Season 1: Chapter 7- Tien vs Goku

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Chemistry-Deaf: Ma Jr's commentary on Tien vs Goku (Thank you Trucking girl 1109 for the idea and the reviews so far!)

Ma Jr: Wha-! You want me to-?

C-D: Yes, I do! Now, get up there and have fun with it! Oh, here's your mike.

Ma Jr looked at the ear piece with microphone attached to it hesitantly. Dread was apparent to his face.

Ma Jr: Can't you make your own character Saxophone do this?

C-D: No, he's meditating! I can't have him do the commentary with something he doesn't see!

Ma Jr: Fine, fine, I get it! I'll make a deal with you though.

C-D: ... What deal?

Ma Jr: Saxophone do a commentary on a future match.

C-D: (thinks about it) I suppose ... I can do that. Which match do you have in mind?

Ma Jr: Either one since I'm going to be in both matches.

C-D: Rather sure of your victories aren't you?

Ma Jr: Of course! I pride myself in my abilities! I'm sure I can take them down easy!

C-D: You know I'm the author, right?

Ma Jr: (froze)

C-D: Well, do a good job, ok? (pats on Ma Jr's back and sat on a nearby chair observing the situation)

Ma Jr: (thinking) What the hell did I get myself into?

Ma Jr walked back to his place, scowling. He flew up to his original place and putting up the ear piece with the microphone on it. He was semi assured that those in the audience and the arena are not affected by his commentary. His acute ear picked up a conversation regarding to him.

"Do you think Ma Jr look upset?" the bald short one asked.

"You think it may have something to do with that short-haired girl?" the ponytail boy replied.

"She did dragged him around the corner. I wonder what she had to say to him," the lone girl of the group engaged to Goku said.

Oi, are you invisible to them or not?

Does it matter? I did say those that are in the arena and beyond are not affected! This match will have their attention soon enough.

You're not making this any easier! Besides, Tien and Goku barely stepped into the arena.

When you start talking to me, everything freeze. If you really want to know, I have my own private window to see everything even when I'm not in a good position to see them. Now, start the match!

Alright already!

I am Ma Jr or Demon Junior for those who don't know what Ma means. There are four contestants remaining for the Martial Arts Tournament. They are Tien vs Goku who are currently walking into the arena and Hero vs myself who is waiting. There are others who lost during the quarter-finals hanging around. Those that win the semi-finals will compete for the champion. I know I will win, so I hope you all are ready to root for me!

Less talking about yourself and more on current match.

I'm getting there!

I heard them saying that they will go all out against each other from the start. This will be an epic battle for me to analyse! Goku should win this match so I could-

You're getting ahead of yourself. You know I rated this for T not M right?

Uh.

-so I could defeat him. They jumped on the arena and faced each other in readied stances. The audience's loud roars are starting to hurt my ears. According to the announcer those two fought against each other in the last tournament resulting in Tien's near victory. Guess we'll see who's the winner this time.

Faintly in the background over the dull sound of the excited crowd, a loud "Begin" was heard.

And they're off! They clashed in the middle with Tien starting the match with a barrage of punches. As far as I could see, none of them are connecting. Goku flipped back and jumped into the air. Tien follows shortly after. How high are they going to go? I saw a brief speck of light and my ears are picking up fists hitting body. Lucky, announcer, he has binoculars! I should-

Chill Junior! They're coming down soon anyway.

How did you know that? I'm sure nobody else besides the announcer knows that!

You forget, private window?

... You got to show me that.

Where was I? Oh, yes, angry at announcer. Can't talk about that now with the sounds of them coming -like C-D said they would- down. They separated near the height of the preliminary room. Goku and Tien-

Why am I calling them by their names?

Makes it easier! Why are you stopping it?

You're the one stopping things! If names were easier, why didn't you put names for those three? I'm sure your readers know who's Krillin, Yamcha, and the Chinese girl are!

Why are you bothered by how I do things? With this rate, the chapter would get long!

Not my fault or problem!

Goku and Tien are doing fancy flips that should belong to a gymnastic stunts not martial arts to end their fall. Both ran towards each other and clashes at different parts of the arena! At the middle, Tien was doing rapid punches where Goku dodged them. The corner near mine was Goku's punches where Tien blocked them! They resort to kicking and alternated with punches. The other parts have at least one or two connected. Tien was successful at landing at least seven blows to Goku's face, chest, and shoulders! Goku had roughly same amount on Tien!

Mm? Ma Jr looked over at the stunned faces of Krillin, Yamcha, and the Chinese girl.

Krillin was the first one to speak. "I barely saw what's happening out there. Their speed is inhuman! From what I could see is that they're almost equal."

"Yes, I agree Krillin," Yamcha said.

"You three could see what's going on out there?" the girl asked in amazement. "I can't see a thing!"

You guys are starting to become less afraid of me?

