Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy guys! :D Its finally time to reveal the band name! :D the winning band got 18 PMs and there's a 2nd band who got 15 PMs.
So guys I would love to give credit to Girl With The EagleWings who's band name got 2nd place! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Since you guys liked hers so much I've decided to use it for a competing band name :D Oh and the winning band name is *cue James Bond music* Finite State Of Mind. Oh and sorry for updating late guys D;
And the first place one was created (or taken from a song ;3) from my sister, (COINCIDENCE OMG I WAS LIKE :O OMG) so im gonna give credit to Arianna my twinie~. :D (lol literally we're twin sisters xD)
Ch 8: I'm Speechless
Max's P.O.V.
When second period is finally over I run out of that room so fast I left smoke behind me.
Where the hell are my friends?! They've been totally been AWOL. What the hell?! D:
When I finally get to my locker I put the combination in and pulled the handle.
It didn't open. I put it again. Still didn't open.
Then I started banging on it. "Open you damn piece of-"
"Um, what are you doing to my locker?" This random chick said.
"Its not your locker its mine dumb butt." Ok, I know I wasn't being the most….thoughtful person right now, but can you blame me?
I have no songbook that has songs that I've written back in middle school, MIDDLE SCHOOL that's like a few years ago, my friends are no where to be found like they've dropped off the face of the earth, I'm pretty sure people think I have a mental disorder –who doesn't think that- oh lord, isn't this day just peachy. Note the sarcasm.
Then I took a step to the side and glared at my real locker.
The other one was just being a double ganger. Er, don't all the lockers look the same? Blue-ish, well except for the locker down the hall full of boogers its green. Who owns that locker again? Oh yea, nose-picking Paul, poor kid never heard of a tissue.
I've been here a short while and I've learned all the nicknames for people. Like: Lo-class Lissa, Dumbass Danny, Jerk-off Justin, Nose-picking Paul, and Forever Lazy Luke. (me and my sister sat there coming up with these xD)
" I'm Jennifer Joy, my parents were drunk when they named me, so call me JJ. " She said with a smile.
What is this chick still doing here? Shouldn't she be in class? Shouldn't she be mad for calling her a dumb butt, in kindergarden that made all the other kids cry, why doesn't it work now? What has the world come to?!
"I'm Max."
"I have Spanish next."
"Really? Me too. How come I've never noticed you in my class before."
"Oh its 'cause I transferred out of French because it was to hard, and I already know Spanish so I just thought it would be an easy A.
I said while sidestepping to my locker. I put the combo in and a folded red sheet of paper fell out.
What the hell?
We all know that when a red folded sheet of paper falls out of your messy locker, means an assassin is after your life.
OHHHHHHHHHHH LAWD, I DON'T WANT TO DIE. D;
I gulped and picked it up. I unfolded it and it read 'Come See This Hardcore Band! Saturday, November 5, 10:00pm for a fall concert! Don't miss it!'
I flipped it over and read the address. It was to a club for 21 and Under.
"Is that and assassin note?" JJ asked looking terrified. You see, she gets me.
"No, its like an invitation sort of to see a band called-" I read over the paper again- "Finite State of Mind, pretty cool right?" (AN: WOO! ;3)
"OH-EM-GEE, sounds like fun can I come!?" why did she just sound like Nudge there? o.o
"Ok, it's at 10, you think your mom's going to let you?"
"I don't know maybe. I'll ask her. But what about you?"
"My mom's going on this retreat for her job tomorrow and wont come back until the 10th of this month, so im good, I just need to get past my sister, I'll just give her shoe money and she'll keep quiet."
"Oh ok, I'm so excited!"
-Saturday November 5th, 8:00pm-
"Where are you going?" Ella askes.
"Out. To a rock concert." I know she'll never want to go to a rock concert.
"Ooh can I come?!" My face went black for a moment.
"No."
"Either shoe money or I tell mom."
"Fine." I handed her 40 dollars for shoes.
"Now you better keep your mouth shut or-"
"Max, I'm still going with you." She said with a smirk.
"Whoa, no way! I already gave you shoe money!"
"Ok so if I call mom and tell her where you're going she wont mind right?" she said taking out her phone from her pocket.
She's getting more like me everyday.
"But-Ughhhhhhhh- Fine! You can come, just don't tell mom."
"Oh and I'm dressing you." She said walking over to my closet.
I grabbed her arm. "Whoa, shoe money and letting you come with me and JJ is enough."
"JJ? Ooh Maxie made a new friend."
"Yea, and theres no way your dressing me… and don't call me Maxie!"
"Fine. Atleast make sure you dress nice. Oh and where is the concert?"
