Finally here's the second chapter, please tell me what you think. Rate and say where you think I can improve.
Chapter 2 - The Return of Haruka, A Frightful Reunion
Takayuki has taken Mitsuki on her first holiday away to Barbados. In the first night of their stay, Takayuki has done all he could to make Mitsuki feel like he loved her because she is still uncertain of his feelings for her. The reason for this, mainly is because of how difficult it was for Takayuki cutting Haruka out of his life but little does he know, she will return.
Takayuki and Mitsuki are lying in bed next to each other, thinking about what they will do for the rest of their time together.
""Takayuki, what would you like to do for the rest of this holiday?""
Mitsuki moved in closer as she felt increasingly warm in Takayuki's presece. She was totally imfatuated by him and was increasingly worried that he still had affections for Haruka.
""Why don't you say we chill out, go to the beach or something like that""
""Do you know a good spot where we can go?""
""Yeah we can stay there till late and watch the sun go down""
""Together""
""Yes that is exactly what I was thinking""
""Please tell me this will be forever Takayuki. I love you and I want to be with you for the rest of my life""
""Aw that's so sweet Mitsuki. I never knew that you felt this way about me, I always wanted to tell you the same, but""
""But what, Takayuki tell me that there is nothing better. Please tell me that we can be together. I want to have kids with you, I want them to be as caring and as loving as you?""
""No it's not that. I wanted us to settle down now, I know that one day we will be parents. We should enjoy our time together while we can. I will work extra hard to support our family""
Takayuki remained in Mitsuki for a few more minutes. He knew that if Mitsuki became pregnant, he would never be able to return to Haruka so Takayuki was willing to take that chance to show their love.
Little did Takayuki know however that Haruka had booked a week also in Barbados but in a different hotel, a few miles down the road. Haruka went for a relaxing holiday with her younger sister Akane and Akane's now boyfriend Toshimori.
Haruka is lying there on the beach wearing a light blue bikini covered in navy flowers on the sides of the clamps. Her sister Akane was sitting there beside her in a sparkling ruby bikini with plain black bottoms, she was with Toshiomori making a sandcastle. Suddenly Haruka started to cry thinking of Takayuki.
""Is everything alright sis?""
""Yes it's just. Takayuki is here I know it?""
""Is he seriously how do you know?""
""I feel it. I'm a girl, I have instincts and I know these things. He is here with Mitsuki and I can only imagine what they are doing""
""Look I am very sorry for what happened. There are plenty more Fish in the sea, surely you will meet someone else""
""I don't think so. No one has ever cared for me the way that Takayuki did. He came to visit me every day while I was in hospital. He didn't even have to, because he was so busy studying for his exams""
""The world is a big place, Haruka. There has got to be someone just as nice as Takayuki, even nicer""
""I wouldn't count on it""
So a few miles down the road we see Takayuki and Mitsuki having breakfast in a local restaurant.
Takayuki is dressed in a casual red shirt with a collar and a pair of long sporty white shorts. Mitsuki was wearing a white sleeveless top and a long dark grey skirt that went down to her toes.
Takayuki is eating a full breakfast with baked beans, fried egg, 2 sausages and 2 hash browns. Mitsuki on the other hand is helping herself to a bowl of corn flakes.
""Look I know that I spent a lot of time with Haruka but I felt under so much pressure from her parents. I felt very guilty over what happened to her and I just wanted to put that to the back of my mind, still I couldn't forget it. I tried everything because all I wanted was to forget the past and enjoy my time with you. The only way I knew that I could truly let go of the past and let go of Haruka was if I helped her to get through that period""
""But why did you want to be there with Haruka while she was unwell. She still had Akane, you didn't have to be there with Haruka""
""Look I wanted it just to be a friendly thing but Haruka put me under so much pressure because she was so forward""
""What do you mean, she put you under pressure"" Mitsuki slowly became mor angry at Takayuki. She continued ""First you said it was her parents that put you under pressure and now it was Haruka herself, please tell me the truth Takayuki""
Takayuki began to cry and he felt so embarassed that the two of them were acting like this out in public.
