Darkvizardking: yo, what's up folks, sorry about the wait, kinda lost track for a while, but now everything's cool. Well, it's time for everyone's favorite segment, REVIEW CORNER, and we have a special guest here this time. Please welcome Soul Evans everybody.
Soul: Damn it, I told you not to call me that, so not cool.
Darkvizardking: You gonna help me with the reviews or not man?
Soul: sure, it wouldn't be cool if I didn't.
Soul: Shadow the Hedgehog 12: Thanks, sorry for the wait.
Soul: Raidentensho: oh believe me, a LOT of crazy shit is about to go down, and I have some SWEET surprises coming in next chap, as this will cover the rest of the month break.
Soul: OBSERVER01: oh you have NO IDEA how much oro-fag is gonna get FUCKED up, and I WILL NOT HAVE EXCALIBUR SHOW UP, that guy is WAY too weird. Same with Black star, hell no.
Soul: Ultimate-Zelda-fan: dood, both. And how I reveal it will be AWESOME, if not making you ROFL. I have the SE char call him Lord death, but the Naruto char will call him Shinigami-sama, as SE is in a more American setting, seeing as death city is in the Arizona desert, while naruto is more Japanese related.
Soul: GingitsuneRaposo: Thanks dood, and seeing as it is a form of Naruto's bloodline, he can reshape it anyway he wants, so long as the basic blade design stays the same. Kinda like how Ragnarok could change his shape from a broadsword into a katana.
Soul: Hakkyou no Yami: oh he will, Asura's power will help his soul wavelength increase, and develop his reaper powers, seeing as he knows how Lord death fights.
Soul: thymistacles: thanks dood, and it's only gonna get better.
Soul: Naruto007: thanks, and the fight was the same as cannon remember, so everything is still the same. Including when it happened.
Soul: kyuubi ruler of all bijuu: Thanks for the compliment man.
Soul: Ofunu: thanks for the compliment, but this was my first story, if you look at some of my other fics you will see I have improved. I accept all forms of criticism, honesty is something I respect over all.
Darkvizardking: and that's all for the reviews, I thank everyone who reviewed, and hope you all continue to do so. Soul, thanks for coming down, mind doing the disclaimer as well, seeing as I don't want to get sued?
Soul: sure, "Darkvizardking does not own Soul Eater or Naruto, or any other series he may make a reference to during this fic, they belong to their creators, 'even if kishimoto is acting so uncool'
Darkvizardking: thanks man, now without further adieu, LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED!!
Naruto, The next shinigami shinobi meister,
Chap 14: Dinner, training, and fun times.
Naruto and Medusa led Hinata home from the hospital, Medusa and Hinata were in front of Naruto, talking about random girl stuff neither Naruto or Asura could understand. (we guys never can) Asura said, "To think, Hinata-san almost didn't make it to the hospital, if it weren't for our intervention."
Naruto bristled at the memory, seeing Neji beat Hinata was bad, but demeaning her as well, was too cruel, and when Neji tried to kill Hinata, Naruto snapped.
(flashback)
Neji stood a few feet from Hinata, her body visibly racked with pain. But yet still she stood, the determination still in her eyes. Asura was impressed with her tenacity, as she reminded him of Maka during their fight. But unlike the fight he and Maka had, this one was NOT turning in Hinata's favor. Instead, Neji was truly dominating. Neji spoke up, saying, "It is useless, just give up, a weakling like you stands no chance against a genius like me."
Hinata said nothing, she merely stood up, still eager to continue on. Neji, with a pissed look on his face, said, "Why don't you just give up, a loser is always a loser, you won't change that."
Hinata looked Neji square in the eye, and said, "I can't do that, if I give up now, nothing will change, and, (she blushes and looks at Naruto) there is a person watching, a person who inspires me. In front of him, I can't bear to give up, I can't bear to look uncool."
Naruto smiled, and thought, 'If Soul-Nii-san were here, he'd complain about Hinata-chan stealing his word.'
Hinata continued, saying, "You may believe I am weak, that I am foolish, but the true weakling, the true fool, is YOU Neji-Nii-san. You let your belief in fate blind you, so you can't see what is in front of you."
