any ideas would be helpful! If you would please comment and give any suggestion, it would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!