""Please can we drop this. This is not the right place""
""What do you mean it is not the right place? This holiday was meant to be for me and you no one else""
""But Mitsuki I love you, please don't fight with me in public. Maybe when we go to the beach we can find a spot where we can be alone and talk about this when no one else can listen in""
Soon after Mitsuki started the fight, both herself and Takayuki had finished their breakfast. Takayuki however was holding back the tears. He could not come to terms with the fact Mitsuki doubted his love for him and although he had not seen Haruka in years, she was still on his mind.
When they reached the beach, it was a quiet day and no one else was there. Takayuki and Mitsuki spent a few minutes in the sea splashing around and kissing, hugging and sunbathing on the beach. Mitsuki was wearing a plain black bikini and Takayuki was wearing silver swimming trunks covered with images of Sharks.
""Hey, Mitsuki you feeling better now?""
""You seem immobolized. Does this mean that we are in love?""
""We are and always will be. I love you Mitsuki, forever and always""
""You really did all this for me?""
""Yes I booked this holiday away just so we could be together, the two of us. I would be prepared to tell Haruka that I will never go out with her anymore, if I did see her again""
""So it will never be, for you and Haruka again?""
""Hu?""
""Could you promise me that you would swear on your life. Swear yor love for me""
""I already have, I left Haruka ages ago. I told her we can never be together again""
Takayuki placed his whole body all over Mitsuki. He smuddered the woman that he had given so much to be with. Kissing all over her lips and neck, Takayuki wanted to show Mitsuki she was the one.
""Do you really care this much for me, Takayuki?""
""Absolutely""
Mitsui felt herself loosen as Takayuki held her close. He slipped an arm down the side of Mitsuki's back. Going underneath her shirt, Takayuki massaged all over her back and prodded his tongue in and out of her mouth. Mitsuki felt Takayuki breathing all inside, her tonsils felt warm and Mitsuki suddenly became dehyrdrated. Takayuki just took her breath away with his physical and emotional gestures.
""This is what you want isn't it?""
""Yes it's all I want Takayuki and nothing more. I want nothing less than your best""
""I want it to be too""
All of a sudden Haruka approached the pair. Now wearing a long red dress and pigtails in her hair, Haruka spoke out.
""Takayuki is that you?""
""H...Haruka""
""I know what you're thinking, and everything is exactly as it seems?""
""So do you mean its you and Mitsuki""
""I'm very sorry Haruka. This is the way it has been and this is how it always will be""
Haruka began to cry. She could not believe that after all the time, Takayuki had devoted to her, Mitsuki was still the one.
Takayuki continued ""I know that we once had something going, but it is all over now. I loved you Haruka but I could not cope with the grief when you went into that hospital. The dread was killing me, I knew it was all my fault but Mitsuki changed my whole world around. I could not stand being single for the three years yu weren't in my life. Sad thing is, when you awoke...""
Mitsuki and Haruka paused as the two awaited to hear Takayuki's response.
Takayuki finished ""When you awoke, I had gotten over the feelings we had for one another. I had grown so close to Mitsuki, I just... I could never feel the same way again because Mitsuki had given me so much hope. To get on with my life, to be myself, just to have a future. At that point my feelings for Mitsuki were stronger than the feelings I had for you and I wanted to just be friends""
Mitsuki's heart melted. She did not believe Takayuki had so much to give and she couldn't believe he had lost all affectins for Haruka. It was a feeling of utter happiness but Haruka's feelings were all the opposite.
The only question remains, how will Takayuki deal with Haruka's heartbreak? He knows how desperately she wanted to be with him, but Takayuki does not feel that way anymore. Also is Mitsuki finally convinced or is there still feelings of doubt. A moment that can never be taken back, awaits...