Neji was angry before, but now he was pissed. He charged at her, aiming to kill her, to silence her words. The Jonin moved to stop him, but were beaten to the punch. Literally. Naruto, seeing what Neji was going to do, leaps over the railing, his anger driving him. Four pitch-black vectors, each with claws in the shape of a reaper mask, stretched out of his back, his skin moving in a way to form the same scarves Asura himself created, three-eyed mask and all. Neji was impaled in his arms and legs, the vectors pinning him to the wall, but not damaging him or the wall behind him. The jonin were about to tell Naruto to let him down, when they felt it. Pure insanity, and the hallucinations that followed. Everyone in the room started to hallucinate, Sarutobi seeing the day Orochimaru left, Anko saw the day her former sensei betrayed her. Each person who hallucinated saw their worst memory, but Neji's was different. He saw the day his father resigned himself to death, but when that memory broke, he saw something far more horrifying.
Naruto standing in front of him, the four vectors still coming out of his back, but he saw the mask that Naruto wore, it was covering his face, even his mouth was covered, but it was the eyes that scared him, those three eyes, they seemed to see right through him. Naruto lifted a hand up to the mask, pulling it up slightly, showing his mouth. Neji was really becoming afraid, but when Naruto opened his mouth, he revealed pointed, razor-sharp teeth, it sent Neji over the edge. He screamed, "OH DEAR KAMI, GET ME AWAY FROM THIS MONSTER, PLEASE HELP MEEEEEEEEEEE!"
The Jonin were still in their hallucinations, but Kurenai was able to break her's early, so she saw Neji's flip-out, while Naruto was standing in front of him, not even touching him. Kurenai almost thought it was genjutsu, but it wasn't. Naruto had the mask on, as well as four scarves wrapped around him, seemingly COMING from him. Kurenai went to each of the Jonin, breaking them from their hallucinations. Hinata collapsed on the ground, her breathing becoming erratic, Naruto heard her, and quickly rushed over, his anger temporarily forgotten.
When he reached her, the mask receded, allowing Hinata to see his face. She said, "Naruto-kun, was I able to change? Even a little bit?"
Naruto smiled, and Hinata saw his hair move, revealing a third eye, or at least it looked that way, seeing as his headband was off his forehead, he said, "Yeah, of course you did, don't worry, you were great." Hinata smiled at this, her face showing relief, but was then contorted in pain, her then coughing up blood, some of it falling on the floor. Naruto shouted, "GET THOSE DAMN MEDICS IN HERE NOW!"
As he watched as the medics carried Hinata away, Naruto's anger boiled once again. Neji did not see this, but he said, "I'm not sure how the hell you did that, but you shouldn't waste your time with that loser, she is nothing but a main branch brat."
Naruto turned to him, the mask creeping back onto his face, the scarves rising in a manner similar to the vectors. Two of the scarves lashed out, wrapping around Neji's neck, lifting him into the air, and dragged him close to Naruto. Naruto spoke, in a voice that made everyone, even Orochimaru, who hid in the shadows, to get a chill run down their spine. "You better pray to what ever deity possible that Hinata lives. If she doesn't, I will devour your pitiful soul, AFTER I make you BEG for death."
Naruto had the scarves drop Neji, and made his way to the railway. Everyone's thoughts were the same.'I pray to Kami she lives.'
(flashback-end)
Naruto thought, 'I know, which is why after this dinner is finished, you and I will train, as I need to learn your powers better, as well as my reaper powers.' Asura replied, 'I know, I can help you with controlling my powers, and your reaper powers will increase with time, I can teach you how to control your wavelength, making it easier.' Naruto thought, 'Thank you, Asura-sensei' Asura laughed and said, 'Don't call me sensei, makes me feel old.'
Medusa looked back at Naruto, and said, "Naruto-sama, we at the Hyuuga estate, you spaced out the whole walk."
Naruto looked back and said, "Sorry, I was just thinking about what happened, and what almost happened." Both girls knew what he meant. Hinata said, "Well, the clan tradition states that a guest may only bring his teammates and family, I'm sorry, it seems Medusa-chan can't come tonight."
Said woman sighed, saying, "It's alright, the last thing we need is that clan breathing down our necks. Their a bunch of arrogant pricks, oh well, (she leans into Naruto) I'll see you after you get back from the dinner, and you may want to speak to Crona, she really wants to see you."