"Somewhere just get dressed, im leaving in half an hour"
-5 minutes later-
I looked at myself in the mirror, I was wearing combat boots, dark blue skinny jeans that folded above the ankle, a loose grey-blue tank top, and a leather jacket.
I smiled. "Max you haven't worn an outfit like this in a while have you?" I said talking to myself.
Down in Miami I wore clothes like this all the time. But when we moved here, Ella wanted to make a good impression, so she decided to dress me everyday, don't know why I let her, just got to lazy to bother.
But when I wear these clothes I feel more comfortable, more me, more Max.
Ella knocked on my door. "Hey you ready?" Ella was dressed in skinny jeans that folded at the ankle like mine, white converse, and a red blouse.
"Yea almost let me just put some eyeliner then we can start heading out."
I checked my watch 8:45. It pretty far, so we should leave early if we wanna get there on time, 'cuz were…walking.
I sat down on the floor infront of my full length mirror –my mom got if for me 'cuz my other one kinda broke in the moving truck while driving here-.
"Wait!" Ella yells.
"What?"
"Since you didn't let me dress you I am so putting on your makeup."
"B-but-"
"No buts. Come to my room, it has better lighting."
" I swear Ella I may let you dress me for school but I'm not your walking Barbie doll." I said getting up and walking over to Ella's room across the hall.
"Fine, From now on, you can dress yourself. But im still doing your make-up."
"The make-up let me think about it."
Once in her room I sat down on a chair…..a spinny one. Then I started spinning.
"Max stop acting like a little kid and sit still so we can leave faster."
I stopped. Then Ella started the torture.
She brought this thing that looked like it could chop my fingers off.
"What is that?" I asked trying to back up in my chair.
"Its an eyelash curler now sit still."
Then she started applying eyeliner and gave it a small wing at the end, the way I like it.
Then she put mascara… D;
"No Ella mascaras made of rat poop!"
"So, your blankets made of a plant."
"That's different, its cotton."
"Same thing."
-Leaving Time :D-
I looked at myself in the mirror one final time. I couldn't believe how well Ella did my make-up, I was like a whole different person.
And my hair was actually the way I like it. A messy side bun.
Then I felt my left back pocket vibrate and slipped it out of my pocket.
It was a text from JJ.
(JJ. Max)
Hey Max srry I cant go . I'm stuck babysitting my baby bro. Hope u have a fun time though :D
Its ok, srry bout u stuck babysitting :c would've been really fun if u were there. Either way, good luck with ur baby bro :P
Then I sent a quick text to Fang, haven't really talked to the guy in a while. Like this whole week he's been…avoiding me.
(Fang, Max)
Hey tooth :P
He replied almost instantly.
Haha Maxie. Whats up? U doing anything tonight.
Yea, going to a show with Ella x.x
Lol is it that bad?What type a show is it? :o
A concert actually, got an invitation in my locker.
:o cool, whats the band name?
A band named, Finite State Of Mind. Pretty cool I think.
Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn, that band *-*
What, you know them?
Yea, they go to our school, I hear the lead singer's pretty good looking if u ask me. U know just what all the girls say, I'm not gay or anything.
Then Ella interrupted.
"Lets go Max."
"K, let me just say bye to Fang."
"Oooooooooooooh Max, I didn't know you and Fang were dating!"
"Uh, Ella, we're not, he's just my best friend."
" You mean your, bffl wffl?"
"Um, sure?"
We started walking down the stairs towards the door when I sent Fang a message.
Lol well I gtg tooth, have fun doing…er..whatever ur doing. xP
K, bye Max, I'll know you'll have fun :P
Weird how he'll know if I'll have fun. Is there a possibility that Fang is a fortune teller?
Then I put my phone in my back pocket right after turning it off.
Just in case mom calls, then she'll know its lost and she'll just leave a voicemail.
-Arrival-
When Ella and I finally made it, we had a few minutes to spar.
I'm telling you it was packed by the truck load. So many people I recognized from school and strangers. Is this band even famous?
Everyone yelling out names that I couldn't decipher.
I somehow lost Ella. I pray she doesn't get raped.
Then the lights went out.
A spotlight went on to some guy on the stage. He had blonde hair, and turquoise eyes, he's in my Spanish class. His names Dylan.
"Hey guys are you ready to rock?!" he yelled into the mike.
The crowd erupted in a huge rawr of 'Hell Yea!' or 'F**k Yea!'.
"That's what I was expecting. So give it up for FINITE STAE OF MIND."
The lead singer started his guitar when a spotlight hit him.
And you have know idea who it was.
A cliffy! But I pretty sure you know who it is already xD lol. So please review :D That would make me update a little more faster guys :P
