TY for the reviews guys, you have no idea how this made my day.

Let me explain.

I had 2 homework overdue, my gym log and my story (Not fanfiction, it was a story for ELA (English)) It was due today, but i didn't finish my story and i forgot my gym log. SO i had to endure both teachers that keep nagging at me. "why isn;t it here" "You better bring it tomorrow" "Why are my students so forgetful" "It isn't hard to bring a piece of paper"

And so on, GRRR. So dam annoying. So i went home, ate, and got on the PC, typed the story from 4pm to 7:10 pm and then, i checked my mail to see. A REVIEW. My sore neck/back got better reading it =.= TY SO MuCH NarutoXXXGaara u made my day.

Review : Nice!pls try to make it longer?

Yes i will make it longer and add some battles and so one. U will notice my ch. 4 is longer. I plan to make it much longer. OFC my favourite review so far is this one.

"In the back of my mind I can hear my mother telling me not to read this but its damn good that I can't help myself...thank you sooo much for putting this out there" BY The Un of Uncommen.

No TY for making my day as well. Since I still have what. Around 4 hours till i go to bed, I 'm going to make a chapter. Not long sadly, or maybe DONT know. But please injoy this and TYVM. This is my first Jiraya X naruto I've done and read. ( i read this too ) and i noticed, ITS THE ONLY ONE OUT THERE O.O I know he's like 50 but still. THEY SO MUCH.

So read. And review, and comment, and tell me how good it is :P. SO ENJOY THE SMUT (IF i add in this chapter that is) AND REVIEW MY PREVY REVIEW ( unless you don;t like to be called that, i know I don't. I'M NOT REALLY. I think of animes doing this not REAL PPL. I found that...creepy)

LET IT BEGIN.

NOW

...NOW

...I SAID NOT PPL

Ok...why isn't this working. (Hits the PC)

OH THERE WE GO

Naruto shifted too much when he sat, it hurt, and it wasn't his fault.

"Here" Prevy Sage tossed something to him. He caught it, and stared. They were pills, quite big ones. He took one out, and when he was about to put in his mouth Jiraya stopped him. "Don't swallow it, it's much to numb your pain, and it goes in the other end" He said.

"..." Naruto didn't get it at first but understood quickly. He turned red. "I-I don't want it"

"I'll put it on for you then"

"Huh!" The pill was taken from his and, he was pushed on the ground. He struggled under his grip.

"Naruto" Jiraya said, as if warning him or was he teasing? Naruto closed his mouth tightly and let him do it for him. He went on his knees and closed his eyes. He's grown to his company now, he has helped him at times, but...He always took it back in doing something perverted.

Jiraya, pulled down his pant, and then his underwear. He nudged his sore hole, gaining a whimper in return.

"I'm not going to hurt you Naruto" He pushed in the big pill. Naruto shivered and jolted. Jiraya took a pen, and pushed it in with the pill, just to get the pill deeper. The pill wasn't much better than the pen, by thickness. Once he thought it was deep enough he pulled the pen out. He was going to dress him, when he saw the pill returning out. "Naruto, don't close up, if you do it's just going to pop it back out"

"I-I can't" Jiraya thought for a second before pushing his finger in, pushing the pill back in. Naruto gasped at the thinker object that entered him. He wincing and moaned in pain. His member dipped with pre-cum. Though Jiraya knew this, he didn't touch him, making Naruto question why.

"I'll just have to wait till it melts I guess" He said. Naruto whimpered, and shivered while panting. He just wanted to be touched, he just wanted to come. H-hurry.

"Naruto..." He turned his head, despite the loss of energy he was feeling. Jiraya kissed him gently.

"Nn..." Naruto moaned as the finger turned and moved back and forth slowly. He pulled away.

"P-p-please" Naruto plead, he wanted to come, and he really wants to feel the sensation again.

"No Naruto, you've already came so much the other day. It won't be a good idea to come more. At least a week before starting to come again. No, Naruto didn't want to hear that, he just wanted to be touched.

Naruto rose his hand wrapped it around his member, he began to pump hard.

"Aah...NN...!" The feeling was unbelievable, so good. Suddenly his hand was taken away from him.

"Guess I have no choice but to use that" His finger still moving slowing in him. He grabbed his bag with his free hand. He took something out. Naruto wasn't she what it was. He pulled his finger out. He felt something on his member, like leather or something like that. Then he felt something small enter his dick hole. Not deep just a bit. His finger returned in his hole and moved. He looked down on his member. It was a strap. He couldn't come even if he felt pleasure, even when he wanted too, he couldn't. It held it back.

His head was on the ground, his hands to the side, reaching to hold something. He whimpered, and begged. But his pleading was declined. Finally after Jiraya thought the pill was desolved and melted and dressed Naruto, still leaving the strap on. Knowing well enough if he pulled it off, he'd come a lot, or he'd pump himself. He pulled him in his lap, so he wouldn't do anything.