Naruto knew what Crona wanted to 'see' him about, and made sure to talk to her. He said, "Alright, I'll head back to the compound, Medusa-hime, Hinata-chan, I'll see you both later." He then disappeared, no shunshin, just pure speed.
(Namikaze compound)
Naruto walked in the front door, and was greeted with a glomp, courtesy of Crona. Zabuza, who was walking out of the kitchen, chuckled at the sight of it. He then said, "Makes me glad I came with you guys."
Naruto replied, "Not that I'm complaining, by why were you so willing to join up with us?"
Zabuza said, "If there was one thing the last Mizukage did, and did right, was to put your clan under a flee-on-sight order. Well, at least what the bingo book said. He called it a 'never-fuck-with' order. Basically, if a mist-nin runs into anyone from the Namikaze, we DON'T fight them, missing-nin or not."
Naruto and Crona looked at each other for five seconds, then at Zabuza. Then they started laughing, enough to roll on the floor. Even Asura was laughing as hard in Naruto's mind-scape, his legs were kicking in the air.
By the time Naruto and Crona stopped laughing, Zabuza had left, and Asura had fallen asleep from laughing so hard. Naruto and Crona were fully alone. Naruto broke the silence saying, "Crona-chan, I heard you wanted to talk-" He was cut off, as Crona gave him a hard kiss. They made out for a few minutes, but need to stop for air. Naruto said, "Damn, I did not see that coming. I see you and my mother have done more then sword training, she must of helped you in your confidence right?"
Crona nodded and said, "She has, I know it sounds strange, (she leans into him, her head in the crook of his neck) but I, I can't help but feel, so connected with you, I never felt this way before. I just, "
Naruto finished, "Don't know how to deal with it?"
Crona nodded, "Yeah, I've liked you for so long, when Okaa-sama was watching you through her snake, I watched too. Every time those bastard villagers came after you, I wanted to cleave them in half, I wanted to help you wash away the pain you felt. I wanted to say this for so long, that I, that I, I love you."
Naruto put a hand under her chin, her face lifted up to meet his, and he said, "Crona-chan, I know we haven't known each other long, and if you want to make us a couple, like how I am with Tsubaki-hime and Medusa-hime, I won't object."
Crona's face lit up, even though they both spoke like this before, it was still nice for her to hear he cared. Naruto continued, "Unfortunately though, I have to deal with the Hyuuga clan at a dinner this evening, so we 'consummate' yet, as I need to get ready for it."
Crona nodded in understanding, having been informed of the dinner by her mother. "I know, I'll see you when you get back." She then got up, gave Naruto a kiss on the cheek, and left to her room. Naruto could only think, 'Kami I love my life.'
(Hyuuga mansion- that night)
Naruto, Ryu, Kushina, Ryu's mother, as well as his aunts in adult form, each stood in front of the gates to the Hyuuga complex. A guard already went in to tell of their arrival. Kushina was wearing a formal kimono, it was red to match her hair, with blue waves bordering the bottom. Mizune was wearing a pink kimono, with what looked like mice on the border. Ryu wore a male kimono, the back having a dragon coiling around a yin-yang symbol. Naruto wore something similar, a black formal kimono. On his back was his Hisofu's mark, a reaper mask, surrounded by three eyes set up in a triangle pattern.
The gate was opened, and the group was led to the dining area, where they saw Shino and his father. Naruto said, "Never thought you were one for formal stuff like this Shino."
Shino, stoic as ever, said, "I could say the same for you Naruto-san, yet here we are. I would like you to meet my father, Shibi Aburame."
Naruto turned to the person Shino was talking about, and saw the resemblance immediately. Both of them were wearing a green kimono, with bugs serving as a border at the bottom of their coats. They both still wore their sunglasses. Naruto held out his hand, "It's a pleasure to meet you sir, Shino speaks highly of you as a shinobi. Being a clan head, you certainly must be."
Shibi, just as stoic as his son, said, "Thank you Naruto-san, if only the council members could speak with you, they might stop acting like illogical pricks."
Naruto just sighed and said, "What can you do, those civilians have no knowledge of shinobi affairs, yet they act like they know everything."
