Awesome, already the second one.
So this one, is pretty good. Yeah, it is.
Elysia establishes her hate for love even more, and thats what I loooooves about this one.
So, read on my dearies!
Chapter 2 – Hating Love
"Ell! Elysia!" I heard Taylor yell out too loud for the library. I looked up from my book to see Taylor running up the library steps, stumbling over a few lose bags. She ran into the chair next to me and threw her bag down. There was only one reason that she would embarrass herself like that.
"Ray asked you out, didn't he?" I asked, setting my book aside.
"Yes yes yes!" She squealed and started jumping around in little circles.
"How'd it happen?" I asked. Taylor sat down next to me after Mrs. McDonald; the librarian shot her a warning look.
"Well, first I was talking to Jake right, then next thing I know some random dude ran over me with a bike. But it turned out to be Ray! So he started to freak out if he hurt me, then he was all like 'I didn't run you over! You're not hurt. Stop whining'. So I started to get really upset when he just blurted out, 'Be my girlfriend?' And I said yes!"
She started squealing again
"I gathered that Tay" I laughed at her expression.
"Well, hello my ladies!" I heard a very obnoxious voice call out. I looked up just as Melanie come and sit on my lap.
"Ugh, gosh Mel, you should lay off the Smith's!" I exclaimed
"And do know how irritating your tone of voice is?" I asked.
She ignored my question and turned to Taylor.
"Have you seen the new yummies?" she asked, licking her lips and waging her eyebrows like an evil villain.
"Can't wait until I can try my tricks out on them" she sighed.
I rolled my eyes at her eagerness to 'get' with the next guy she could get her hands on.
"Come on, let's go. I don't want the six different guys your dating to hear you" I told her, shoving her off me as the last school bell went off. Taylor got up as well, but two different guys took our places next to Mel. She flipped her blonde hair over her shoulder.
"So, Ray and I have a date. This Friday. He wants to watch a movie or something." She sighed as she gazed lovingly into space. I made a gagging sound.
"Uh, Taylor? Friday is our movie night" I told her, grabbing her arm to make her stop completely.
"Oh shoot! I totally forgot!" she slammed the heel of her palm into her forehead. "I'll cancel on Ray, promise" she dug around in her skirt pockets for her phone.
"Don't worry about it. We'll do something on Saturday. Mock some chick flicks or something" I teased her. I didn't want to her to see that I kind of was disappointed.
"Oh, there he is now," Taylor pointed to a figure further down the side walk. "Hey, Ray! Over here!" Taylor shouted out, running towards him as he turned around.
"See you later Ell!" She yelled over her shoulder as she ran.
I sighed heavily and started to walk towards my house as it started to rain. I pulled out my thick yellow rain coat. This is how it starts. First, they start forgetting about your plans. Then, they start taking they're boyfriend along with them, and you end up feeling like a third wheel. After that, they start to hang out more with them than they do with you, and to make up for it, they try to 'hook' you up with a friend of there's. Then, they just forget all about you.
I walked through the rain. I was staring at my black high top converse get soaked in water and mud. I groaned when I though of how I was going to get the mud out of them.
Suddenly I ran into someone.
"Watch where you're going!" I exclaimed, and met Conner's brother's gaze. I groaned.
"Well well, look who decided to disgust me with her awful presence" he held on to one of my arms.
"Piss off" I spat at him. I wasn't in the mood to deal with him tonight.
"Not so fast Robins" he pulled me closer when I tried to shove him away. Just like Conner, his brother hated me. When he was still at school, I made fun of his name, which was Carl. I mean, Carl? How could you not laugh at that?
"Conner told me about that stunt you pulled the other day" he leaned in closer.
"So he's to pussy to face me himself?" I asked
"This isn't for Conner. Purely for me" he grinned evilly.
"Wtf dude? Let me go" I leaned away. He was really hurting me.
"She said let go" Carl turned around – therefore dragging me with him – to see Jake walking towards us.
"Right. What are you going to do?"
I groaned. I didn't need this. Not today. Just as Carl's grip on me loosened, I pulled away and Jake lunged forward, punching him in the face. Several people stopped and formed a circle around us.
"Run!" he yelled at me. I rolled my eyes. No way was I going to allow him all the glory. Before I walked off, I kicked Carl right where it hurt. He crumpled to the floor, holding his crotch.
Suddenly, I heard the loud roar of a very familiar sounding car. I turned around expectantly to see the proverbial sleek black vintage car pull up loudly next to me.
"Jump in" I heard a voice call. I shoved my back pack in the boot and jumped into the passenger seat. I looked next to me to see my older brother grinning at me.
I smiled back but when he winked at me, I looked behind me, knowing that he couldn't be looking at me. I was right. Several girls had stopped on the sidewalk and were sighing and fluttering there eyes at my brother. He winked again.
"Come on, hot rod. Let's go home" I pulled the door closed.
So, I know everyone does this, and its desperate in a way, but I'll ask anyway...
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