Hello to my amazing Readers, **DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER IF YOU DON'T WANT SPOILERS FOR THE END OF THE MANGA!**
The last chapter of this was quite gutt wrenching for me to write. I had been dreading it and dragging my feet about doing it. I only hope I did the emotional dynamic justice.
Now I'm not just waxing poetic for any reason but because I have a question for you guys. Well, more than one, so please forgive me and help me out. I'll be humbly in your debt for ever ;) .
#1. Does the piece seem complete now? Meaning does it feel complete, does it go along with the end of the manga nicely? Meaning, should I just end it here.
#2. If you feel it's incomplete, or almost complete should I write his POV(the one I've invented) for the conversation they have the next morning, like when he gives her the photo, ect? If you don't know what I'm talking about and I've just spoiled it for you, I'm sorry, but I did warn you.
#3. Should I keep writing this as a companion piece to the new ones that are coming out? Would you all like to read that, when Naru returns and all that? It will be slow but I would update as I can find/read the English translations.
#4. Should I go back and write some POV's for minor scenes and/or invent new ones-for example and I may or may not do these- for an invented scene write about the first time Naru tried Mai's tea, or a minor one would be like when she got excited and exclaimed when he came back to the house during the doll house case, or woke up to her face when he was sleeping in the van during her first case. Stuff like that.
Thank you all in advance for your feedback. It's invaluable to me. Also, thank you for making me feel talented and interesting over the past few months. The fact that others seem to even remotely enjoy the things i write brings such joy to me. You all have no idea who much I treasure every review and how important it is to me that you take even a moment to share with me.
Thank you all and I'm excited to see what you all have to say,
Happy Holidays!
-JC