Shibi nodded, being on the council meant having to hear the civilians whine and bitch about their petty ideals. What to give Sasuke next, trying ways to kill Naruto, the usual shit. Before they could continue the conversation, Hiashi, Hanabi, and Hinata came into the room, and when Hanabi saw Ryu, she looked away with a large blush on her face, trying to hide it with her sleeve. Naruto and his tenant both thought, 'Well what do we have here?' Then they thought, at the exact same time, 'Blackmail'. Mizune and her sisters(both in their adult forms) smiled and thought, 'A first crush, and it's on my son/nephew. How cute.'
Hiashi saw all of this, but decided not to say anything about it. He then broke the silence by saying, "I thank you all for coming, it is rare to be able to have dinners like this. The elders try and have people stay out of our home, those old fossils." Everyone just looked at the man, not expecting him to insult the elders. Naruto laughed, and said, "Let me guess, a bunch of traditionalists, who don't want things to change? The two bozos who work as advisers for Oji-san are the same way."
Hiashi, uncharacteristicly started to laugh himself, before saying, "Yes they are, and I know of the advisers, as I have to hear them at council meetings, along with Shibi-san here." Shibi merely nodded, confirming it. Hiashi then said, "I believe the food is ready, (he moves to the table) let us eat."
A few branch members bring in trays of food, each stacked with various dishes, Onigiri, won-ton soup, and various other foods. Naruto and Ryu were visibly drooling, Asura wanted to join in, he himself was drooling at the spread. Hiashi and the others chuckled, then Hiashi's expression turned serious as he said, "Naruto, I know what happened when my nephew fought Hinata, and how you 'reacted' to it." Naruto looked up, anger on his face apparent. Naruto said, "I swore I would make him pay for what he did, and I will keep it."
Hiashi sighed, knowing he couldn't talk Naruto out of it, so he said, "All I ask is not to kill him, but try and see if you can break the 'fate rules all' mentality, as it will destroy him one day, I was lucky that Hanabi did not gain it, despite what the elders drive into the heads of our young ones."
Naruto smirked, "He will suffer, but he won't die, i'll make sure of it."
Hiashi smirked as well, and said, "Glad to hear it, now let's eat before the food gets cold." With a collected murmur of 'Itadakimasu', everyone began to eat. Kushina and the Mizune sisters were gossiping like old friends, Naruto and Hinata were sitting next to each other, Hanabi was sitting next to her father, all the while stealing glances at Ryu, who noticed right away. Hiashi saw where his daughter was looking, and thought, 'She is just like her sister. Must of came from her mother.'
The dinner soon ended, but the night was not over. As Naruto and the group passed out of the gates, a branch member of the clan came forward and said, "Excuse me, Hanabi-sama asked to pass a message, to Ryu-san, 'Meet me at the koi pond in the garden, and come alone'. She sounded urgent."
Ryu turned back to the group, Naruto smirked and said, "Go on, we'll wait for you, wouldn't want to keep a lady waiting." Ryu chuckled, but went anyway.
(Hyuuga garden-koi pond)
Ryu walked near the koi pond, Hanabi was sitting next on the edge. Ryu, in an attempt to break the silence, said, "You, wanted to see me?" Hanabi turned, a large blush still on her face. She said, "I do, I wanted to give you this, but I was afraid to do it in front of everyone else." Getting up, she reached into her kimono, and pulled out a small box. When she got near Ryu, she said, "Here, I made it myself, I hope you like it." She handed him the box, which he then opened. Inside was a necklace, with a blue stone attached to it, with a white dragon coiled in the center. It shone in the moonlight, allowing him to see it clearly. Ryu then said, "My Kami, this is beautiful, you made this? How?"
Hanabi blushed, and said, "I did it using a type of water jutsu, it won't melt, and I thought it would fit you Ryu-kun." Ryu smiled, and he said, "It does, thank you Hanabi-chan." He then put the necklace around his neck, and said, "I really have to get back to the others, the elders may try something, saying that they were 'somewhere they weren't supposed to be', or something. But don't worry, (he gets close to her) I saw how you looked at me all throughout the dinner, and I do like you." He kisses her on the cheek, then leaves. He doesn't see her pass out in a manner similar to her sister.
