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Chapter 10

The dark figure sat at the desk in the corner of a dimly lit dirty room. The hands moved furiously over the keys of an old fashion typewriter. The clanking of the machine echoed off the concrete walls.

"They have no clue." The voice laughed. The typing ceased and the gloved hand reached over and picked up an autographed photo. "Never give u! Love Mai." The figure read off voice shaking with emotion.

The gloved hand trembled as the figure let out a few grunts and gasps of frustration and anger. Suddenly figure screamed and smashed the picture against the desk. "Oh, don't you worry." the voice now determined and bitter. "I won't give up."

Mai was dancing around her living room. She always did this when cleaning or cooking. She bopped to the music and sang. During her time in New York, she had been introduced to Rocky Horror Picture Show.

She had to admit it was strange, but whenever she cleaned and listened to rocky horror, she had to dress up in her fishnet stockings and high heals along with her one of her corsets and even went crazy with her hair and make up.

She looked like Janet in the final dance scene. She also did all the parts too. She actually felt very proud of herself. She would love to be in Rocky Horror, but she saw that the chances of that ever happening were very slim.

Just as she finished doing the time warp and dusting, Sweet Transvestite came on. Mai had the karaoke version of all the songs. She had to admit she had all the characters down. As the music began, Mai got into position and began to act out all of Sweet Transvestite. (I think everyone who watches this movie wishes they could be as sexy as Tim )

How d'you do, I
See you've met my
Faithful handyman.
He's just a little brought down
Because when you knocked
He thought you were the candy man.
Don't get strung up by the way I look.
Don't judge a book by its cover.
I'm not much of a man by the light of day
But by night I'm one hell of a lover.
I'm just a sweet transvestite
From Transexual, Transylvania.
Let me show you around
Maybe play you a sound.
You look like you're both pretty groovy.
Or if you want something visual
That's not too abysmal,
We could take in an old Steve Reeves movie.

The oven timer went off and she ran take out the dinner before it burned. She spoke the dialogue as she added a few ingredients.

Brad:
I'm glad we caught you at home,
Could we use your phone?
We're both in a bit of a hurry.

Janet:
Right.

Brad:
We'll just say where we are,
Then go back to the car.
We don't want to be any worry.

Mai finished in the kitchen and walked back out into the living room and continued singing

Well you got caught with a flat, well, how `bout that?
Well, babies, don't you panic.
By the light of the night it'll all seem alright.
I'll get you a satanic mechanic.
I'm just a sweet transvestite
From Transexual, Transylvania.
Why don't you stay for the night?
Riff Raff: Night!
Or maybe a bite?
Columbia: Bite!
I could show you my favourite obsession.
I've been making a man
With blond hair and a tan
And he's good for relieving my... ...tension
I'm just a sweet transvestite
From Transexual, Transylvania, ha ha,
HEY, HEY!

I'm just a sweet transvestite. (Sweet transvestite)
From Transexual, Transylvania.

She struck a final pose.

"Well I should hope you're not really a transvestite. We would have to break the news to my mother why there wouldn't be any little Mai's and Naru's running around for her to spoil." Naru chuckled as he stood in the doorway.

Mai was horrified. She had never told anyone about her secret love for Rocky Horror and her having to dress up when she listened to the songs. She screamed and tripped in her heals and tumbled backwards over the coffee table.

Naru hurried over to help her up. He was trying very hard not to laugh. He could see how embarrassed Mai was about him seeing her, not to mention her falling over.

"Wha-what are you doing home right now?" Mai stammered as her face turned a bright shade of red.

"I decided to take the rest of the day off. I can do that you know, being the boss. I see you've been leading a secret life. I'm not sure if I should be hurt or turned on right now." He laughed. Mai gave him a slight glare, but then began to laugh too.

"So if I was really a transvestite would you still be married to me?" Mai teased.

"Well that's a hard one." Naru replied and Mai gave him a smack on the arm and pretended to be offended. "I'm not sure how legal out marriage would be and mother would have to find a alternative way to get grandchildren."

"Oh I see how it is now." Mai laughed and pretended to pout. Naru scooped her up in his arms and moved toward the stairs. "What are you doing?" Mai asked.

"Going upstairs to double check." He replied and off the went to the bedroom.

"So - come up to the lab,
And see what's on the slab.
I see you shiver with antici - (4 seconds) - pation.
But maybe the rain
Isn't really to blame.
So I'll remove the cause. (chuckles)
But not the symptom."

The figure sang the last lines of the song while watching the married couple head up to their bedroom. "Have fun while you still can."

This is going to be about 19 chapters, chapter 20 is going to be a preview of the next story. Please Review.