The Angel Avenger
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Aleta:Can you just shut up and write please! I've been wasting my time here! Sin will agree with me!
Sinopa:Yep, can you please get on with it!
Me:Okay, but do I have to do the disclaimer?*whines*
Sin/Aleta:YES!
Me:Fine*grumble* I don't own the flock or anyone that appears in Maximum Ride, if I did I wouldn't be here and would be fixing Fang and writing Angel. However I do own Aleta, the Pride, and anyone that doesn't appear in the books so there! Here is the chapter!
Previously:
Sin. pov:
"I FOUND THE FLOCK! I FOUND THEM!"
"Okay Arno, chill out! Jeez, yell loud enough?" I thought angrily at him.
"I see something down there, I'm going in." Siren pulled her wings in and dove at the Flock. The rest of us followed.
"What the..."The tall blond yelped. Obviously Maximum Ride. Huh, what do ya know, she's not as built up as her file made her. Stupid whitecoats try to intimidate us, they have officially failed.
"Who are you working for."I demanded. Arno and Sirena snickered.
"Sin that absolutely HAS got to be one of your best or maybe worst quotes from the movies."Sniggered Sirena.
"Well atleast I remember them word for word, you don't. So there." I retorted. Max lowered her guard, perfect.
"Why do you guys have wings?" Blurted out Dylan. Ah, the reject of the Branch, interesting. Last time I saw him, he was cowering behind a table as Seth beatted the...well yeah, good times.
"Duh, we were made by whitecoats what about you guys?"Sirena laughed. She is always one of the first one to gain our targets trust. Good girl.
"Ohmagosh thats like so cool! Well really it's not because they were messed up to do that to innocent kids and they didn't need to be so mean! Were they mean..."Angel slapped her hand over Nudge's mouth.
"Hey I am Sinopa, this handsome boy is Arno, thats Sirena, her sister Siren, and Hawk. I am really second in command, our leader, Aleta, has gone off to recruit more mutants to fight Itex. She has Byrd another one of us with her." I stated pleasantly.
"So, you wouldn't know a dark guy named Fang would you?" Max asked.
"No, never heard of him. Aleta might have met him ,but we haven't."I stated innocently.
"Oh, well, so what type of experiments are you?"
"What type of DNA combo. do you guys have is what Max is trying to say."Iggy stated.
"I am a fox avian recombiant, Siren is a seal avian recombiant, Hawk is a vampire, Byrd is a wolf avian recombiant,and Sirena and Arno are avian recombiants."
"What about your leader, Aleta?"Asked Gazzy curiously.
"We cannot reveal anything about her, Pride Policy. The leader should always have an edge on anyone not of the Pride. Sorry."Sirena cut in.
"So what happens next?"Demanded Arno. He glared at Angel and then looked expectantly at me, his light brown eyes trusting. He shouldn't be doing this type of thing. Being an assasin and a spy isn't what average eight year olds do. Then again none of us are average.
"Well, if Max is compliant, we could stay with the Flock for a little while." I drawled. Arno grinned.
"We'll stay with the Pride for a little while."Max shrugged. The Flock cheered. I can't help thinking that if one of us did that within a mile of Itex or the Branch we would be shot instantly if we did that. The Flock immersed itself into the Pride. Angel and Arno paired right off, Sirena took the initiative and went and asked Gazzy about bombs. Hawk started to talk with Nudge. Max moved over towards me.
"Tense much?"She joked.
"Have you ever felt secure, then turned around only to find a gun pointed at your head, your family members except for one in the same situation? Aleta was the one loose. She saved us somehow ,but at a price. First lesson as a Pride member, always be ready for anything." I grounded out.
"Oh, what was the price Aleta paid?"Max asked with a curious look. I ignored the look. I surveyed the Flock, Pride, and our surroundings.
"She was shot, fourteen times and beaten badly. They broke her nose, three ribs, two fingers, and dislocated her left shoulder. The Pride fought back ,but we didn't recieve any critical injuries, just bruises. Eventually, the next night we noticed that Aleta was wheezing and coughing. She had a rib sticking in an organ. We barely saved her. Thing is, she never told us she was in pain, never yelled at us, she didn't even complain ,except for stupid things. We had a conversation a few days ago about what color the sky is."I sighed, unfortunately that is what I wish had happened, it was a whole lot worse than what I just told Max.
"Whoah. So what about you? When was your glory momment?"Max laughed uneasily.
"I ate six hershey bars at once last week."I suggested. Max snorted.
"Think we should move away from this area? Did you see anywhere we could rest?"
"Arno saw a glade a mile from here. HEY FLOCK AND PRIDE!" I yelled. Everyone stopped. I mock bowed to Max.
"We are going to go find a campsite away from here. U and A guys!" Max commanded. The Flock and Pride took off. I looked at the now abandoned resting spot, then I followed.
Aleta pov:
Byrd's ramblings are quite amusing. There is one about Spongebob(whoever he is), cheese, a potato chip, and a tube of lipstick. Trust me, if you heard it your mind would be blown. Literally.
"Aleta!"Sang Byrd for the hundreth time. I groaned.
"What Byrd?" I frowned.
"I'm soooooo hungry! We need food, and since you don't have money, which you should have because your the leader after all. Though should the leader really have the money since..."
"Byrd. Get. To. The. POINT!"Fang growled.
"Anyway, what I was about to say was that we should either rob a bank or go earn money at a club or something like that."
"Hmmm...I say we do both. Let's rob a jerk, not a bank, and buy ourselves some instruments!"I smiled slightly. Byrd whooped.
"Couldn't we just use the money from the jerk to pay for a meal?" Fang querried.
"Fang, how could you say such a thing?"Byrd gasped dramatically.
"What Byrd is trying to say is, what's the fun in that? We haven't had this type of chance since...who knows when!" I glared at Byrd.
"Byrd, you ,and I can't believe what I'm saying, can pick out our clothes and maybe help make us look better, within reason."I sighed.
"YESSSHHH!"Yelled Byrd.
"Yesh?"
"It's a new word Aleta." Byrd rolled his eyes mockingly.
"Now to decide about our preformance stuff..."I started.
"This is going to be so epic!"Interrupted Byrd while fist pumping. Once again, why did I bring him along?
Okay so what do you guys want Byrd, Aleta ,and Fang to preform(songs), who should have which part in their miny band(singer, back up, etc.), and what should they call themselves? Anyway I hope you guys enjoyed. Please review!