(Hyuuga compound-Gates)
Naruto saw Ryu coming back, and when he saw the necklace, he thought, 'Wow, I knew Hanabi liked him, not surprising, seeing as she was eyeballing him all night.' The group then proceeded home. As they passed an alleyway, Ryu stopped, and said, "You guys go on ahead, I have something I need to take care of." Naruto looked at Ryu for a moment, nodded, and said, "Alright, don't take too long, we'll head home." Ryu walked into the alley, and said, "I know you're there. You can come out now." A figure stays in the shadows. Ryu continues, "Be that way, you'll only make it worse for yourself once you do reveal yourself, Danzo. I'm not sure why your following Naruto, but, I know you don't plan to harm him. Because of that, if you were to speak with him, he will hear you out. The roots have to revealed sooner or later, whether they be weeds or flowers." And thus, Ryu walked out of the alley, if he stayed, he would of seen an old man walk out of the shadows. He wore the clothing of a councilman, but had bandages cover his right eye, and he walked with a cane. He thought, 'Maybe that boy is right, for too long the roots have hidden, but now it is time to reveal those roots. I will not allow this village to rot, nor will I allow Naruto-kun to face the upcoming dangers alone.' And with that, he slinked back to the shadows, as if he were never there.
(Namikaze compound)
Ryu walked in the home, and saw Naruto relaxing on the couch, Crona and Liz sitting next to him. There were three sake cups on the table in front of them, a regular sized sake bottle on the table as well. Ryu sighed and said, "I'm heading to bed, watch how much you drink you three." He then went upstairs, leaving Liz, Crona, and Naruto alone on the couch. Crona spoke first, "Naru-kun, how was the dinner?" Naruto replied, "It was a little more relaxed then I thought, and that's saying a lot considering it was the Hyuuga we had dinner with. By the way, I haven't seen Soul-Niisan or Maka-san around lately, is something going on between those two?"
Liz spoke up, "I wouldn't be surprised if there was. But, (she leans into Naruto) they might be asleep, so, I hope you haven't forgotten Naru-kun. About the reward."
Naruto, taking a swig of sake when she said this, said, "I haven't, believe me. So, when shall we do it?"Liz grasped his hand, and lead him upstairs, Crona following her.
(Naruto's room-Lemon, same rule as before, don't like, don't read)
Naruto opened the door to his room, and walked in. Liz and Crona strode to Naruto and pushed him gently back on the bed. Crona moved to occupy Naruto's mouth by kissing him firmly when Liz unzipped his pants to find Naruto's semi-erect penis. "Wow, it is so big.....and it is not even fully erect yet." Liz thought as she tentatively touched it. Then she grasped in a firm, soft grip and began to stroke it up and down. Naruto moaned a bit, arousing both Liz and Crona. Liz then took him in the mouth as Naruto worked on taking Crona's shirt off. "Your nipples are stiff..Crona-chan." Naruto said as he unclasped her bra and began to play with her breasts. Crona moaned, "Mmm, Naruto-kun...don't...do that...if you do that, I'll...go crazy." Naruto smirked, "That is the idea..." He sucked on one of them, causing Crona to gasp out in pleasure. Liz got aroused from watching Naruto fondle Crona's breasts and from sucking his dick. She quickly shedded her shirt and pants along with her bra quickly and began to give Naruto a tit job, occasionally licking the head of Naruto's penis as it appeared between the valley of her breasts. Crona moaned, "Naruto-kun....sugoi....sugoi." Naruto slowly moved his hand to the down under and caressed it a bit before he entered his finger inside of her. "Ah, Naruto-kun...." Crona gasped out. Naruto said, "What is this? You are this wet just by me fondling your breasts. Mmm, damn, Liz....you keep doing that and I will cum for sure." Liz said, "That is the idea, Naruto-kun...." Then she thought, "It is so big and he tastes so salty...the smell of his dick is so alluring." As Naruto felt that his dick was about to explode, he quickened his speed with his finger driving into Crona's pussy. Crona moaned in ecstasy, "Oh, yes, I am so close, Naruto-kun...stir your fingers inside me more." Naruto added to the pleasure that Crona was feeling by sucking on her right breast. Crona's screams of pleasure made Liz work her in a sweat as she used her breasts to stroke Naruto's dick. Naruto grunted, signifying that he was close and then Crona screamed, "Oh Kami, I'm about to cum, I'm about...I...I...I'm cumming! I'm