He felt a bit bad for him, he was shaking, and tears ran down his cheeks, he was torturing him, but it's better for him this way. Naruto once in awhile would please let him come, or at least remove the strap.

"Naruto, I said no, it was a mistake that I will never do again of leaving the vibrator that long. I forgot about it" Jiraya knew, the mistake would happen again, and he knew by night fall he'd have to remove that strap or else Naruto wouldn't be able to sleep properly. "Alright I'll take it off" He unzipped his pant, and opened the strapped, taking it off, not a second later, Naruto came hard. Moaning loudly, arching his neck. Jiraya signed, clean it up and laid him down. He was panting, and properly dizzy. "Is the pill working?"

"Yeah"

"No more coming till the weeks up, understood, if I find out you did it somewhere, you're going to wish you didn't come with me" Though it might have sound like a threat, but it was side in a concerned voice. Jiraya, as his God-Father, having his parents gone and his other relatives died, it's his duty to take care of him. His way that is. And coming that much in just 3 days is not a good thing. He'll have to keep an eye on him, but it shouldn't be hard to find any clues of him doing it, while his ninja skills.

Naruto had fallen asleep by now, giving Jiraya the whole day to do nothing. Maybe he should sleep; he'll have to get Naruto in more control. He lay down and slept.

...

"Prevy sage, mail, mail" He got up, after while, really, after he heard 'fan-mail'. He began to read.

Dear Jiraya

I love your work; you're so amazing, smart and funny, sexy and detailed. Wonderful, I'm looking forward to getting your autograph soon. I bought it the moment it was released; I've already finished reading it.

"HAHAA" he laughed. "Of course you'd love it." He looked down to who was his #1 fan, and his face froze.

Kakashi Hatake

His sweat drop, he expected it to be a girl, but he shouldn't have thought a guy wouldn't read it. He looked up to except Naruto there, but he wasn't there. He looked around, then in each room. He wasn't found. He walked out.

"Naruto!"

"Eh! I'm in the hot spring, d-d-don't come...nnn" The last part was a little faint, but he wasn't sure if it's what he thought he heard. He didn't go like he wanted too. He waiting to see how long he'd stay in there, and see how he is like when he gets out.

...

After what felt like ten to twenty minutes, he saw him walk in, a bit tired and flushed.

"Alright, I'm going to take a little bath" He said and left, without getting new cloth he entered. He didn't come for a bath; he came to see any hints of him jerking off. He looked on each rock, on the floor, on the handles, till something caught his eyes. There was a towel in the dirty basket. He picked it up, it was sticky, and it looked like he did it more than once to have this about.

"Naruto..." He didn't really have an idea to what he'd do to him. Lock him up, or will he use the strap again but lock it, and maybe even go as far as putting a seal on it. So he wouldn't be able to do anything at all. He sat down and thought this through. Till he admitted it was a good idea and punishment, and perhaps he'd learn to be in control over pleasure. He entered the living room where he saw Naruto eating ramen, waiting till he finished he snatched up and dumped him on the bed.

"Huh? What are you doing pervy sage?" He tied his hand to the bed board, and his legs to the bottom bed board.

"I told you not to do it, yet you do it the next day"

"Wait...I...I didn't
"Don't even try" He looked down in shame.

"I...I'm sorry" His mentor slid down his pant, and tied the strap on, and added the seal; he thought some something else, the vibrator. He smiled evilly. He was going to torture him till he thought it was enough and let him go. He placed it in him, and added a seal on it, so he wouldn't take it off. Next turned it on, and then dress him up and untied him. He tried to take it off, it didn't work, and the seal bounded him to them till Jiraya unseals it. He saw his mentor walk away. And he regretted what he did already.

...

By night fall, he had increased it only by a level, he could come, and if he could he would of a huge puddle of it in his pant. He fell on his knees when Jiraya was going to bed. His eyes pour tears, his nose was runny, his saliva tingled everywhere around his chin, and his face was so red. Jiraya looked at him.

"Did you learn your lesson?" Naruto nodded, pleadingly. "You won't do it again if I tell you not too?" He nodded again. He got up and went over to him, lifting him up. He felt hurt for doing this to him. He held his head and pushed it on his chest in a hug. His free hand slid his pant on the flour. Turned the vibrator off, and took it out. He unseals the strap too, and took it off, he came hard, and it kept coming, he couldn't stop coming. Jiraya only looked at his expression of shame, pain, regret-ness and pleasure. At least he learns his lesson, is what kept coming in Jiraya's mind. He soothed Naruto to sleep, rubbing his back and other places to sooth him as he fell asleep.

I made these longer 2000+ words. Review plz and tell me how it is. I wasn't planning to do this, but thanks to the review i got it made me want to do it anyways. I had a bad day but reviews turn it around. So ty very much and review to make me happier and update faster. :D REVIEW BB