"Why should we be afraid? We never met you," Krillin replied.

"Besides, Tien talked to Ma Sax. How hard is it to talk to you?" Yamcha asked.

A lot harder if those two tell you! Besides, they're coming to view.

Indeed, they were. Both of them were in a power struggle where everyone who didn't see could.

Weaklings think they got a backbone because this got structured differently. Why I should-!

Focus.

Which I will be doing to them anyway!

Focus!

...

Dangerous author. Back to the fight, Goku leaned backwards to kick the unbalanced Tien straight up in the air. Goku got up while Tien moved out of the air and attacked the unsuspecting back of Goku! Goku saw it coming and leaped over Tien's attack! Not to be the one thrown off, Tien rushed up to the landed Goku and ... found an after image.

From the brief break, I noticed that Tien was more tired than Goku who's grinning like an idiot. Is he enjoying this? Nice to know my future opponent will provide me a challenge! Seems Tien wasn't too impressed. Not fast enough for him. He proceed to demonstrate it ... where we can't see them. Up in the air, I hear Tien amused that Goku can follow him with his eyes, but looking isn't enough to defeat him! Oh? Here's come Goku! He landed on his feet despite the hit and attempted to attack the escaping Tien!

I can see what he meant. Goku followed Tien perfectly with his eyes but was unable to defend himself against the kick! He was going to fall out- no he spin himself back on the arena. What a stupid impossible save. Does he not know air dance yet? Anyway, Tien was slowing down on purpose for observational means and saw Goku's speed hasn't changed. He was sure to win. Not that I want him to! It'll destroy the purpose I came here to!

... You're not going to interrupt me are you?

Only when I'm sure you either going on about things in regard to yourself instead of the match or say things that might come as offensive or graphic.

What! How dare you accuse me of that! Why should I care what the readers think?

But I do! Besides, we're nearly done.

Good, it better be. I'm getting sick of this.

Goku asked Tien if he could take off some clothes. So, with a short break, Goku took off all the dark colored fabric as Tien watched him. Tien was under the assumption that it's due to the heat.

A soft thud was heard.

Based on that sound, I don't think that undershirt was supposed to sound like that. Tien didn't think so either and asked if he could check it out. Goku allowed him and was surprised by the discovery. Krillin came on the arena to carry some of the clothes. It was weighted! Like Ma Sand and I, we all wore weighted clothing for both training and regular lifestyle! Based on Tien's estimation, Goku was carrying 250 pounds or more! Sounds like my weight. Good thing no one knows that Ma Sax carried heavier weights than either of us!

Ma Jr glanced at two people within earshot of him. Yamcha had went over to help carry the rest of the clothes, so it left Hero and the Chinese girl. Neither made any indication that they heard Ma Jr's last statement.

Uh, back to the match, Tien was thrilled to find out Goku would be a much greater challenge meaning a much better test of strength and speed! Seems like Goku was faster than Tien expected for his belt was stolen without him seeing it. Looks like he had a secret weapon that he already used against Ma Sax. Tien put the belt back on and split himself to four. Seems that he doesn't have to worry about Goku doubling up. The point of this weapon was to stop Goku from dodging! I would have been shocked if I haven't see this before.

Did I see this before?

Just go with it. I would check, but I'm very sure you seen this.

Goku was already familiar with the first attack since Ma Sax was in the center and caught the ki balls. Unlike Ma Sax's advantage, Goku had to jump to get out of the way. He couldn't avoid the twelve eyes scanning the sky for him and all four fired eye beams hit Goku. He fell down and barely landed on his feet. Tien was sure that he'll win and tried to convince Goku to forfeit. Goku said otherwise and discovered two flaws. I knew he'll win!

Looks like Tien didn't want to believe this and they're doing the same thing to prove each other wrong! Nothing new at first, and ow! Blinding light! Based on the announcer, Tien used this before and lucky him, those with sun glasses were protected! How many things does he have?! Since my eyes are out of operation at the moment, my ears will provide some insights.

The first flaw Goku said was Tien's eyes were very good making them succumb to blinding light. Due to Tien's reliance on his eyes, he couldn't locate his opponent otherwise. Ok, my vision is coming back to me. Goku was very sure of his win. I agree to him. Mostly because I want to beat him. Anyway, Goku believed that the second flaw he found was fatal. Tien wasn't so quick to believe it or was he hoping Goku wouldn't find out? Based on Goku's attack, it's the latter.

With quick speed, Goku knocked all four Tiens out of the arena securing his victory! Now, I have to secure mine in the next match!

Ma Jr: Whew.

C-D: Nice Job, Junior! Maybe I get you to do that again.

Ma Jr: NO AGAIN! I'm not doing this again!

C-D: If you say so...

A/N: If you readers like the commentary, review me and I might consider it for future chapters after Sax's.

Hey!

If you're lucky, it might not be you doing it!