cumming, Naruto-kun." Crona came on Naruto's hand and her panties, luckily Naruto pulled her pants down just a bit, so it wouldn't get wet. Naruto removed his fingers, making Crona whimper at the loss of warmth and pleasure. The former Kyuubi Jinchuuriki, now jailer to Asura took his fingers and sucked them clean of Crona's juices, "Mmm, you taste good, Crona-chan....now let's see what Liz's forbidden fruit tastes like." Naruto removed his shirt and pants from his persona, it felt so restrictive to him at the moment. Naruto pulled Liz closer to him and made a clone to start pleasuring Crona He kisses Liz on the mouth and their tongues battled for dominance, finally Naruto eased Liz to take control and her tongue explored the cavern that was his mouth. She situated herself on Naruto's lap with her legs wrapped around his lower back, as the two lovers kissed and touched each other, sending tingling sensations through their bodies. She grinded against his penis, making it once again rise up. "Wow, when Tsubaki said that you had stamina, you had it in spades." Liz commented as she felt his tool poking against her inner thigh. Naruto said, "Thank my father, the Kyuubi and Kami." Naruto began to fondle her breasts while the clone already had Liz in position, the Kage Bunshin said, "I will try to make this painless, Crona-chan.....are you ready?" Crona nodded, "Hai, Naruto-kun." The Kage Bunshin rubbed his tool against her folds, lubing the head up and pierced her slowly until he reached her hymen. He looked deep into Crona's eyes and merged with her body. Crona gasped out with a voice mixed with pain and pleasure, Naruto kissed her neck to console her whimpers and give her pleasure as well as letting her get use to his size. "Naruto-kun, I-I'm ready now...You can move." Crona whispered into her lover's ear. Naruto slowly nodded and moved within her, making Crona moan in pleasure along with the Jinchuuriki. "Damn, Rona's pussy....she is so tight...." Naruto thought as he moved at a faster pace. "Ohh, yes, Naruto-kun.....more, more, make me feel more." Crona moaned as she felt the heat reside within her body and soul. Liz's hand was trapped in the locks of Naruto as he entered her folds as well, then when she gave him the go ahead, he used his hip strength to fuck her. Since he was sitting down, his tool reached further within her folds and Liz screamed with pleasure, "Oh, god, Naruto-kun, your dick....it feels so good. Yes, more....oh, god, yes, more....ah, ah, ah, oh yes...fuck me harder!!!" Naruto kissed her collarbone area and made humming sounds, driving her into an abyss of insanity....an insanity of pleasure. His right hand grabbed her breast as he fondled it in circles while his left arm held on to her wrist, keeping her steady. If Naruto could see the look on Liz's face, her eyes were practically rolling in the back of her head as he thrusted inside of her like a piston. Then the Jinchuuriki moved her into the missionary position and Liz gripped the sheets as she felt wave after wave of pleasure being transferred as energy pulses throughout every inch of her body. Meanwhile Crona had her leg propped up over Naruto's shoulder as he fucked her sideways. The pink-haired girl screamed with pleasure as he moved back and forth like a lake, "Yes, oh, god....yes, Naruto-kun, fuck me harder....it feels so good, i-it's reaching deep inside of me. Oh, yes, I am about to cum...." Liz screamed, "I am about to cum too..." Naruto and the clone said, "Us too...." Naruto and the clone grunted while Liz and Crona gave one final cry of pleasure as they came together.
The clone disappeared and Naruto panted as he sat back on the bed, panting a bit. Liz looked at Crona, "That was amazing...." Crona said, "It was...." Naruto said, "Tell me when you are ready for round two, girls. You started this....and now we are going to finish it." Liz said, "Well, we reap what we sow. Give us a few minutes, Naruto-kun...we will take care of you."
Little did they now they had a witness to their acts. She moaned out, "Naru-kun, Liz Nee-chan"
(lemon end, for now)
AN: and THAT'S IT FOLKS, hope you all enjoyed it, and sorry again for the wait. By the way, i'm having a little poll that will end a certain debate. If anyone is familiar of the old Haku debate, then this one is familiar to you. The poll is, by your opinion, is what crona-chan's gender is. Male or female, answer the polls in your reviews, and give your answers in your reviews. It would be uncool if you don't review.
Soul: DAMMIT, DON'T STEAL MY WORD
DVK: oh well, you know what to do, you see the blue button, press it, press it.
