Hey again everyone!
Chapter One: Revised is now up! I promise that from here on out the differences will be more common and more obvious.
I plan on fixing the story so that its better written, flows better and so that Chel is less OOC. It'll get there eventually! ^^ I promise.
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Warnings: Mild violence and guy love. Don't like, don't read.
Disclaimer: Nothing has changed from 5 minutes ago. I still own nothing.
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Chapter One: Miguel's Sacrifice
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"TULIO!"
"CHEL!" Tulio yelled, his voice thick with fear.
Miguel stared sadly at the pain and anguish in his friend's sapphire eyes as Tzekelkan's stone monster closed in on Chel. The poor blonde's heart broke at the look of helplessness and defeat on the dark haired man's face.
Because Tulio was never helpless. Even in the worst situations he always had a plan. But there he was, with no plan and no way to save the woman he loved. And it killed Miguel to him like this.
The blonde Spaniard knew that look of love and utter adoration he'd been seeing on his partner's face recently wasn't for him. Nor would it ever be. It was directed at her. That erotic, fun-loving girl who had swept through their lives like a hurricane, stealing Tulio's heart and crushing Miguel's in the process.
But he couldn't be mad at her…It wasn't her fault that she was what Tulio wanted, what Tulio needed. And Miguel just didn't fit into the equation that was Tulio and Chel.
Emerald eyes filled with harsh determination and suddenly without warning the blonde sprinted towards the stone behemoth. Just as the jaguar moved to strike the helpless Chel, Miguel threw himself onto its boulder like head, distracting it from its target.
"M-Miguel!" Tulio yelled desperately. "What are you doing?"
Miguel gripped the creatures head tightly as it thrashed around, attempting to dislodge him. Even above the living statue's snarls he could hear the shock and fear in his partner's voice.
"Never mind that!" The shorter man yelled back, struggling to keep his hold on the smoothly carved rock of the jaguar. "Just hurry and get Chel and yourself out of here!"
Suddenly the cat reached up with a huge paw to attempt to dislodge Miguel from its stony face.
The blonde cried out in pain as its long sharp claws caught his back, rending his flesh and causing him to kick out directly into the monster's glowing green eye. The glass cracked under his foot and the enormous creature reared back with a roar of pain. The blonde Spaniard was thrown from his perch on the jaguar's head high into the air above the city of Eldorado.
Flying through the star spattered sky, Miguel stared down at the city that had changed his life.
A strange, eerie calm settled over him despite the blood flowing down his back.
He couldn't even find it within himself to care as gravity took affect and his body began to fall. Instead a small smile spread across his face and he closed his emerald eyes. His last thoughts about his friend, his partner, his…Tulio…
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Okay I know that's like the shortest chapter ever. But I couldn't think of much to add to the chapter. Like with the changes, the length of the chapters will get better as I go as well.
So read and review! *Button-y eyes* Do it.